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TFS: Interlude 2 — Aurelia of Colchis

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I don't know... Primarchs, even as kids could kill Caliban's great beasts, Fenris' monsters or kill team of Eldars. If regular man just try to sexual harass such Apex predator,even small one, he would be crippled as shit at the very very best... So not sure that it was adequate plot twist, sorry 😐 😅

Arcturus

I like the name Aurelia is nice and fits well. Good remake of Lorgar. I find it funny that she sees him as a god I wonder how that’s going to work out. Maybe it would be easier to get the planet away from chaos worship by worshipping him. It’s not heresy if he is the empresses son right? xD I’m curious how the dynamic will work now that they are together. Also good that Kor Pharon is dead horrible human. It’s interesting to see how much power he had over her just from manipulation. Look forward to more

Panda Apple

He said that not all of them were genderswapped in a previous chapter, so I’m thinking more of a 50/50. 10 sisters and 10 brothers (if the 11th is still alive).

GalacticTNT

so is Alex going to be big brother to 19 sisters or is it going to be 50/50 split lol

PhotoStorm

Hopefully, Alex can save Aurelia and a few of his other siblings from their canon fates, and convince the Empress to not fuck up with some of her decisions (COUGH MORTARION AND ANGRON COUGH) .

GalacticTNT

Thanks!

Jajasx222

Missed oportunities I guess, now he is probably getting tortured or digested by some neverborn.

Jajasx222

To the ground.

Jajasx222

Alex should be able to communicate in some way, but he is missing some vital information on the warp. He can do a lot with it, but he is an idiot savant who never learnt the basics.

Jajasx222

Cool chapter but I wonder if when Alex is able to talk to the empress could he somehow bring her into the conversation so she could talk to her mom ?. kor phaeron Got off way too easy. But he didn’t want her to see him torture him. But as we all know death is not the end for all if he doesn’t get to him then the predators in the warp will ether way I hope rots in hell and pain lasts forever. Have a good holiday

red flash

I was not to say disappointed when I saw interlude but felt feeling of cliff hanger blue balls. But this kinda continued on where it left off and I feel stupid for doubting you. Good chapter.

Dimitrije Junak

Bruh kor phaeron raped lorgar dame man should have gotten worse pre heretic lorgar is pressus

fredrik jonsson

So Colchis should burn right?

LysanderArgent

Definitly a hand me the flamer brother ,the heavy flamer moment.

travis btmb

I would have used the flames of anethma to deep fry kor phaeron that way both his body and soul would have died

travis btmb

Corrections - Aurelia felt the word worm worm its way deep into her being. Their is one to many worm written here.

travis btmb

Nice.

Plastic Soldier

Hmm… I’m just mad. Very mad

NOPE YOU DON'T KNOW MY NAME

And it was not a mighty yell that shatterd the silence, but gently sung words that decided their fate.

Gabriel

When the sole figure of authority in your life, the supposed voice of gods that you KNOW to be real, that has raised you to be obedient to his wishes on threat of pain and retribution… even a primarch is still human to an extent, and humans can have their will bent or broken. Fear is a powerful motivator that predators use plenty. But it’s over… for now. It would be unlike the 4 to let a useful, devoted soul escape them

Ben.K15

Man you're bringing out all my big brother instincts, to all those who had to help their little sis through their first break up you know. Angron wishes he had a 10th of the coming fury, them parasite glazers are about to find out.

StrevHd

The nightmares are over Aurelia! Did you know that bastard is currently being eaten and much, much worse?! Good! Our hero may have gone for the quick solution with kor but those daemons are definitely using his soul for toilet paper! That whole planet is infested with cultist! Time to set some fires! Big ones! So baby sister needs some extreme therapy and a environment actually conducive to positive development. Also pampering lots and LOTS of pampering. She is now as far as anyone is concerned a Athenian princess with a large interstellar nation waiting on her hand and foot!

Silver flare

So Aurelia got raped? I don't think a Primarch would allow such a thing even if she was indoctrinated. There is a difference between physical and sexual violence. Most people can endure physical violance especially a Primarch but I feel like she would've just killed Kor if he tried to rape her. That kind of thing leaves scars for life, I doubt she would recover considering how her fate was in original timeline. She will be even more broken once Alexander tells her that he is not a god.

kay4t123

One of the few worlds deserving of a full purge, let's see what happens

Flygar

Thank you for the chapter.

Radiant Tiefling

Kor deserved to be slammed down by the Manhole cover that got launched back in the 1957....

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