nami robin page 4
Added 2021-07-07 14:54:34 +0000 UTC
Comments
He speaks for himself. This is my favorite pic of the comic so far π
Carlos Tovar
2021-08-21 16:48:24 +0000 UTCYour colors are really fucking good btw. Especially in this page.
throatforfuta
2021-07-18 12:53:12 +0000 UTCMight be time to pause this comic for now, try again later
Deag 9000
2021-07-18 11:17:17 +0000 UTCDon't get me wrong, you're one of my favorites. I just don't like this direction. Stretchy dude+giant girlcock and you basically hid his entire cock distended body between her thighs until he was a balloon.
throatforfuta
2021-07-18 04:00:36 +0000 UTCPlease don't take this the wrong way but your framing is getting worse. You get really tight in on one tiny part of the scene and it doesn't really work. Not for me anyway. It looks like what you were showing early on in pixiv as teasers for your patreon work. Like the first frame of this page. The whole "cock is bigger than his torso" thing is totally lost if you only showed the scale in one page and then just show these angles where you can barely tell what is going on.
throatforfuta
2021-07-18 03:58:10 +0000 UTCok cool
DMon
2021-07-08 12:16:26 +0000 UTCI can fix that, it's always very late when I type these out and use text spelling.
Deag 9000
2021-07-08 08:07:45 +0000 UTCFair point, it's because I practice a lot between pages on shading. It should stay roughly the same from now.
Deag 9000
2021-07-08 08:06:21 +0000 UTCAlso you keep misspelling "gona." It should be "gonna."
DMon
2021-07-08 06:00:10 +0000 UTCI like the comic so far but I feel like it would be better to make comics at your current level, and every time you get better for a new comic, because some it throws off your current style when you make every scene look better than the last, I've seen a noticeable difference in your skill level. I think it's okay if it's at least a gradually difference but more than that throws it out of balance, if you know what I'm say. But great work!
DMon
2021-07-08 05:58:50 +0000 UTC
