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Weekly Update

Hi guys,

Progress was a little slower than I expected this week unfortunately, but, a bunch of changes we've been implementing at work have just been completed, so moving forward things should, hopefully, be a little calmer.

I'm still working on completing the draft for now, the goal for that will be to have it either finished or mostly finished by this weekend, so expect good progress towards that. But there's still quite a bit to do.

There's two notes I'll just mention briefly though based off some feedback I've gotten:

Firstly; after seeing a few requests for her, I've very happily gone and included Noire into the proceedings for this chapter! 

So you can expect to see Miriel, Cynthia, Noire and Panne all in one. That's not too shabby at all I think, so please, look forward to it!

It's also pretty exciting to me because after this chapter we'll be close to getting one of my absolute favourite charactes, Say'ri, involved. I know I'm the only one that cares about that, but damn, she's so cute, so strict and serious, how can you not want to see an Empress corrupted and giving in to lustful desires?

And, on the topic of Say'ri, my second point. I've already mentioned this to a few people, but I figure I should explain it clearly too. 

I've had quite a few people who read my latest story, the Morgan one, mention how unfair it was for me to tease that scene with Robin, Say'ri and Tiki, especially on the balcony. 

And, I absolutely agree... Except that the whole point of that scene was to be something of a teaser. The idea of Robin fucking Say'ri while she's addressing her people is one that I've had since before I even started writing this story and one I've been looking forward to for a long time. So, since I know something as extreme as that is still quite a ways off, I wanted to give something like a sneak preview when I had a chance.

So! Look forward to it!

-J


Comments

Wait, you saying we can expect to see Cordelia in the chapter you are writing right now? That is awesome, looking forward to this chapter even more.

Jose Gonzalez

I will have you know that the strict but cute kind of girls are among my favs. So I am also very excited for Say'ri. Especially since I can look forward to the balcony scene happening. YEAH!

Jose Gonzalez

Hi, Hah, well that's always great to hear! Say'ri doesn't get anywhere near enough love I think! Good pickup on Cordelia actually, because you're 100% on the money. He took her completely by surprise and she's gott'a spend some time processing that before things can escalate. She's got a scene in the coming chapter (with Cynthia and Sumia...) that'll show this in more detail. So you've pretty much predicted that perfectyly haha. -J

Oh man, you are far from the only one to care about Say'ri. That's great news, and really looking forwards to that balcony scene, heh. Seems like a pretty ambitious chapter, excited for it. I can wait, but just an honest question - it seemed like Cordelia was being pulled into the swing of things a couple chapters ago. Is the intent there to have her, ah, stew on what he did for a while?

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