The Fall - Chapter 30
Added 2018-09-12 19:33:33 +0000 UTCYep. It's here. You've been waiting for it and now you have it.
I'm already working on the next chapter too. When it's going to be published you ask? I dunno right now. In a week maybe.
I'll keep you posted. For the time being, have a good read.
See ya!
Comments
Her thought process is a lot more corrupted in this one. You can see her thought process on the role of women and a king morphing
Styg Skye
2018-09-13 17:29:35 +0000 UTCIsn't the start of this chapter the end of 29? From the start with Saber asking about the dumbster until she sleeps it looks like its the same thing
GreekGuy
2018-09-13 08:35:43 +0000 UTCRin mentioned that she should have started doing this in high school...It's better late than never is it? I mean she could easily pass for a junior or a senior student. Her and Saber...they're short girls and the place they're at tend to have a higher average height. XD Anyway take some days off writing man.
Eternity Smut
2018-09-13 02:46:06 +0000 UTCI love the story so far, one small thing I'd like to see more of is the body modification that the spell works during the night. Thought that was really hot, just a mention here and there would be enough ;)
robin85
2018-09-13 01:13:11 +0000 UTClol, I had messaged Icha about a funny idea, whether it be someone making a spin-off story or this being a far future side-arc or something of The Fall, that being that Zelretch has locked away a humanoid TYPE who's content listening to music. Rin finds out and basically wants to fuck it for the Ultimate experience, pun intended. She even drags Artoria into the mess. Only thing is that they can't see any obvious genitals and don't know how to even get it excited, nor does it even know how Humans mate. The two women spend more time trying to teach it the Humans' 'Birds and the Bees' with astronomical results of failure, until then, eventually, they will succeed because this is The Fall universe. I haven't gotten a reply back though.
Loves2Spooge
2018-09-12 22:24:25 +0000 UTCThrowing magecraft away and magic is no brainer for Rin. She talks about possibilities she has been but pursing but the second magic will grant her even more possibilities. Places that should be impossible, thing's that can't be acquired or experienced in this world. Can't really find dragon dicks in this state world can't she lol? She should study magic for some impossible fucks that it can give her. Futa Saber doesn't count.
Eternity Smut
2018-09-12 20:56:26 +0000 UTCHmm I can a "Bad Ending" for Rin being her simply becoming a cheap whore on the streets. Then again considering practically any depraved act gives her pleasure kinda hard to see it had a bad thing.
jmspikey
2018-09-12 19:56:08 +0000 UTCTake all the time u need to rest. Your health is the most important thing. Keep up the good work!
Shadowsprinkles
2018-09-12 19:46:47 +0000 UTCCorrected it to chapter 30. I'm very tired. The freelance commissions are being worked upon. Soon there will be an update on that front as well.
IchaIchaSennin
2018-09-12 19:45:18 +0000 UTCIs this not ch. 30? And how goes the freelance commissions?
Shadowsprinkles
2018-09-12 19:42:41 +0000 UTC
