The car part at the start? Or when she leaves with the giant? It was a bit front-loaded since I ended up running out of time at the back, though also enjoy the setup of stories to help make the result more exciting. Darcy being there at the end almost didn't happen, and was just a fun bonus which I realized fit really well, rather than was planned from the start.
2022-06-30 14:43:53 +0000 UTC
It does contain some scene's like the car and the travel and so on that feel a little superfluous. Also I would have liked if you had shown the punishment of Darcy as well.
2022-06-19 00:32:20 +0000 UTC
Was too embarrassed to say anything until now, but this story is another one of yours greats man! It also got me looking on DailyDiapers so I could read the stories Dark Dweller has written too- both of you have amazing content, keep it up! <3
