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Weekly Update

I've managed to make up most of the ground I lost last week when sick and I think I've got the major scope of this chapter sorted out now. It's taken long enough already (longer than I wanted at least) and (of course), it's bigger than I'd like it to be, but it's mostly coming together well.

I'm aiming to have the full scope finished this week and to finish editing/publish it by early next. So let's follow along with that goal!

Aside from that though, there's one plot point I've been going back and forth on for quite some time now. 

Essentially there's a character death that'll be mentioned in this chapter as having happened some time in the past. However, from the people I've been talking to, I've had a few requests to keep the character alive- albiet through some rather contrived means. This, of course, would mean that his wife would end up cheating on him with Robin. So I can keep him alive, just to have him cheated on?

I'm not sure exactly which way I'll go with this and obviously I'm trying to minimise the spoilers here, but it's just a case of, would you enjoy a rather contrived plot point, if it meant keeping a side character I was otherwise intending to write off, alive? Food for thought I suppose.

-J

Comments

Well now I wish I knew who the character was so I could tell if I would be horrified to learn they died! I'm personally fine with character death if it plays well into the story. Better than every woman Robin is with cheating on their husbands I guess...

Bunit117

This would also work if they are just dating and they decide to breakup to be with some one else people like Donnel and Vaike would have someone close to them at home and you avoid the name death and their story that way

Cipher92


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