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What IF 2 Survey

Hi everyone, as you know I am working on Chapter two of the What IF story, taking place after Pan is being possessed. My idea is to make Bulla as the new target for Baby (and she will have a real spotlight) so before starting with final refines I thought to make this poll for two motives: 1) If you have some last minute ideas you want to suggest please feel free to write those on the comments section or DM (I have already taken note your previous ideas durint the run of the first chapter but I thought to make one last check); 2) I got a little doubt as from the previous chapter some you would have prefered to see Pan being possessed early in the story so I want to know if you would like to see a sort of Middle/Introduction story for chapter 2. In this we will see Pan and company returning on Earth, and Baby then will began to explore the city and then spread out taking over the bodies of different people to take information and strengthening himself. Then after a little break, the story centering on Bulla will begin. In this way you could see the events after Bulla will be taken over and which will be the foundations for the future of this series. So let me know your thoughts about.

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There are ideas about the supreme Kai of Time, Kale and Caulifla ecc. Can I ask what to do you mean for fake out?

Littlepara17

Pan seemed like the End goal, like the final girl possession, I think a few fake outs are good as well, it builds the tension and makes the final possession more of a earned experience, I also think it would be interesting to see Baby attempt to possess more of the godlike female characters, like the angels or Kale and Caulifa at some point maybe baby takes over the Kai of Time and then goes multiversal? Just spit balling ideas

Johny

Both are good candidate, maybe I should let you all decide when the story has arrived at the end of chapter 3

Littlepara17

Both of them Will have their own form in chapter 4

Littlepara17

This is just a personal preference but I really like when theres a little bit of pubic hair that the possessor reveals when stripping their host. It sells the idea of control and forces their body to show off their secrets that they normally wouldn't show any one

dont have one Sorry

Will there be any new forms/states for baby pan/ bulla? Who will be the main host?

trentrouls

Ohh that sounds really good, then yeah you should definitely make a prelude story before the one centered around Bulla.

Ren

I can antipate that for chapter 2 some action will also take place in a gym. Also for the mid story I already have in mind a MILF chubby woman, a college student and other secondary characters. I could consider this for example like a muscular woman which while making jogging is possessed (it is just an idea that I have thought now, so it will be different).

Littlepara17

Depends on who Baby's hosts on earth would be, if for example, Baby were to take over the body of a gym girl I would 100% want a story in between before Baby takes over Bulla where Baby possesses multiple earthlings.

Ren

To clarify this middle chapter will be shorter from Chapter 1 while Chapter 2 will be still around 25-30 pages

Littlepara17


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