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Added 2022-04-15 02:56:30 +0000 UTC187 and Chained - 16 are both at 50%.
188 - Will be another Erwarth PoV - I just started this morning.
Spent a lot of time this week reviewing early chapters and started work on re-writing Emerging.
The first twenty-five chapters are consistently in need of a re-write, to paint a clearer picture of places and situations. Though there are a couple of chapters, I don't want to re-write from a cleanup perspective but reconstruct completely to get rid of the exposition.
Comments
Yeah, Lome succubi are really cool. I hope they'll stay with Amdirlain even after their royals (and the rest) are freed .
Tjark
2022-04-15 16:11:54 +0000 UTCYay Erwarth! I really enjoyed her last chapter. Best of luck with the re-write. I don't know if you plan to release it piecemeal or all at once, but I'll look forward to reading it either way when you do.
StormyAngel
2022-04-15 05:43:07 +0000 UTCNot going to do as much of it as my brain wants me to. The chapter count approach I had earlier limited my use of some characters, and some I'll address but others will remain underutilised. A lesson for my next story.
Glenn Wright
2022-04-15 04:33:28 +0000 UTCYeah, that's certainly one of those I want to clean up. Almost have it a Mind Palace conversation instead of the awful colours I used.
Glenn Wright
2022-04-15 04:27:33 +0000 UTCIn my opinion there are several chapters in need of revision particularly in regards to whom is actually thinking inside Amdirlain’s head. I understand writing three people arguing while being influenced by one of the participants can be difficult, but for me it was somewhat confusing to read.
Xtriver
2022-04-15 03:28:33 +0000 UTCGood luck with the re-writing. That's always painful, in my experience.
Benjamin Medrano
2022-04-15 02:57:59 +0000 UTC
