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M113- King’s Domain

The ship drifted toward the planet, its dark silhouette outlined against a vibrant nebula in the distance. Inside, Peter Quill glanced at the navigation panel, trying to suppress the nervous energy buzzing through him.

Rocket tinkered with some busted gadgets, occasionally throwing irritated glances at the scanner screen. "Still don’t get why we're heading into some nobody’s backyard just because someone slapped a crown on his head," he muttered, ears twitching.

"Because," Quill replied, spinning his chair around to face him, "that ‘nobody’ apparently crushed a whole fleet of Kree warships. Ronan’s boys couldn’t even touch him. You got a better plan?"

Rocket wrinkled his nose. "Yeah, how about not running straight into death’s arms? You know, like sane people do."

Groot stretched his branches, shaking some leaves loose before chiming in. "I am Groot."

"Yeah, sure," Rocket folded his arms. "Like anybody’s gonna believe the talking tree and the trigger-happy raccoon can negotiate a truce with a guy called King."

Gamora leaned against the wall, sharpening her blade. "If he’s as strong as the rumors say, Ronan’s not going to chase us there. It’s not a bad move. We just need to figure out if the King’s hostile."

Drax held one blade aloft, testing its weight. "If he is hostile, we meet him in battle—and we shall see whose strength is true."

Quill rolled his eyes. "Let’s try not to die, alright? Just... play it cool. Maybe this guy’s reasonable. Strong guys usually have a soft spot for flattery. I’ll handle the talking."

"Great, we’re dead," Rocket muttered.

The ship pierced the clouds, the hull hissing as they descended. Below, a sea of jungle stretched endlessly—green, wild, and unbroken. Ancient stone structures rose like forgotten teeth, some half-swallowed by vines, others looming like monuments from a long-lost age.

Quill leaned forward. “Well. Not what I expected.”

Then something moved—fast. A figure launched into the air from the treetops, wings unfurling wide as it ascended toward them.

It was humanoid but carried unmistakable draconic traits—a long, sleek tail, scaled arms, and wings spanning out like leathery curtains. Its face was distinctly reptilian, with gleaming emerald eyes and a row of sharp teeth just barely visible when its mouth twitched in what might have been a sneer.

The creature stopped mid-air, hovering effortlessly while addressing them. “You are in the King’s domain,” it announced, voice low and resonant. “Follow me to the designated landing area and comply with the regulations.”

Rocket squinted at it, scratching his head. “Is that a Makluan?” he muttered.

Gamora narrowed her eyes, studying the creature. “Almost. But it’s... different. Smarter. More human.”

Quill gave Rocket a sideways glance. “Makluan? You mean those giant lizard things that tried to eat us on that asteroid?”

Rocket scoffed. “Yeah, those brain-dead oversized iguanas. This guy’s built like one, but talks like he’s got a stick up his ass. Evolution or some cosmic joke?”

“I am Groot,” Groot added thoughtfully.

Drax shrugged, clearly unimpressed. “It’s just a flying lizard. We should slay it and continue.”

The creature glared at them, wings twitching in irritation. “If you do not comply, I will be forced to ground your vessel by force.”

Quill raised his hands defensively. “Alright, alright! No need to turn this into a barbecue. Lead the way, Scaley.”

Rocket made a face. “Yeah, I’m sure following the creepy flying lizard to some god-knows-what landing zone is a great idea. This totally doesn’t scream ‘trap’.”

Gamora shot him a look. “We don’t exactly have options. If this King crushed a Kree fleet, we’re not going to stroll in guns blazing.”

The creature’s gaze didn’t leave them as it guided the ship down to a wide, flat clearing lined with ancient stones and overgrown foliage. As they touched down, Quill powered off the engines, and the crew gathered by the exit ramp.

The creature landed gracefully, folding its wings with an air of practiced authority. “By the King’s law, each visitor must offer a bit of blood, energy, or aura before entering. It will be collected via our device.”

Rocket gave the machine a skeptical glance. “What’s next, we hand over a kidney and a credit report?”

Quill looked at the creature skeptically. “Blood, energy, and aura? What, no ‘first-date drinks’? There a Plan B, or are we stuck with Option Prick?”

The creature’s eyes glinted, unamused. “The regulations are non-negotiable. All must comply, or leave.”

Gamora stepped forward, holding her blade loosely at her side. “And if we refuse?”

The creature didn’t move, but its aura grew noticeably oppressive. “Then you will be denied entry and escorted back to the atmosphere. Attempts to force entry will result in termination.”

Drax grinned, clearly intrigued. “I admire the spirit. A worthy challenge if necessary.”

Quill shot Drax a glare before sighing. “Fine, we’ll play along. But you better not try to drain us dry.”

The creature gestured towards a large, rugged machine positioned at the edge of the clearing. It looked like a hybrid between an ancient altar and a high-tech scanner, pulsing faintly with a soft green light.

Rocket sauntered over, inspecting it with open disdain. “What’s the damage on this thing? Last time something scanned me, it tried to rip my fur off.”

The creature didn’t bother to answer, instead pressing a glyph on the machine. A thin, curved needle extended, barely glinting in the light. “One drop of blood or a trace of your power. It will not harm you.”

Quill hesitated. “So, just... prick a finger and be done with it?”

Rocket shrugged. “Better than being fried by dragon-boy here.” He stepped up first, letting the needle prick his palm. A small droplet was absorbed, and the machine whirred softly before giving a satisfying beep.

“Energy levels nominal. Accepted,” the machine chimed.

Rocket huffed. “There. Happy now?”

Gamora followed, pressing her palm to the needle. Another beep, and it was done. Drax stepped up next, seeming almost disappointed it wasn’t more of a challenge.

Groot merely extended a small twig from his hand, and the machine extracted a drop of sap, humming in approval. “I am Groot,” he said contentedly.

Quill looked around nervously before holding out his hand. “Better not give me tetanus or some alien disease.” A quick prick, a beep, and it was done.

The creature seemed satisfied, stepping back. "You are permitted to enter. Laws of the King’s Domain have been telepathically sent to you. Any violation will be dealt with harshly. You may travel freely for two weeks. After that, you must either leave or extend your visa." He gestured at his clothes. "Or you may ask any Guard if you require assistance."

Rocket gave him a skeptical look. "Yeah, sure. Telepathic laws. Real trustworthy." He pointed a clawed finger at Quill. "You get any brain buzz just now?"

Quill rubbed his temples as if checking for damage. "Weird as it sounds, yeah. Feels like a bunch of rules just crammed themselves into my head. No theft, no violence, don’t piss off the guards... the usual stuff. You guys get that too?"

"I am Groot."

Gamora gave a slow nod. "Same here. Seems straightforward enough."

Drax snorted. "Laws are meaningless if there’s no battle to enforce them."

Rocket scoffed. "Pretty sure that walking gecko over there is gonna handle that part just fine. Right, scales?"

The creature merely inclined its head, unfazed. "You’ve been cleared. Welcome to the King’s Domain." Without another word, it unfolded its wings and took off, gliding smoothly back toward the dense forest beyond.

Quill took a deep breath. "Alright, guess we’re not dead yet. Let’s see what this place is about. Stay on your toes and don’t start anything we can’t finish."

As they descended the ramp, the smell of damp earth and exotic flowers filled the air. The clearing gave way to a winding path lined with stone pillars covered in intricate carvings. Beyond that, they could see bustling market stalls and people of varying species going about their business, seemingly unbothered by their arrival.

Rocket squinted at the glowing flowers. “Why does everything here look like it’s gonna give me allergies and nightmares?”

Gamora scanned the area, her expression cautious but curious. "It’s not just decoration. Those carvings look ceremonial. Probably some kind of cultural significance."

Drax approached one of the pillars, squinting at the symbols. "This language speaks of victory, conquest, and power. A warrior’s domain. Perhaps the King displays his might through these carvings."

Rocket rolled his eyes. "Yeah, or he just likes showing off. Typical royal shit."

Quill waved them forward. "Let’s move. Blending in sounds like a good start. Try not to look too... space pirate-y."

They wandered into the marketplace, taking in the vibrant stalls selling everything from woven fabrics to strange, pulsating fruits. A large, reptilian vendor bellowed out deals in a booming voice, while a group of fur-covered humanoids bartered loudly over a crate of colorful gemstones.

Groot wandered toward a stall filled with vibrant flowers and reached for one that glowed faintly. The vendor, a squat, multi-eyed creature, grunted in approval. "Good choice, rootling. Sacred bloom. Brings fortune."

"I am Groot," he said happily, holding the flower like a trophy.

Rocket glanced at it with a grimace. "Hope that thing doesn’t stink up the ship." He muttered something under his breath, but when Groot wasn’t looking, he gently tucked the flower behind one of Groot’s shoulder branches.

Gamora pointed toward a central plaza where a group of armored guards were drilling in formation. Their movements were disciplined, fluid, and coordinated, each one exuding a sense of purpose. The insignia on their armor was unfamiliar, but it featured a stylized serpent coiled around a crown.

Quill frowned. "Gotta admit, this guy’s got his soldiers in shape. Not like most goons we’ve come across."

"Strong soldiers do not necessarily mean a strong leader," Drax noted. "A true ruler leads from the front."

"Unless he’s got something better to do than babysit his foot soldiers," Rocket quipped. "Bet he’s sittin’ on his throne with a crown up his ass, acting all high and mighty."

A passing guard heard the remark and shot Rocket a glare, but kept moving, clearly deciding it wasn’t worth engaging.

Quill raised a brow. "Yeah, let’s not piss off the guys with spears just yet."

They continued down the main road, weaving between merchants and locals. A group of musicians played a rhythmic melody on odd, horn-like instruments, while children chased each other around the fountain in the center. Despite the militaristic air, there was a bizarre sense of normalcy.

Gamora approached a vendor selling some kind of spiced meat skewers, exchanging a few units of currency for one. She took a cautious bite, then nodded approvingly. "Surprisingly good. We should stock up before we leave."

Rocket eyed her skewer. "You testin’ that for poison or just hoggin’ it?"

She smirked. "Try your luck, Rocket. Could use a little less snark today."

He scoffed but grabbed one for himself, biting into it with a suspicious glare at the vendor, who seemed entirely uninterested.

Quill scanned the crowd, noticing how most people moved about with a mix of confidence and ease. There was no visible fear, just a calm acceptance of the armed patrols. "Whatever this King’s doing, it’s keeping the peace. You don’t see this kind of order without some serious power backing it."

Drax looked unimpressed. "If the King is truly strong, he should accept a challenge to prove it. Strength should be demonstrated, not hidden behind walls."

"Yeah, you go tell him that," Rocket snorted. "I’ll be over here, not getting squashed."

A nearby merchant overheard and leaned in. "You don’t challenge the King. No one does. His strength is... absolute."

Quill raised a brow. "Absolute, huh? Sounds like you’ve seen it firsthand."

The merchant hesitated, clearly uncomfortable. "He brought down a Kree dreadnought with his bare hands. No ships, no weapons. Just... crushed it. Nobody dares to cross him since then."

Rocket whistled low. "Okay, that’s officially terrifying." He flashed a few coins at the merchant. "Tell us more."

The merchant hesitated, but the glint of money did the trick. He leaned in closer, lowering his voice. "There was this Kree dreadnought—brand new, straight from their war factories. They thought they’d just roll in and take what they wanted. The King didn’t even bother mobilizing his troops. Just walked right up to the thing, stared it down like it was a stray dog." He shuddered. "Next thing anyone knew, the whole ship crumpled like a scrap of foil under a boot. He didn’t use any weapon—just his hands."

Rocket rubbed his temples like he had a headache. "So you’re saying some guy just squeezed a spaceship to death? Sounds like a load of crap."

The merchant looked genuinely rattled. "I didn’t see it myself, but the survivors did. They were in shock, babbling about how the whole ship just folded inward. Then, it exploded. No debris, nothing left. Just dust in the wind."

Drax crossed his arms. "That ship was weak. A true warrior doesn't crumble under pressure."

Quill raised an eyebrow. "Or maybe the guy’s just that strong. If he’s real, we’re dealing with a literal ship crusher."

Rocket scoffed. "Nah, I still call bullshit. Bet it was some fancy weapon or secret tech. No way anyone’s packing that kind of muscle without some trick up their sleeve."

The merchant, now looking around as if fearing he'd been overheard, leaned in even closer. "They say he commands the elements. Not just fire and lightning like some run-of-the-mill mage. He can make the earth itself come alive—rip metal from the ground, reshape it mid-battle. One story says he created a giant green cannon out of thin air and blasted a cruiser to smithereens."

Rocket’s ears perked up. "Green cannon? Unless this guy’s juicing on cosmic steroids, there’s no way."

Quill smirked. "Maybe it’s just his favorite color. Look, we’re talking about a guy who supposedly smashes warships with his bare hands. If he’s that powerful, what’s stopping him from just flattening everyone?"

The merchant shrugged. "Most people who come to challenge him don’t come back. The few who do look... broken. Like they’ve seen death and got sent home as a warning."

Drax grunted, arms crossed. "Then they were weak and unworthy. A real warrior would not flee from death."

Gamora shot him a warning look. "Or they’re just smart enough to know when they’re beaten."

Rocket snickered. "That’s the difference between being smart and being dead. This guy sounds like the type that doesn’t take prisoners. Great. That’s just what we need."

Groot nodded sagely. "I am Groot."

Quill sighed, glancing at the surrounding crowd, who seemed more curious than hostile. "We’re not here to pick a fight. Let’s just gather some intel, figure out what kind of person this King really is."

The merchant cleared his throat, catching Quill’s attention again. "One more thing," he whispered. "They say he’s not just strong. He’s... something else. He loves logic games. And accepts challenges and offers rewards to anyone that can beat him."

Quill frowned. "You mean like checkers? Chess?"

The merchant looked confused. "Never heard of those. But a Shi’ar General came to challenge him once in the Shi’ar War Simulation. Apparently, the King hadn’t even played it before. Just read the rule book, closed his eyes for about five minutes, and then beat the General like it was nothing. They played a few more rounds, and each time the General lost faster. The poor guy left looking like he’d just seen a ghost."

Quill blinked. “He’s a warlord and a nerd. Great.”

Rocket gave a derisive snort. "Great. So not only is this guy a one-man fleet wrecker, he’s a freakin’ genius, too. What’s next? He can juggle planets?"

Drax frowned. “If the King wins with strategy, I would challenge him to a contest of pure strength. No riddles. Just might.”

Gamora raised an eyebrow. "It sounds more like he uses both. That makes him a lot more dangerous."

Rocket grumbled. “Smart, strong, psychic, and sculpting death cannons out of thin air. What’s next—he bakes cookies for orphans and sings?”

Quill glanced at Rocket. "You’re just mad ‘cause he sounds like a guy who doesn’t take your shit."

Rocket flipped him off without looking. "I don’t trust genius strongmen with power issues. Seen that movie way too many times."

"I am Groot," Groot offered, still holding his glowing flower.

"Yeah, well, I doubt that ‘keeping our heads down’ is gonna cut it if the guy really has eyes everywhere." Quill dragged a hand down his face. “Stick to the plan. Stay quiet, don’t poke the king, and ditch Ronan before he nukes our exit. Easy.”

Another spaceship appeared in the sky, its angular design glinting under the sun as it descended through the atmosphere. The same dragon creature that had intercepted Quill’s ship shot up with a flap of its powerful wings, heading straight for the newcomer.

Inside the ship, Ronan stood at the command deck, arms crossed over his chest as he watched the creature approach on the screen. Korath was at his side, uneasy but maintaining his composure.

"Public Accuser Corps Commander Ronan," Korath reported, voice low. "It appears to be some form of advanced bio-organic lifeform. Humanoid... but with significant draconic traits."

Ronan didn’t bother responding, keeping his eyes fixed on the screen. The creature halted mid-air, its leathery wings keeping it aloft effortlessly as it glared at the ship’s front camera. Then, in a single smooth motion, it extended one clawed hand, pressing something on a device strapped to its wrist.

The ship’s communication array crackled to life, and the creature’s low, resonant voice came through. "You have entered the sovereign territory of His Majesty. State your purpose immediately."

Ronan’s lip curled in distaste, but he remained impassive. "Kree Public Accuser Corps Commander Ronan requires an official meeting with Minister of Foreign Affairs, Drezyx."

Comments

I mean, I was building up to it over the last few chapters, like when Nero mentioned that Meruem had taken up a new task and wasn’t available. I admit there aren’t always clear transitions between scenes, but I like to think I leave pieces scattered throughout, and when they all fall into place, the bigger picture reveals itself. Most of the time, that was a deliberate choice. I appreciate the feedback, though, I set it up as such.

TheFanficGOD

This chapter came out of nowhere, there is no context with the beginning of the chapter, and with the characters, I think that is the problem with this novel, there is no such phrase to move on to another scene.

hector lyng


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