Help with the story 🥲
Added 2024-11-29 22:05:25 +0000 UTCApparently, not many people like the way the story turned out.
I'd like to have your opinion on the story as the next episode is quite important for the continuation of the story.
Do you think we should continue with the scenario or do you have any recommendations or ideas for improving it ( because the story seems to be too dramatic...)
Comments
I want the drama and the tea 🤣🤣🤣 please carry onto the original story! If people don’t like it, oh well. At the end of the day, you can’t, please everybody and plus when the story comes to a climax it makes it all come together
Dez
2024-12-04 00:03:31 +0000 UTCEveryone else has kind of said what I wanted to say, but better. The main thing though is that it's your story, and you should stick with it, tell the story you want to tell. There will be people who like it and some people who won't, like with everything. There are some aspects of the story that I am not keen on personally, like the mind control/influence stuff, but I want to keep reading to see how it goes. The reason that I feel strongly about it is that I'm invested in these characters now. I want to see everything work out in the end, but those are just the kind of stories that I like. The majority of the time, any changes that come from massive external demand usually hurt the piece of media in the long run. But I want to read your story, the one you want to tell. Will I like it? I hope so. However, I'd rather see an author take a swing and miss telling the story they want than changing just to keep some people happy.
YoBaronICanDigIt
2024-11-30 23:08:16 +0000 UTC🙌❤️
Ekass Eks
2024-11-30 22:48:36 +0000 UTC❤️❤️🤧
Ekass Eks
2024-11-30 22:48:17 +0000 UTC🤧🤧❤️❤️❤️
Ekass Eks
2024-11-30 22:47:22 +0000 UTCNo. Absolutely not Ekass. I don't want anyone telling you that your story is bad and that you should change it. 😤 Look, there's gonna be a lot of criticism. 😔 Many people may not like what you are writing in this story. 💔 The manipulation of Spring and Nash by Love was, in my opinion, a well done delivery of circumstances. The drama of Black Shoguna makes this a brilliant comic which I greatly fell in love with. 🥰 With it's amazing cast of characters, beautiful art design, and powerful, heart tugging story, I consider this my "soap opera" of a comic that I cannot personally get enough of. 😍😄 No matter what the "haters" on Instagram say, I hope you consider my opinion, as a fan and a friend, that the story of Black Shoguna is going in a brilliant direction and should NOT be changed. 🫡 Thank you, Ekass, for all of your hard work and all the love you give the comic and your fans. 😭💕💕
Shell
2024-11-30 05:26:55 +0000 UTCWelp you can go with a family with two wifes...
LessPoint
2024-11-30 05:10:45 +0000 UTCDon't change anything im so intrigued on what will happen next😭. If the people don't like then too bad. It's your story boo 🤌🏾🤌🏾🤌🏾🤌🏾
Kyla Brown
2024-11-30 02:43:25 +0000 UTC(Sorry for the strange english, I'm not good talking or writting it) Nah, go on with your original idea! You are doing a really great job and as one of the other comments say, if people get this upset is because you make a incredible story! Is mostly the whole Love/Spring manipulation and the intimicity part with cero consent what makes people mad, and as far is understable, bad things are always gonne to happend in a story line to make characters grow, yes, there is suffering in the process for Winter, Nesh and the others, but I highly doubt you'll let they in absolute misery for the ending. So... Theres nothing bad in you making this arc the way it is! Whatever you had planned, is gonna be awesome! (Thought, I think a lot of us expect Spring and Love to face heavy consecuences! And maybe a time for Winter and Nesh to heal before they could really be with the other again)
Patata_Cósmica
2024-11-30 00:49:36 +0000 UTCI agree with guys but I also think people were also thrown off with nash when he talking to winter because he too is responsible for his choices. Now that we all the sisters from the other side are coming nash and winter really need to work together to keep there marriage and family intact. As much as the season sisters are very upset with spring I know they love spring it just hurt that it came from there close sister and disowning her will hurt them just as much it hurt spring the sister really need work together and be by each side when it's really needed and Communicate better to each other.
Rocky
2024-11-30 00:33:23 +0000 UTCI'm one who doesn't care for the dramatic turns this story takes. I preferred the mor slice-of-life feel it started with. But I respect the fact that you are an artist, and that only you must tell this story. If you overly concern yourself with crowd pleasing you may ultimately lose all artistic vision or passion for your work. While I complain about what I don't like, I also remember the strong elements that I love and I'll continue to support with that in mind.
Spencer Harman
2024-11-30 00:23:55 +0000 UTCI'm sorry that you a creator have been experiencing this lately . I know you can pull it off and rather people love it or not what matters is the people here that love you and your stories. Much love and support as always 💙🩷💛🩵
Rocky
2024-11-30 00:16:23 +0000 UTCI also believe people we're thrown to left with nash as well and what he telling winter. He too is responsible for his choices in the matter. had he listen to his mother and left with them to go see winter none this would had happen. I think this situation will make him understand that he wasn't really there for his wife like he should have been. and have him be on more on guard of there marriage and there family. Because now that we know all the sisters are coming bring the season sisters home they both have to work together and physically, mentally, and emotionally be there for each other.
Rocky
2024-11-30 00:09:35 +0000 UTCnot alot of people like how the story is currently going because you brought in topics/themes that alot of people dont like even hate obnoxious/pushy mother in law, romantically obsessed family member, love triangle clueless mcs. like the the story is turning into a reality tv show like jersey shore or the bold and the beautiful and if the story continues down that route or similar the hate and dislike is going to continue possibly even get worse and going forward how you want to take the story really depends on what you can handle if you can handle the hate and dislike thats happening and going to happen continue the story how you want to however if you dont think you can you are going to have to make some sacrifices to how you continue the story the only things i didnt like in the previous chapters were how oblivious and dense winter and nash have been written in regards to spring despite the clear warnings thats been shown and given to them and them being away from each other for a month just seemed unrealistic but its still a great story to me
John jjcoolja12
2024-11-30 00:04:11 +0000 UTCI'd say keep the original plot of story but plan the ending . because I believe it's really about spring and how it's going to end. In my opinion with spring and how it will end she got to accept the consequences and understand that her action really affect the people around her once they make it back home because I believe everyone will be very angry with spring an just about have enough of spring antics and have every right to be especially winter and have winter express her anger . And if spring can't understand why everyone upset at her choices I think time apart from spring to make her relize what she done . During the time alone will give her clarity on the matter truly make her reflect that she has been selfish and accept the situation that she put in. have her work on rebuilding the relationship and earning the trust with everyone a step at time and spring have a heart to heart with winter and really talk about there feelings.
Rocky
2024-11-29 23:51:39 +0000 UTCYeah I had the popcorns prepared for today 😔
Becca_rcc
2024-11-29 23:48:09 +0000 UTCAt the end of the day, it's your story to do with as you please. Never feel as though you need to change your writing to please those who don't like it; it never works out. Now, to be fair, I do see where people are coming from, given how serious of a situation your characters find themselves in and what they've already been through, but stopping now and changing course wouldn't be the way to go. Besides, I need to see what happens next!! 😂
Kermit's America
2024-11-29 23:39:50 +0000 UTC😆🤧❤️
Ekass Eks
2024-11-29 23:37:04 +0000 UTC❤️🙌
Ekass Eks
2024-11-29 23:36:14 +0000 UTC😊Ty !
Ekass Eks
2024-11-29 23:34:51 +0000 UTCKeep writing the story as you intended. The fact that people got this upset proves how invested they are in your writing, story, and characters. Do not change your original vision to please the masses. It’ll never work out that way
Jim Sock
2024-11-29 23:17:13 +0000 UTCAlso spring face some form of consequence for what she's done and works to make amends with everyone cuz she just can't get off scot-free
Jamael Williams
2024-11-29 23:06:45 +0000 UTCMy friend have a very good advice I remember about any stories "Bad things are going to happen in a story, the great thing about the story is overcoming those bad things and rising above them."
Christian C Williams
2024-11-29 23:05:45 +0000 UTCYay also I also like to see spring face consequences 4 her actions and work to make amends and gain forgiveness from everyone hopefully find a boyfriend/husband of her own ✌🏿
Jamael Williams
2024-11-29 23:05:23 +0000 UTCYeah she has a lot she needs to apologize and make amends for and I think that's why a lot of people are angry because they think she's just going to get away Scott free but I hope that she does face consequences and accepts responsibility for her actions it may be fine a boyfriend or a lover of her own 😎
Jamael Williams
2024-11-29 23:03:07 +0000 UTCWell I do want spring to be happy and find a boyfriend too she also needs to take responsibility for what she's done and work to make amends she just can't get off scot-free
Jamael Williams
2024-11-29 23:01:21 +0000 UTCAs long as Love's manipulations and plan gets found out and she's dealt with and spring takes responsibility and works to make things right with them I'm okay with how the story's going
Jamael Williams
2024-11-29 23:00:02 +0000 UTCYeah and a lot of people just getting tired of all the drama and just want the two of them to be happy
Jamael Williams
2024-11-29 22:56:13 +0000 UTCYeah I do hope the two of them can live happily because they've been through too much together to let it end like this
Jamael Williams
2024-11-29 22:55:46 +0000 UTCYeah me too but let's not forget spring has a lot to apologize to them for summoning love and asking for her help lying to his family about winters were abouts and punching Autumn after she rightfully slapped her for trying to convince her to hide winter and cover up her 🤥
Jamael Williams
2024-11-29 22:55:15 +0000 UTCAnd let's not forget spring she lied to and manipulated them punched Autumn after she rightfully slapped her for trying to convince her to help hide and lie to them about winter where abouts and let's not forget she's summoned and called on love for help even though she knew how much nash and went to mention each other so she has a lot of responsibility and things to make up for
Jamael Williams
2024-11-29 22:53:48 +0000 UTCyes that’s it! i think that’s where everyone is getting upset; with thinking Spring is going to get away with everything with no consequences or character development. It will be satisfying on the readers end to see her handled properly. She needs to face some steep consequences for her actions and not be redeemed too easily. She will need to work through the love and trust she has intentionally broken
prosper
2024-11-29 22:52:52 +0000 UTCOh there will be love for brainwashing and manipulating them really needs to get some of punishment be it by winter nash Autumn or summer someone has to do something
Jamael Williams
2024-11-29 22:52:39 +0000 UTCOh no spring has a lot to answer for because let's not forget she lied to them punched and got angry with Autumn after she rightfully slapped her for trying to convince her to help hide and lie to them about winter and it's the one who summoned love in the first place even though she knew nash loved her dearly so she has a lot responsibility of take in all this too brainwashed or not
Jamael Williams
2024-11-29 22:48:49 +0000 UTCAll in all, it’s yours to do what you will with! however, if you’d like some feedback, I’d say to just make sure everything is handled properly in this arc :)
prosper
2024-11-29 22:46:45 +0000 UTCI agree the story has gotten a little too dramatic and people want to see love get exposed as well as talk to spring about her entitled and selfish sense of love
Jamael Williams
2024-11-29 22:45:34 +0000 UTCIn the end, it is your story and your creation so you should have the final say. Honestly, the new arc seems totally out of left field and sometimes it feels as if the characters behave oddly in terms of personality, i guess it’s a bit inconsistent. But even so, i still love the characters. I think it would be great if you wrapped up this arc in a proper way. Like, you introduced some strong themes this arc (cheating, brainwashing, non consensual stuff) so it should be handled properly. I think it would be unsatisfying if we got a cliche ending to this (for example, if spring doesn’t have to answer for what she’s done or if it turns out that Love was manipulating her the entire time which would conflict with earlier parts).
prosper
2024-11-29 22:45:10 +0000 UTCMaybe find a way to stop or delay winter from going home so they can find out the truth about what happened
Jamael Williams
2024-11-29 22:44:08 +0000 UTCThe best way to improve is to have them find out about loves plans and manipulations an exposure so winter know the truth and they can both apologize and start to talk about what happened also I'm pretty sure everyone's just sick of all the drama at this point
Jamael Williams
2024-11-29 22:41:07 +0000 UTCYeah keep it the way it is we actually like to do theories (I personally do ajsjsjk) But as one of my fellow colleague said @Jamael, I hope that there will be consequences to whatever occurred 🥲
Becca_rcc
2024-11-29 22:38:04 +0000 UTCI have to agree that there is a little too much drama the brainwashing sleeping with spring winter just leaving without letting him explain or hearing him out also not letting him meet his child I'm pretty sure a lot of people just want to get this wrapped up is she going to be a happy couple and move on to other things
Jamael Williams
2024-11-29 22:37:09 +0000 UTCI just want each character to happy 😭😭. Great story btw things are heating up. I hope love gets what’s coming to her, Spring finds her a boyfriend, and MC and Winter can live in peace.
Kitchen
2024-11-29 22:36:40 +0000 UTCWhat you doing is fine at the end of the day this Your story and Your work of art...I Think the reason for this is that i think alot of people feel like spring will actually get away with it her actions that destroyed there family and marriage.
Rocky
2024-11-29 22:35:38 +0000 UTCYeah that really put a lot of people off especially winter not trying to hear him out or explain himself
Jamael Williams
2024-11-29 22:34:09 +0000 UTCI just hope love gets found out and dealt with in the two of them get back together because they've been through too much to let it end like this
Jamael Williams
2024-11-29 22:33:34 +0000 UTCOh yeah too many artists and fanfic/ comic writers quit or abandon their works because of people's comments and negativity my opinion if you don't like it you don't have to watch your read it
Jamael Williams
2024-11-29 22:33:05 +0000 UTCHonestly it's your story so wright how you like but I would like to see love get what's coming to her and him in Winter getting back together
Jamael Williams
2024-11-29 22:30:40 +0000 UTCYeah that way both sides can be happy
Jamael Williams
2024-11-29 22:29:46 +0000 UTCThe story, the story 🤔 it’s very…..juicy amazing me and my friend literally have to gossip bout like it’s actual people 😂💅 like don’t change itttt!!! But there is other people who disagree to it as it follows the storyline and not outside of it like other people want.
Syd_was_here-.-
2024-11-29 22:29:39 +0000 UTCYeah I wasn't feeling the whole brainwashing into sleeping with spring thing but as long as love gets found out and dealt with and him and went to can overcome this and get back together I'm okay with it
Jamael Williams
2024-11-29 22:29:23 +0000 UTCAgreed but as long as they find out the truth and him and winter get back together and can raise their child happily I'm okay with it
Jamael Williams
2024-11-29 22:28:46 +0000 UTCNO NO NO NO NO! YOUR STORY IS PERFECT! It's fine the way it is. Me personally I don't like the brainwashing and miscommunication. But I know eventually they're going exposed the culprit as some point. I can understand many people are feeling uneasy. But that something that the readers need to learn to calm down.
Christian C Williams
2024-11-29 22:26:31 +0000 UTCPersonally? Continue with the story that you wish, many people are going to disagree or heavily dislike but that happens with anything that becomes popular. Keep with what you're doing especially if you enjoy what you're creating
Victoria BG
2024-11-29 22:19:23 +0000 UTCwhich is why i said to continue with the story and not change it up, she made too much traction to change it just because some people didn’t like the current stuff. can’t please every single last individual
int
2024-11-29 22:11:03 +0000 UTCI don’t really like the whole brainwashing the mc into cheating on Winter thing, but as long as nothing too serious comes out of it then it’s alright.
Avery Parker
2024-11-29 22:10:48 +0000 UTCThe story is good as it is. Love is a damn... well. XD I'm looking forward to when it gets exposed and Winter and him get back together.
Lhapones
2024-11-29 22:10:16 +0000 UTCNo cause she can nail it
Becca_rcc
2024-11-29 22:09:51 +0000 UTCYES
Becca_rcc
2024-11-29 22:09:19 +0000 UTCi think what your doing with the story rn is amazing goat, there are some elements like mc sleeping with spring bc i don’t want her to get pregnant, but i think the plot is really well made and i think you can pull it off!
Digiverse
2024-11-29 22:08:29 +0000 UTCTry doing an AU, while keeping the original story. I think that would soften the blow for some people but also at the same time, it’s YOUR story and the people who matter will stay.
FatBunny
2024-11-29 22:08:09 +0000 UTCIt’s your story do what you want.( I voted continue)
blackhole72
2024-11-29 22:07:15 +0000 UTCto be fair there is nothing wrong with the story, not everyone is going to agree with the way it’s going but if it was the basic vanilla love story it would be rather bland and one dimensional. i think keeping pace with the original story is the way to go, i have high hopes that you can wrap it up properly in a way that anyone would like.
int
2024-11-29 22:07:04 +0000 UTC
