Can I offer some constructive criticism? It probably would've been a good idea to have a panel before the first one of the girl just reading without the moth girl at the window. Which would've transitioned nicely to the first panel. For the second panel, I feel like the thought balloon is entirely unneeded. Just the girl turning around at the sound of the knocking would've been enough.
Shy
2018-10-07 05:41:41 +0000 UTC
New comic???? Please??
Graverobber Jake
2018-10-07 04:09:14 +0000 UTC
A giant moth is looking in my window and asks if it could I have my lamp at that point I would be pissing myself.