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Extra bits: Cream Original Script PDF

This is the first and only draft of the script I printed out. All the changes were made on the script itself with pen. It's interesting to see some of the omissions from the final short such as "Anti-Cream" which was supposedly an antidote for Cream and was used to dispose of Cream (though I don't really explain this)

By the way I have never made a PDF before. Please let me know if there are any problems with it.

Comments

So second draft then?

Connor Swenke

Method to the madness, makes a lot of sense Unrelated, I was wondering if you would ever consider making a short "how it was made" / tutorial video thing in relation to Cream and your other videos animated in the same style? I have a great interest in e.g. After Effects and Motion Graphics animation, and would love to hear more about how you go about creating these videos

K-Dawg

well the script was in bits in my notebook before it was printed out. I don't put it straight into script format. I like to see things in bits before they are finalized into a script. To call it the first draft feels like I just wrote it in one go but it came from many many notes.

David Firth

Usually 1 page = 1 minute if the script is written in the regular format. It seems to be true almost every time for me. I wanted it to be a bit less though.

David Firth

That makes sense. It's somehow paradoxical to see the structured approach behind all this madness, even if it makes perfect sense that it would work that way. Did you decide beforehand how long you wanted this thing to be more or less, or does that depend more on the process?

Piet van den Berg

Hmmmm. It was to do with working out how long each part was going to take I think. If I put e or easy, it meant I could do it in a day or so. It's on the storyboard too. I was just trying to estimate when I'd be finished.

David Firth

I finished this in 2016.

David Firth

Thanks mate. Impressed at how few changes from first draft to finished work. Tidy creative process: 1) Have a clear and pretty much fully formed idea. 2) Two years hard work to bring it to fruition. Fuppin' awesome stuff!

Stefano Gaivota

Fascinating! What does 'easy' mean?

Piet van den Berg

08/2015 Woa. That lead time.

Stefan Kent

I heart Thick Kid.

Eliot Lockwood

Very interesting to see the thought process take shape with the edited paper.

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