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Aphrodite's Mirror (Chapter 11 Part 3)

Last part of chapter 11, guys! It's almost time for Elena to go through some more changes...

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That's a very important point!

Melissa N.

Fair point. I just thought it interesting to point out that Toska was enraged that Seferi was having an affair with another man, which is kind of what Nikos is doing in a roundabout sort of way. Just not physically. Yet. ;)

Victor Gerrett

Thanks! I'll fix that as well!

Melissa N.

Picture 15 has a text fragment without a speechbubble on the left side of Seferi. I guess this isn't supposed to be there :-)

Asmodeean

Ooh, so I wonder what happened earlier for "3 days time" one

Matthew

Yes... Possible. I meant, that Aunt Elena should ask him these questions and he better had believable answers 😉 Andrew is doomed anyway. I guess nobody here wants him to find a way out of the situation.

Asmodeean

Who knows... maybe Seferi is looking for revenge and needs allies.

Melissa N.

Ah that's possible! hehe

Melissa N.

Who knows... hehe

Melissa N.

It's possible he's looking for revenge after what happened, and needs allies.

Melissa N.

We'll learn more about Marina soon...

Melissa N.

hehe thank you, Robyn! Lots of good questions! :)

Melissa N.

I think so too!

Melissa N.

Future! :)

Melissa N.

We'll see...

Melissa N.

Yes, seems like he already starts to believe the stuff, he is being told.

Asmodeean

This is an interesting turn of events. I wonder why Seferi went out of his way to mention that he had an affair with another man. Could he somehow have a clue about "Elena's" true identity? That being said, it is interesting to see "her" get defensive about Nikos and the girls. Feeling more and more maternal. perhaps?

Victor Gerrett

I always find communication is a big issue when a couple are involved in such stories, it's always troubled me why Marina was so quick to discard her husband without giving him a chance to explain how he felt, if anything it show's how much Andrew/Elena has such a good heart for doing so much for his wife's family and yet his wife drops him like a stone, let this be a lesson for Andrew that those vows they made when wed mean nothing to Marina obviously......😔

Alison St John

Looks like Elenas only choice is a flight forward. Cant wait to see Marinas reaction when she sees her fiance went to those surgeons in Athens the mysterious woman once recommended :)

Myra

Since they have been on for a while, haven't seen Elena's concerns about the "attachments" the girls made her wear and how they might be affecting her body.

Phil G

Still, we need a motivation for Seferi… why does he go to such lenghts to help Elena and her Family. Why does he follow Mr. Toskas activities and inspects his business partners? What does he have to gain? Questions, I would ask him 🧐

Asmodeean

Love the story! We obviously would not have Mr. Toska find anything gay! In my mind, Marina is a little bit to quick to question her marriage. I mean, she should know, that Andrew is „forced“ to keep up the role. On the other hand… we know, how fast modern women tend to change their mind and abandon a man 😏

Asmodeean

So why is Marina being followed/watched? Perhaps we have an idea why - assuming Elena's companion is telling the truth. And who is offering to buy Marina a drink. It sure as hell isn't simply a chance guy who happens to be in the same bar. However, nothing seems to be as it appears on the surface and we know how devious our storyteller is don't we? I'm looking at you Melissa :)

Robyn Hoode

New Plot twists... Love it; I am guessing that Elena needs to become more 'real' to make sure Mr Toska doesn't doubt the lie

Matthew

More changes... Will that be flash-backs or a future procedure

Matthew

Elena seems to be drawn deeper and deeper into her role, now she has this information, surely she'll warn her family of the consequences of dealing with such a ruthless despicable man, could this also be a way for Elena shortening her period as a wife and mother and return to being Andrew, somehow I doubt it 🤔

Alison St John


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