The Fall - Chapter 29
Added 2018-08-25 13:21:32 +0000 UTCTook a bit longer than expected because I had to take a break and let the concepts in this chapter rest before I finalized it, but I did not waste any time.
I've already put down 2k words of Gamer Night, which means that I'm not too far behind on my schedule.
However, I must warn that catching up with the backlog will probably take a few more days than expected, but not many.
Anyhow, enjoy!
Comments
Awesome chapter, man! Good call on Saber getting it on with an unattractive guy - great way to reinforce she values the sex more than the man. Also, and sorry if I come off as demanding, when do you think the contest for guest writer on The Fall will be held?
Eric Sonn
2018-08-28 23:17:45 +0000 UTCTake your time in whatever you do, best not to rush anything even if there's a set schedule. Just happy updates for good stories pop up every now and then ;) In the meantime, it's fun imaging random scenarios Shirou's getting into with that new contract lol
Zax
2018-08-26 06:58:01 +0000 UTCMaybe, but it fits Saber better. A knight doesn't ask for reward.
IchaIchaSennin
2018-08-25 14:26:17 +0000 UTCIt did not fit into the chapter, neither by length nor by theme. It felt better leaving it separated.
IchaIchaSennin
2018-08-25 14:19:48 +0000 UTCAnother good chapter but I have to wonder if the lack of rin was due to time constraints or not fitting in the chapter. Also, I'm really looking forward to the next two chapters so please update soon! XD
IgnisHeart
2018-08-25 14:14:48 +0000 UTC*Opens and then closes mouth before wandering off*
OmegaS
2018-08-25 14:11:06 +0000 UTCSomehow Saber having sex for free seems more degrading than Rin charging for it since at least Rin places monetary value on her body.
jmspikey
2018-08-25 14:05:34 +0000 UTC
