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Added 2022-05-31 23:44:56 +0000 UTCChapter 201 wanted to be difficult over the weekend and had me re-write three times.
While I eventually figured out why I didn't like it, cost me a lot of time to get it to the point of being mostly roughed out. Had tried to skip some preparations, and I had a character complaining that she didn't get air time.
The last and fourth full re-write covered a much smaller set of events, and Ossi gets to show what impact meeting Isa had on her.
Though I did also make progress with other chapters while I was figuring out why it didn't work.
Chapter 202 also needs a bit more work and then editing, and 203 I've got large sections of it written
As it stands, the next chapters are ongoing at present.
201 - Liranë PoV - includes the reappearance of Ossi (aka Isa little street kid) and why Fen ganked Odinn so easily.
202 - Torm PoV- features a reunion with a friend
203 - Amdirlain PoV - explorations of the Maze, and the brands' nature makes itself very clear.
204 - Livia PoV - let the trial begin.
I also did some experimental writing for the main character in Fluid - aka Ebusuku's baby -her/he/their dad better get home in time
Comments
Isn't there?
Glenn Wright
2022-06-01 09:05:50 +0000 UTCNo reason for her/he/their. Ebusuku said multiple times it's a she :D
Tjark
2022-06-01 08:10:19 +0000 UTC
