What's better than one?
Added 2023-01-08 12:10:54 +0000 UTCThe answer: 9
(Unless you ask Steph, that is)
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There needed to be an illustration of Mira, right? Right. Her hybrid form, at least.
My artist also did me dirty again... She gave me two sketches, one with the black outfit how I wanted it to be, and then another one with the white version. How could I possibly could not get both here?!
The black will probably be her "regular" outfit, and the white one here winter version or something like that.
I think I'll later make some changes to the chapters and have the art of her in the shrine black, and when the girls meet her, she's wearing white or something along those lines.
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This one is a little complicated to explain... I wanted a bit of a Japanese feel, but without it being -too- stereotypical. I hope that worked out at least a little. I'm not sure if it actually did, not at all, actually... but I also do not care anymore because she looks amazing~
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Also, for fun, the initial sketches:
See what I mean with it having been impossible to decide?!
I decided against the long sleeves, or whatever you call them, because they only added to the Japanese feel. Same with the fish on the black version. It did look really nice, tough.
(Also, the short sleeves meant more leg xDD)
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P.S.:
Until the chapters with the illustrations inside of them go public, please don't share any of those as they're meant to be time exclusive for Patreon (Or fully for NSFW stuff, as they're a reward for supporting the story).
Comments
Mhmm... It doesn't match how she's been described in the shrine and by her followers, yes. Well... ~
Teanam
2023-01-28 17:24:32 +0000 UTCI got a more mature/elegant feeling from the Mira in the story. These pictures seem a little too young, due to the expression? Like, the physical age might work fine, but I think the expression doesn't fit.^^
Eleeyah
2023-01-28 16:53:56 +0000 UTCInteresting idea, but no, they're "regular" clothes.
Teanam
2023-01-12 10:29:57 +0000 UTCBoth look great. I actually like the white one more, I think. Also, if this is a case of "fur turns into dress" maybe the white one would fit better thematically?
Bast
2023-01-09 20:09:50 +0000 UTCLooks great. I like both but I think the black one works better.
Deltanz
2023-01-09 08:51:20 +0000 UTCHmm, I can kinda see it, but very loosely at best, I guess.
Teanam
2023-01-09 08:15:29 +0000 UTCI like the contrast with the black one, but prefer the style and pattern of the white one more (also I'm a bit partial there because it reminds me of Kamisato Ayaka's outfit from Genshin Impact, and if I'm honest I'm still crushing on her hard >.>)
Aster Vulpes
2023-01-08 21:47:41 +0000 UTCYeah, I need to add some details to her looks and outfit to the shrine chapters. I wasn't quite there yet when I wrote the chapter.
Teanam
2023-01-08 15:49:01 +0000 UTCLooks nice, at first I had an imagine of Inari for her but this looks very nice indeed
Martynas Samsonas
2023-01-08 14:33:14 +0000 UTCYupyup, the black one has more impact, but there was just no way I could've said no to the white one, as well. Also, I think it really would be a nice idea to have that one be her winter wardrobe. For wooden sandals... Hmnn, I kinda get it, but it also would've added points to the Japanese bingo again. Also, bare feet are also an interesting change of pace, I think?
Teanam
2023-01-08 13:50:59 +0000 UTCThey both look quite nice. Although the black one has nicer contrast. Some wooden sandals would be a nice addition.
Maury
2023-01-08 13:23:27 +0000 UTC
