Gamer Night - Chapter 20
Added 2018-02-18 21:52:39 +0000 UTCAlright, here we are with the second chapter of this month's update.
Sadly it's a bit shorter than I would have liked it, but adding more words for the sake of adding more words would have just clogged the story, so I didn't.
However as compensation. next month I will write a short piece about Irisviel's Bad End that will go along with the image I commissioned.
Anyway, enjoy.
Comments
May I ask what your opinion is on having Minori Rokujou from Maken-Ki be the principal of one of the schools in Gamer Night or one of your future stories?
2Lazy2Name
2018-02-27 03:22:36 +0000 UTCAre Rin and Sakura also older than Shirou in this iteration? Poor Sakura will think she's *really* messed up for having feelings for a kid several years her junior. Shirou is still planning on jumping straight to High school?
Johny5
2018-02-27 00:17:41 +0000 UTC@2Lazy2Name: Yes I did, but there's already plenty of characters from other series as it is. If I added more, the Fate aspect would have suffered. Besides, I intend to write a Fate/DxD crossover as soon as I finish with Gamer Night or The Fall.
IchaIchaSennin
2018-02-25 13:14:36 +0000 UTCHave you thought about including any of the beauties from shows like Highschool DxD, Maken-Ki, or Testament of Sister New Devil (and many more)? Sorry if this is asking for too much, there are just so many sexy women out there in the world of anime...
2Lazy2Name
2018-02-25 13:12:03 +0000 UTCShe's a Magus here.
IchaIchaSennin
2018-02-24 22:43:27 +0000 UTC*gets shot*
Eternity Smut
2018-02-24 22:38:25 +0000 UTCShe's an alien. Must be a TYPE.
Eternity Smut
2018-02-24 22:38:14 +0000 UTCThose are both interesting characters but the "nurse" in this story is going to be Ryouko Mikado from the To Love Ru series.
IchaIchaSennin
2018-02-24 22:21:29 +0000 UTCI just had an Idea, Maybe you could Have Unohana Retsu (BLEACH) as either A school Nurse or The Healer for the Soul Society. You could also have Shizuka Marikawa (HOTD) as the school Nurse.
Shirou Emiya
2018-02-24 22:11:12 +0000 UTCHere lies Fujimura Taiga, scissored into oblivion :D
Derek58
2018-02-19 10:26:03 +0000 UTCNice! Great to see that level of competency on Taiga's part. After all, she's really, really good when it just comes down to just raw skill... I'm just glad she was able to match Saeko before she started using the secret techniques of the Busujima style. Her impressing Saeko that much was vital in a lot of ways... but most importantly is getting Saeko's respect like that. She may be Saeko's "toy" now, but at least since there's respect there, and since Saeko acknowledged the genuineness of her character and feelings for Shirou, at least she won't break him like she considered in the previous chapter. Good job.
Jek
2018-02-19 01:45:45 +0000 UTCOne problem I noticed was near the start you described Saeko's hair as raven. I loved the fight though. It's very refreshing to see Taiga get fleshed out more than any other stories I've read.
Loves2Spooge
2018-02-19 00:01:28 +0000 UTCNice. Actually has something to make her a capable fighter.
Kevin Ramos
2018-02-18 22:12:33 +0000 UTCHahahaha I was joking about Tora-Shinai! Yes!
SpectralTime
2018-02-18 22:08:31 +0000 UTC