First series of sketches for "DBGT: Baby Arrival on Earth" (part 2)
Added 2025-02-02 13:39:50 +0000 UTCHi, I post here some sketches of the upcoming "DBGT: Baby Arrival on Earth" (part 2). We look to begin the release for the middle- second half of February. Thank you everyone
Art and colors by: AxlexCima
https://www.patreon.com/Axlexcima
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Okay, but how can I send you a private message?
jose
2025-02-06 09:25:02 +0000 UTCIf you are interest you can send me privately. About the ideas some aspect but first I have to review my script first
Littlepara17
2025-02-06 08:59:29 +0000 UTCNo problem, but could you tell me what idea was interesting to you? And yes, I have a discord account, although it has been a few days since I created it.
jose
2025-02-06 08:30:16 +0000 UTCCan I ask if you have a discord, there is a person who want to write a story for OC character from Dragon Ball
Littlepara17
2025-02-06 07:49:38 +0000 UTCI write down the script and tomorrow I will start to correct and eventually add some details you suggested because the story is different for some aspects. About the future chapter your idea about Bulma, Chichi, C-18 and Chichi is interesting and I thank you because it could be the background for the future as I am thinking to add an element that will cause much problem to Baby. Still all of this depends on Axlex's opinion too as now he is finishing the last pages while I am checking the first batch of part 2
Littlepara17
2025-02-06 05:57:28 +0000 UTCThis depends on whether you already have ideas for the next chapters of the story, but Baby's plans could be the following As Baby saw that ChiChi's hidden power can be greater than Bulma's hidden power, he decides to get into her body and make it his main body, since he finds it funny that when Goku comes back and has to fight, he will have to do it against his wife. And then Baby ChiChi orders Bulma and Videl to give him their power, like in DBGT when Baby Vegeta receives the power of Gohan, Goten, Bulla and Trunks, and by receiving the power of Bulma and Videl, Baby ChiChi greatly increases her power, growing taller and increasing her musculature. Baby decides to stay in Bulma's body, since her intelligence can be useful in the future, such as building a spaceship, in the possibility that Baby is defeated and has to flee, and Baby's most ambitious plan is that with Bulma's intelligence and resources, Baby plans to make clones of himself in case he is killed by Goku, so his clone, which will be hidden in a secret laboratory beneath Capsule Corp, will be able to possess Bulma again and restart his plans to kills Goku and create a new tuffle race. And then Baby Bulma orders Videl and ChiChi to give her powers, so by receiving their power, Baby Bulma becomes much more powerful, increasing her height and muscles.. Baby gets into ChiChi's body to receive her hidden power, and after that, he quickly returns to Bulma's body, so Baby, upon receiving Bulma and ChiChi's hidden power, is now stronger than before, so he thinks that with his new power, he can now get back into C-18's body, so along with ChiChi and Videl, Baby Bulma heads to Kami's lookout, where C-18 has been training in the Time Chamber, so C-18 also became more powerful, so once they arrive and get into the Time Chamber, Baby gets back into C-18's body, and as now Baby and C-18's power is more equal, that causes Baby C-18 to transform into an Ultimate Form, which in addition to making her taller and more muscular, also makes her much more powerful than before.
jose
2025-02-06 01:14:01 +0000 UTC- 3 pages in which after explaining her plans, Baby gets back into Bulma's body, and ChiChi tells Baby Bulma that even if Goku is gone, the other warriors will stop her, so Baby Bulma reveals to ChiChi that she has already infected many earthlings, including her children, and Videl and C-18, and at that moment Videl, who was mentally called by Baby while he was explaining his story to ChiChi, arrives at the house. - 2 pages in which Videl tries to convince ChiChi to join the new Tuffle race, as she mentions the great power she has obtained since she joined Lord Baby so Videl kneels before Baby Bulma, at which time ChiChi tries to escape but is stopped by Baby Bulma. - 5 pages in which Baby Bulma tells ChiChi that she will join the new Tuffle race even if she doesn't want to, so Baby Bulma infects ChiChi with a special egg, either by giving her a kiss or by having a tentacle come out of Baby Bulma's crotch and the egg goes into ChiChi's crotch, and later Baby Bulma "has fun" with her while the egg begins to affect ChiChi, so her body begins to suffer an increase in height and muscle and Baby Bulma can feel that ChiChi's power is increasing, so at the climax of the "fun", ChiChi finishes her transformation, having a muscle and height greater than that of Baby Bulma. - 3 pages in which Baby, using his intelligence and Bulma's intelligence, checks that his theory was correct and assumes that since Bulma and ChiChi have given birth to 2 Saiyan babies each, while Videl has only had one Saiyan baby, in addition to Baby theorizing that since ChiChi is the one who has been in contact with Saiyans for longer than anyone else, that caused her hidden power to be much greater than Videl's and even greater than Bulma's hidden power. So Baby Bulma reveals to ChiChi and Videl her new plans and orders them what they have to do.
jose
2025-02-06 01:13:24 +0000 UTC- 2 or 3 pages where when she gets to ChiChi's house, Baby Bulma returns to her normal form, here you could show how Bulma's body loses the height and muscles that she had, then she gets dressed, and once that's done "Bulma" knocks on the door and greets ChiChi. - 2 pages where "Bulma" and ChiChi talk about what has happened in the last few days, and as the conversation continues, ChiChi suspects that there is something strange with "Bulma", since her attitude and presence feel different than normal, as if she were someone else. - 3 or 4 pages where ChiChi mentions Goku asking when he will return, which makes "Bulma" angry, so ChiChi realizes that that is not Bulma, so when questioning her about that, "Bulma" starts laughing and tells her that she will teach her something amazing, so Bulma's body starts to transform, increasing her muscles and height, returning to being Baby Bulma Ultimate Form - 4 or 5 pages where ChiChi tries to confront Baby Bulma, but with the difference in power that there is, ChiChi is defeated and asks Baby Bulma who she really is, so Baby comes out of Bulma's body, like from her shoulder or stomach, and he reveals his true form, and tells her who he is, telling her his story and goals, and also tells ChiChi about his theory that women who have had Saiyan babies have a hidden power, and Baby wants to check that with ChiChi.
jose
2025-02-06 01:12:37 +0000 UTCI know that the plot that I will comment on is very long but I think that if you were to use it for the comic, it could be about 43 pages in the following order: - 2 or 3 pages in which Baby Bulma admires and touches her transformed body and decides to return to her normal form to see ChiChi, since Baby wants to see ChiChi's reaction when "Bulma" transforms in front of her. - 3 pages in which Baby Bulma calls a female Capsule Corp driver, and "plays" with her a little, then infects her and orders her to take her to ChiChi's house. - 2 or 3 pages in which Baby Bulma, still transformed and with a set of clothes that she will wear when she returns to her normal form, heads to ChiChi's house in a flying limo, with Baby hoping that ChiChi will be useful to him to check if the theory he has is correct. - 2 or 3 pages in which Baby Bulma sees a small town and tells the woman driver to stop, and Baby Bulma gets out of the car, and as she flies over the town, she releases parts of her body to infect the townspeople. - 3 or 4 pages of the townspeople, like farmers or merchants, being infected by Baby Bulma, and here you could use Launch, the girl from Dragon Ball who changes personality when she sneezes, also being infected by Baby Bulma.
jose
2025-02-06 01:11:02 +0000 UTCExactly, which could explain that since ChiChi and Bulma have given birth to 2 babies with Saiyan blood, and Videl has only given birth to a baby with Saiyan blood, that causes Bulma and ChiChi to have a greater hidden power than Videl, which would make sense that Videl does not have an appearance as tall and muscular as Baby Bulma and ChiChi, or at least how I expect her to look when she is infected, and that Videl does not have a great power like Bulma and ChiChi's.
jose
2025-02-05 07:58:09 +0000 UTCIt could be because they have to gave birth to their baby which possessed Saiyan blood
Littlepara17
2025-02-05 07:28:53 +0000 UTCAnd as for what the plot could go like, it could be that while Baby Bulma decides to head towards ChiChi's house, she decides to revert back to her normal form, as she doesn't want to reveal her new appearance to ChiChi yet, to check if she's aware of what's happening with the people who have already been infected. So even though Baby Bulma flies to ChiChi's house, she does it in her normal form and on the way she could infect the people who live in those areas like the farmers, and once she gets to the house, ChiChi talks to "Bulma" about the last few days including Goten's strange attitude and how Gohan decided to fight him, to which "Bulma" says that all Saiyans are like that, so after a while of talking about more things, ChiChi begins to suspect that there is something strange with "Bulma" since her presence and attitude are different from normal, so when questioning "Bulma" directly, she transforms into Baby Bulma's final form, and even though ChiChi tries to confront her, with her great power, it is not difficult for Baby Bulma to defeat her. So Baby reveals his true identity to ChiChi, here you could have Baby sticking out of Bulma's body like coming out of her shoulder or forming his face on Bulma's stomach during the whole explanation, and he tries to convince ChiChi to join the new tuffle race, and he mentions to ChiChi that she has a hidden power that can be useful for the revival of the tuffle race. And although ChiChi refuses and tells Baby that Earth's warriors will stop him, which makes Baby laugh and mentions that he has already infected many Earthlings including Gohan, Goten and Videl and C-18, and to show him, at that moment Videl arrives, since she was mentally called by Baby Bulma while talking to ChiChi, and shows ChiChi the great power she has received since she joined Lord Baby, and as ChiChi tries to flee she is quickly stopped, so Baby Bulma, with Baby no longer visible outside of Bulma's body, decides to "have fun" with ChiChi and during that act infects her with a special egg. So while Baby Bulma is "having fun" with ChiChi, the egg begins to take effect and little by little Chichi begins to suffer the same transformation as Videl but, and just as Baby Bulma assumed would happen, as ChiChi has a more powerful hidden power than Videl, since she has been living with Saiyans for longer than Videl, that makes her transformation more powerful, making her taller and more muscular, with proportions similar to Baby Bulma.
jose
2025-02-05 07:26:14 +0000 UTCAnd I am also very much looking forward to the next chapter with Baby Bulma since I want it to continue since I want to know what Baby discovered when he entered Bulma's body and transformed into his final form. I have a theory that what Baby discovered was that humans who are in constant contact with the Saiyans, like their wives, have developed a hidden power that can make them more powerful. Which could explain why when Baby C-18 infected Videl, in addition to infecting her with a special egg that was a part of Baby's body, Videl obtained a transformation and became more powerful. So I think that Baby Bulma must have gone to see ChiChi, since when Baby got into Bulma's body he felt that hidden power, so Baby must want to check if that is true by infecting ChiChi and see if the same thing would happen to her.
jose
2025-02-05 07:02:35 +0000 UTCπ thank you for the help and support
Littlepara17
2025-02-04 20:03:18 +0000 UTCokay, I'm just saying that if you wanted to do a second part of Baby C-18's What If, you could use that explanation so that Baby can stay inside C-18's body without her body suffering from a power imbalance.
jose
2025-02-04 19:54:46 +0000 UTCAlso I try to utilize solid explanations of why some events happens in the stories
Littlepara17
2025-02-04 18:57:12 +0000 UTCOh don't worry, I can surely use this explanation in the main saga as the reason I replied in this way is because I am trying to give to these two series a diversified approach and plot. This doesn't mean Baby could not possess C 18 in the what if saga, it s just a different approach to the stories. So we will see how this two stories evolve and eventually approach each other. With that say I always welcome everyone suggestions as this story are build by this community
Littlepara17
2025-02-04 18:44:47 +0000 UTCNo problem, it was just an idea I had that you could use, since even if it's just a female possession comic, I like the stories I follow to have an explanation and justification that makes sense. And in this case, I think the idea serves to explain how the Baby from what if could remain in C-18's body, absorbing more energy from C-18's body to become stronger while deciding to maintain C-18's body in her normal form, so that there is no sudden increase in power in C-18's body and Baby does not have to be expelled from her body. And it also serves as a justification so that, since Baby will be stronger, he can give more energy to the transformation, which will ensure that C-18's body does not suffer from the power imbalance, and since Baby will continue to absorb the body's unlimited energy. of C-18, which will make Baby stronger, which will also make Baby C-18's ultimate form even more powerful, so Baby decides to remain in C-18's body. So in case you want to do a second part of this What If or in the main story Baby, this could serve as justification for Baby to decide to stay in C-18's body and unite his body with her body, so the same way that Baby from the main saga bonded with Bulma.
jose
2025-02-04 18:05:07 +0000 UTCThank you, for the What IF I have in mind something a little different honestly, while for the main saga I think we are going to see again Baby C-18, so thanks for the suggestion
Littlepara17
2025-02-04 12:20:48 +0000 UTCSorry for the long explanation, but I think you could use it in case you decide to make a second part of Baby C-18's What If. Or in case for the main story you decide to have C-18 be Baby's main host.
jose
2025-02-04 11:24:16 +0000 UTCUnderstood
Littlepara17
2025-02-04 11:23:09 +0000 UTCI don't know if you take into account this suggestion for Baby C-18's What If story, as I understood during the publication of "DBGT: Pleasure Training", in a comment you explained that Baby had to leave C-18's body, since her body could not resist the constant increase in power generated by her union with Baby and I suppose that happened since as soon as Baby possessed C-18, he transformed her body into its final form. And an idea I have so that this does not happen to the Baby of What If, is that Baby decides not to keep C-18's body transformed into its final form yet, since then C-18 will not suffer a large increase in power, and Baby will be able to absorb more energy from C-18's body and with that he will become more powerful, and that will be useful since when Baby decides to transform into his final form, C-18's body will not suffer from that power imbalance, since the powers of She and Baby will be very similar, so the transformation will receive the same amount of energy from both, so C-18's final form can be much more powerful than the first time she transformed.
jose
2025-02-04 11:22:29 +0000 UTCI understand and it seems fine to me, although I really hope more that you start publishing the next chapter of the Baby saga with Baby Bulma, and the what if with Baby C-18, with which I think you will use some of my ideas that I suggested, I hope May your other projects be published and I hope they are interesting
jose
2025-02-04 10:30:19 +0000 UTCAaaaah.....what a nice body ππ€€
InfiniteBeing
2025-02-04 08:53:11 +0000 UTCI am waiting to see the reaction of the artist, then I could post the plot here, and yes it is an original story
Littlepara17
2025-02-04 08:15:58 +0000 UTCa plot for an alien absorb/possessor entity? That sounds kind of interesting, it's an original story, and what's the plot about?
jose
2025-02-04 06:52:43 +0000 UTCI am still evaluating this as this also depends from the artists availability. Still I am not sure as I am writing a plot for an alien absorber/possessor entity, there is the Chichi chapter and other works. Plus I have to re contact artists which I talked last year.
Littlepara17
2025-02-03 19:23:58 +0000 UTCAround 38-40 pages
Littlepara17
2025-02-03 19:16:27 +0000 UTCHow many pages will this part have? And I know it's too early to ask but what would be the next comic that you publish after you finish uploading this second part, will it be the My Hero Academia story that you had mentioned or the continuation of the Baby saga with Baby Bulma?
jose
2025-02-03 18:52:27 +0000 UTCand I know it's too early to ask but what would be the next comic that you publish after you finish uploading this second part, will it be the My Hero Academia story that you had mentioned or the continuation of the Baby saga with Baby Bulma?
jose
2025-02-03 06:56:03 +0000 UTCAnd how many pages will this part have?
jose
2025-02-03 06:51:25 +0000 UTCHehe
Littlepara17
2025-02-03 06:14:44 +0000 UTCIt looks interesting, and from the first page it seems that Baby will still be inside the woman that he possessed in the previous part, and that the woman will pretend to be pregnant to infect the 2 women that are seen, and I think that the girl that comes out On the last page it could be one of the women that Baby infected, or it could be Bulla and from her clothing it seems that she is in a sauna
jose
2025-02-02 19:26:36 +0000 UTCcan't wait :)
janey
2025-02-02 16:41:08 +0000 UTC
