Progress Update - Episode 12
Added 2023-10-31 16:27:52 +0000 UTC
Quick update:
Still working on the restaurant scene(s) and will be for the next weeks also. It'll most likely be the largest scene of the update. It has a lot of smaller scenes within it and depending on path(s), you'll jump back and forth between them. The difficult part is to make them all flow together and make sense.
After the restaurant scene, there will be 2 more bigger scenes. One of those scenes, the MC will not be present, or at least not in the vicinity. I'm still debating how exactly I want to show you that scene. Either show the full scene and what's happening or have a character who is in the scene tell MC what happened. I think the first option is a little bit more interesting? Let me know.
Comments
MC never had sex with Sienna!
Chris Faes
2023-11-20 14:24:24 +0000 UTCyes good update, but it should have been the MC in the bathroom with sienna, u already can have sex with her 1 time. instead u get to watch her and her boyfriend having sex, not that interesting, some might ewen call it NTR, if u are into sienna like I am. but hopefully theMC will get another go at sienna later
danish guy
2023-11-20 12:54:54 +0000 UTCIt’s a bit difficult to know without knowing the context. In general my thoughts would be, unless there is a narrative/writing reason not to show it (ala unreliable narrator etc.), probably show it, everyone would typically enjoy seeing whatever. From the way the question is framed, it doesn’t seem like a narrative issue wasn’t a big part of the original calculation, so I definitely wouldn’t start overcomplicating things unnecessarily if it wasn’t planned that way, and (saying this in a supportive way) you have plenty on your plate already no need to add more for no reason.
trevor
2023-11-02 20:55:38 +0000 UTC
