MHA 77
Added 2022-02-27 01:41:12 +0000 UTCSettling in to Camp.
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No, you were right. Thanks for pointing that out.
PublicLee Speaking
2022-05-12 16:02:04 +0000 UTCThanks, sorry for pestering but it was bugging me
Alice
2022-05-12 15:31:46 +0000 UTCRight, fixed. I thought I'd done so earlier.
PublicLee Speaking
2022-05-12 15:29:52 +0000 UTCThe posted version still has: "So,” I commented, taking out my phone, and seeing it was only five after eleven. “Lunch in an hour, right?” Are you planning on changing that or the phone comment in this chapter?
Alice
2022-05-12 04:20:22 +0000 UTCSo I have been on another Hamilton kick lately and I realised it would be perfect if at Karaoke the trio performed Satisfied with Momo as Angelica, Denki as Hamilton, and Mina as Elisa.
Alice
2022-03-20 10:23:51 +0000 UTCSure good writing love MHA and DR
Alice
2022-03-01 16:07:56 +0000 UTC*facepalm* Thanks! I had the idea, and checked the previous chapter, but I forgot about that. I'll go tweak it to make it all line up. This is one of the reasons I like having a few chapters pre-release written so I can make it all line up if I have an idea like this.
PublicLee Speaking
2022-03-01 16:04:26 +0000 UTCSmall thing but in this chapter you say Dencifer doesn't have his phone but you had him pull it out in front of Aizawa and the pussycats to check the time at the end of the previous chapter
Alice
2022-03-01 13:59:03 +0000 UTCVery nice. Highly enjoyed the interaction with Ida and the subtext that the MC was missing out on. Though, I am a bit surprised that he hasn't noticed a new power for golem generation. After all he was technically in an area with a PRO level hero flexing their power at him for hours. Compared to the minutes going on an hour of combat that he had with the bird beak black thing (cannot remember its name for some reason) I don't think I'll be more than enough for his talent to pick up on it. Anyways keep up the good work hope to see another chapter from this one soon. Very interested to see if the pro heroes give actual good advice or if the MC will subvert their teachings from his own ponderings
MagisterdeVita
2022-02-27 07:07:34 +0000 UTC
