Danmachi: Hell's forge Hiatus
Added 2025-06-02 14:49:14 +0000 UTCI'm going to be putting this story on Hiatus for a bit to focus on my pokemon story that's nearing it's end. I've not always done a good job with the ending parts of my stories and want to make this one perfect. I hope you can understand.
Comments
Yeah sad that the pokemon ends slowly :/ I think the problem is more or Less the goal of becoming a God always and he suddenly becomes very powerful and it just crashes to a end. Especially since the Sage one and the Ringmaker one were at the end "Oh I'm a God/Undefeatable now imma crush everything really fast and then end it" Your writing is good, and I'm happy to bought the peatron, but well I think the Power growth and scaling is to fast and that makes the story end so fast and end it in the way it does. And other ways or possibleties and such aren't explored much as they maybe should.
TOS SOT
2025-06-02 18:17:49 +0000 UTCAlright! I was just starting to catch up with it haha
dagemer1234
2025-06-02 18:05:05 +0000 UTC
