Sneak Peek - Chapter Three edits
Added 2022-11-23 08:08:39 +0000 UTCHello Patrons!
As promised, here is a little sneak peek of an 'interlude' scene in Chapter 3. I was never happy with the flow of the chapter after visiting Zikar and the MC's family with Elora. It felt too abrupt with the next scene being the banquet, so I've gone back and added in more choices for the MC to do - this also slows the pace down and gives the MC a bit more time to explore the rest of the palace.
I've written the first option and I'm currently working on Crown's scenes (which I hope to finish today). Then I'll move onto the final option.
Things to note - you will only get to do one thing. The shrine is to learn more game lore with religions - you get to learn about some animal spirits/deities which will come up when meeting the Nomad Tribes.
Crown's scenes are bonding scenes with Crown. I feel like I should add a relationship stat for Crown but then again, I'm not writing any cruel interactions with him so regardless of what you choose, Crown will always like the MC.
The last option to return to your chamber will give you a chance to read more of Ahlf's letters, look at the locket from your mother and depending on your choices in chapter 2 - you will get to inspect the ring Irus gave you or read the book that Oren bought for you.
After the interlude scenes, all that's left is adding Zikar's scenes to the banquet and extra kiss options and it'll be done 😊
Have a lovely day and thank you for your support!
