The Fall - Chapter 15
Added 2017-11-05 17:32:56 +0000 UTCHere were are with yet another installment of The Fall.
Chapter 15 available for download.
Have fun people!
Comments
I know, that's why I said 'imagination', dude. I'd meant it more of revenge 'for Rin and Saber' rather than himself. A guy who lives a life of almost zero accountability for himself isn't the type to go edgelord for something done to him. This Shirou would probably cuck out 'because it makes them happy and they'd be in danger because of me', disregarding the fact he's in danger because of them, and also if he wasn't aware they'd been manipulated on an instinctual level.
Loves2Spooge
2017-12-09 19:09:42 +0000 UTCRevenge? Shirou? The man without pride who can't harm anyone other than to protect some else?... Yeah, not happening.
IchaIchaSennin
2017-12-09 18:14:16 +0000 UTCKnow it's another post but damn, I just listened to this song by Matt Mason called 'E' and in similar contexts, I could see you making the latter part of this story, or even a spin-off of this story, into one helluva revenge fic for Shirou. Imagining him finding out Rin and Saber's betrayal even after what he's done for them because of them and busting out UBW on the Clock Tower and Bathomeloi and his negative emotions along with Saber's betrayal corrupting Excalibur into Excalibur Mordred (doesn't make canon sense, but hey, fanfic) or better, bringing out Clarent against Saber while he steadily turns into Avenger Shirou. Oh my god, it's getting me harder than Adamantium. Why do you inspire my imagination so much, Icha?
Loves2Spooge
2017-12-09 02:30:18 +0000 UTCSurprised Zelretch aint made an appearance yet even for the sake of trolling her, or maybe he is behind scenes, torturing poor Shirou with portals to force him to view what Rin has been up to while giving unwanted commentary like Jim Ross of WWE. 'Bawh God, he's tearing her in half, Shirou!' lol
Loves2Spooge
2017-12-02 00:44:50 +0000 UTCAh. Well, I shall just pretend that Grey is off being sluttified elsewhere, then. Cheers.
Memememe
2017-11-16 19:33:57 +0000 UTCNone, really. Her character is inconsequential to these events.
IchaIchaSennin
2017-11-16 19:13:31 +0000 UTCHm. Just a thought, but what would happen if Grey, the Saberface that is El-Melloiโs righthand woman, was around?
Memememe
2017-11-16 13:20:41 +0000 UTCRin is still working on that angle, though the actual resolution of the issue with Shirou is more relegated to the various endings (Bad, True, Good) and several epilogues.
IchaIchaSennin
2017-11-06 15:59:22 +0000 UTCWhile I love the part were fat guy just went "So if you wanna Saber? Because you can count on me." I hope to seen a actual progression to the plot, like what has Rin been doing outside of fucking everything. Is she getting any traction with her plan to remove Shirou's 'kidnap on sight' issue. Because currently if feels as if nothing is working or Rin's action isn't getting any movement with her plan at all or at the very least it's not being shown. Hopefully we get more nasu males involved in the action instead of some randoms that will inevitably forgotten, and not plot relevant. At this point we only have the fat guy and male MC as the plot relevant 'guys' of the story.
Eternity Smut
2017-11-06 15:52:20 +0000 UTCAbsolutely. Should have two chapters done in about a week.
IchaIchaSennin
2017-11-06 11:07:08 +0000 UTCWill gamer be updated this month?
Monstermash
2017-11-06 10:40:55 +0000 UTCoh man till the end of December huh? ah well they do say patience is a virtue
jmspikey
2017-11-05 21:12:23 +0000 UTCHow many chapters you think?
IgnisHeart
2017-11-05 20:24:08 +0000 UTCGod, so long. I'm going to go nuts waiting. Can't wait :)
IgnisHeart
2017-11-05 20:23:44 +0000 UTCShota to PLOT hahaha.
Eternity Smut
2017-11-05 18:12:04 +0000 UTCChapter 16 and 17 are going to be released either by the end of December or the beginning of January. My primary focus right now is Gamer Night. Strangely enough, plot driven stories are easier to write for me than smut focused ones. Crazy, right?
IchaIchaSennin
2017-11-05 17:50:14 +0000 UTCNice plot progression. When do you think we'll see chapter 16?
IgnisHeart
2017-11-05 17:46:45 +0000 UTC
