Chapter 11

Hi, Ahh, well done! Good catch there, and actually reminds me... I meant to state exactly that in the Authors note, completely forgot. So that's fixed up now. But yes, Olivia totally cribbed the design from Azura! How shameless! Really though, it's funny looking at the dress from a writer's point of view and realising just how revealing it is, the fact that someone like Azura wears something that shows off her panties as casual-wear is... Well, I guess when you look at the Mage clothes (Owain lets Ophelia walk around dressed like that?) maybe they were a little more lax in those days. Also! I'm more partial to Hoshido myself, but you can't deny that Azura's Nohr dress is much hotter! She looks amazing in black... I did wonder myself if I made Olivia a little too far too fast, but ultimately I've only got so much space to work with and I don't really want to dedicate three whole chapters to her development, so I tried to just really show how dependent she is, how hollow she's felt with everything that's happened since the war. She's spent all this time desperately clinging to something that could give her life meaning and Robin's finally given her a lifeline. She can help, she can be wanted. So she clings to it with all her might. I intended to have the groundwork there in the previous chapter, but that it would still be something that would take everyone by surprise (Just as it did Robin), so hopefully it worked! Haha, I've gott'a work through a quick commission first and then I'll get straight into the Nowi chapter. I'm looking forward to it myself, it'll be nice to start getting some Manakete's mixed in, especially when you consider Robin's uncovered "heritage". Anyhow, thanks for the kind words and the support! It means the world to me. -J

Hi, Woah, whoops sorry. Sent that without meaning to. Anyhow, thanks for this comment, really glad to hear you enjoyed the emotional/character parts of the story. I was a little worried by the end of it that I might have put too much into those and that it'd be a bit slow- a lot of character stuff, not that much actual sex. What a strange lemon! But yes, I was hoping to take people a little by surprise with just how dependent Olivia wound up being. I set the path up a little in her previous chapter, showing how important it was to be needed, and here it's mostly just showing her denial and her breaking down from those desires, until, ultimately she's able to admit something as scary as that. The scene with Tharja and Robin actually came recommended some time ago from another reader, it's the kind of idea someone mentions that the instant you hear it you know you HAVE to write it. I'm pretty happy with how it turned out actually, just because it's nice to show Tharja's softer side a little. Anyhow, thanks again! Really appreciate the support and the kind words, it keeps me going. -J

Has Olivia started cosplaying as a certain songstress by chance? Tch, and she ultimately chose Nohr, bad choice... :p In all seriousness, excellent chapter. At first I thought Olivia had become too submissive but you write her dependency very believably. Now get some much needed rest and hurry up with the next chapter! I don't want to be as old as Nowi by the time I get to read her chapter :3

Bunit117

After the events of chapter 6 I was expecting something similar, but I wasn't expecting Olivia to give herself to Robin to such a degree of worship that could rival Tharja's (which in my opinion, she does rival Tharja's worship for Robin) with the metaphor of the King and the Shackle! It was really nice, also all the scenes troghout the chapter, simple scenes like the dance in front of Lady Penfold, the fact that she decided to leave her ring, the hollowness she felt each time she wore a dress and how happy she was each time she wore Robin's colours... Those scenes are some of the things that make this story great (also Robin's manipulations is so well done). I could go on for hours, instead i will just say it was worth the wait, and hopefully I can pledge more once I get a part time job. BTW, the scene between Tharja and Robin was really beautiful.