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WiH: Chapter 26 —  The End of the Beginning.

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Jajasx222

"Nah, I'd win." - Hiruch, probably.

Jajasx222

There are many protections for Pillar Lords; they have to explain little of their secrets, as long as the artefacts respect the wording of the rules. The Snake was very technically permitted.

Jajasx222

Zyras is very frustrated after that, he never got the catharsis of beating his ass.

Jajasx222

Indeed, the bishop died instantly, and the narrator got confused with the Demonic beast. It got disintegrated, so it died. Then, a few parts appeared in the infirmery, and he said it got retired, but it is very dead.

Jajasx222

Indeed, and the essence lets him adapt, I don't think it is a good idea though.

Jajasx222

He did not die immediately, at least, otherwise the narrator would have said so. He is a tough fucker, he will probably survive.

Jajasx222

Mass production is always a goal. Though those cannons would rip most people apart when fired if they don't have the proper shielding.

Jajasx222

Tftc

travis btmb

2 chapters in 1 day, we are blessed brothers and sisters!

Gabriel

I can’t wait until the Meredith Super Cannons are produced and act as auto defense turrets for Zyras’ strongholds

AwkwardArithmancer

Wonder if the Rating Games safeguards will be enough to heal Tanin. I could see him surviving but horribly crippled

AwkwardArithmancer

Ironically Zyras could survive an Ophis snake because his Archmage energy generator is close to the concept of Infinity

AwkwardArithmancer

Dammmn, Meredith takes the stage for most badass insane stunt. Most of the speed of light...sweet fuck that's beautiful ❤️ Also of course daddy disappointment fumbles it that bad 😔 Doesn't even get the shit kicked properly. At least Valerie made a failsafe at the end there. Thanks for the chapter 🙏🏼

Orchamus

Man, I feel bad for the Bishop who got caught in the crossfire and died from Reality Slash....how many Pieces does that make that died in this Rating Game? 2? 3 if Tannin was also killed by the Accelerator Cannon?

Deathknight134

Damn aint that some blue balls shit. Like I understand but my man went through all that effort only for stupidity to beat his dad before him.. well at least he got a piece of the infinity and everyone got to see how stupid he was even his so called allies.

kevon wood

Damn so much for a big climatic clash between the two dantalions. Man what a blueball! That he thought he was strong enough to bare the power of a infinity serpent is comical. That little midget Ophis gives them out like candy it seems. How anyone thought it was a good idea to give that idiot one clearly was smoking that chaos brigade bullshit. Hope he gets a personal reward from those two pretty she-devil satans. Serafall did promise a kiss!

Silver flare

So, how did he plan to explain having Infinity dragons power boost?

Nisiris

My bad, its been edited.

Jajasx222

“A knight has die—retired.” I'm a bit confused - I thought this was the Pawn guy they were wary about? Where'd the Knight stuff came from?

Feng Lengshun

Oh fuck, you're right. Was he meant to be a Pawn??

Deathknight134

Typos; "A pawn has die—retired" --> "A pawn has died—retired" ('has die' sounds weird and wrong unless they were trying to cut themselves off from finishing the sentence) "Jerusalem's Nail hadn't stolen there" (...what?? I didn't understand a thing he said.) "and investigate her" --> "and investigated her" "his claws gouged craters into the land" (uhhh, do you mean 'ravines'?) "The vary air ignited" --> "The very air ignited"

Deathknight134

Bit confused with that knight that got promoted to queen? Pretty sure knights cant get promoted so seems to be a mistake. Otherwise very satisfying chapter.

Damon Fitzgerald

Zyras: Snake? SNAAAAAKE!

ytm

Never consume energy bigger than you. INFINITY IS BIGGER YOU JOBBING PIECE OF SHIT!!!

Gawain

I tried giving the others a read too and I have to say, this is easily my favourite out of all your stories. no flowery metaphor for every observation and the prose actually flows smoothly. Im here for it.

caeven


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