The Fall - Chapter 21
Added 2018-04-04 20:45:36 +0000 UTCAlright, here it is.
I'm not really happy with this chapter, largely because it's mostly transitional and with no smut to speak of.
However if you like mind control there is plenty of it.
Anyway, I hope you enjoy it.
Comments
When will the bad end chapter for gamer night be coming out? I hope its soon.
Shirou Emiya
2018-04-11 14:41:32 +0000 UTCDidn't expect it but this chapter was very fulfilling. The way write Saber rationalising to herself was very good. Keep it up!
Random Guy
2018-04-07 10:23:42 +0000 UTCI'll admit, reading about Artoria is currently more fun than reading about Rin. Both because reading about someone falling is more interesting than someone who's fallen and because, as a king, she has further (farther?) to fall
TheSinful
2018-04-06 22:28:03 +0000 UTCWill we get a smut scean with Artoria in her more lithe form? If so then making TIToria end game is fine.
Shadowsprinkles
2018-04-06 21:43:04 +0000 UTCHopefully we shift back to Rin later 20 was just pure cockblock. Porn star saber is weird to imagine. Saber in a Pornstar Class container. Rin. Clocktower dick slave on one side. High class courtesan on the evening. Maximum gold digging mode.
Eternity Smut
2018-04-06 04:51:39 +0000 UTCshe becoming a por star would certainly go nicely with Rin becoming a stripper
lostguy12
2018-04-05 21:21:44 +0000 UTCwell that's gonna make wining the art polls harder on The Fall fans.
jmspikey
2018-04-05 12:05:59 +0000 UTCThat's your prerogative, of course. Thanks for following me until now.
IchaIchaSennin
2018-04-05 11:26:37 +0000 UTCI’m out. I loathe the Titorias so much that the idea of them and their knockers in anything makes me physically ill (even smutfic about sexual corruption). They’re a shitty design that was created out of laziness and fan service than out of anything actually interesting. Good luck with your endeavors. I’ll not let the door hit me on my way out.
Memememe
2018-04-05 11:17:18 +0000 UTCSorry to hear that, I hope whatever issues he's having gets resolved swiftly with no further difficult situations popping up for him.
LordMarksman
2018-04-05 07:54:10 +0000 UTCMy friend opted out. Looks like he's having troubles in RL
IchaIchaSennin
2018-04-05 05:36:48 +0000 UTCwell lets be honest she created for that purpose if the influx of hentai involving her is to go by. On a somewhat related note whatever happened to that Deluxe version of chapter 19.
jmspikey
2018-04-05 05:35:52 +0000 UTCSorry. TITturia is going to be a thing. It's an end story scenario though.
IchaIchaSennin
2018-04-05 05:27:31 +0000 UTCSame. I like the concept behind her, a version of Artoria who grew older and more mature, but her design just doesn't work for me. That said fav is still Mysterious Heroine X.
jmspikey
2018-04-05 05:16:50 +0000 UTCOh god no. Keep the fucking Tittituria design out of this.
Memememe
2018-04-05 04:59:52 +0000 UTCA more adult like Saber eh well i suppose as long as its not to the extend of her Lancer version then i am good (my god those breasts) that being said lots of good set ups for some good scenes in the next 2 chapters.
jmspikey
2018-04-05 04:11:47 +0000 UTCTo each their own my friend, personally I prefer her super voluptuous form if only for the SHOCK factor Shirou would have no doubt seeing it:) Though I like Saber regardless though:)
LordMarksman
2018-04-05 03:07:42 +0000 UTCHonestly I find Sabers lithness supper attractive and hope she doesnt lose it, her body can develop but her “obtaining” her adult body would kind ruin it for me...adds to the sex dynamic ya see?
Shadowsprinkles
2018-04-05 02:11:39 +0000 UTCThis chapter really wets the appetite and if I thought the last cliffhanger was bad between just days of waiting then waiting till the end of this month is even worse lol. Still we have plenty to look forward too in what Rin is about to go through in last chapter and Saber getting mindfcvked in this chapter. Especially that bit in the end, considering what it is implying I can't help but think we will soon see Saber in her fully glamorous sexy adult body which would be sinfully delicious. It's also possible she would take interest in the porn industry and become a rising star considering her interest. If that is the case considering her charisma she would be IMMENSELY popular. Of course that's all just guesswork still it's hard to say which one I look forward to more damn... I want the end of the month to come quickly already! Still thanks for the treat IchaIchaSennin:)
LordMarksman
2018-04-05 00:14:01 +0000 UTCDo you promise that this build up will be worth it? Im really looking foward to some saber smut.
Shadowsprinkles
2018-04-04 21:52:38 +0000 UTC
