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The Transformation Estate (1&2 Combined File)

Okay, I've updated the file to the edited PDF version. To anyone who read the .doc, I'm sorry for your pain -_-. I doubt most people realize that when I say I'm 'editing' something, I'm not just fixing spelling fucks ups and such, which is what most people think of editing as. In addition to that, part of the process is smoothing out scenes, fixing word choices, adding things I forgot, and so forth. In example, the edited version of this is a good 300 words longer than the .doc I first uploaded, due to me adding and improving bits all the way through. Anyway, hopefully most of you waited for the PDF, the .doc version was seriously painful -_-. 

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Okay, whew. Made it. Sort of. Kind of. Okay, so I'm uploading this now to keep my promise of it being this month, but be aware that I have no edited this yes. That's why it's a word doc, not the usual PDF file. To be honest, I'd recommend you wait until I have a chance to edit it tomorrow before reading it, as it's probably a bit of a mess at the moment :-).

The good news, beyond the fact that it's done, is that it came down close to the wire on account of being pretty darn long. I added over 7600 words to the story, which is well beyond my average length for a short story update! 

As another note...there aren't as many transformation shenanigans in this as I'd really have liked. In fact, there's not much of it directly covered. Originally, way back when I wrong the first part of it, I had intended to have 2-3 shorts before they return to the shop for Ella to meet Tess the Succubus. However, given that I've never since gotten a chance to add to it...I figured I might not get another chance for some time. As such, I rushed forward past their initial transformation adventures, to move along the plot of the series. Such as it is. That also means I honestly crammed more than I wanted to into a smaller space than I wanted it to be in, with results that I'm not 100% happy with. But, that was the tradeoff for trying to shoehorn plot advancement in. Hopefully, you all find it enjoyable despite it's flaws! 

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P.S. Sadly, this took too much of my time for me to get the demo done today. February being so short is biting me on the ass. The demo for The Dungeon of Lewdity will probably be out on the second or third. Sorry! 


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