ACE 22
Added 2022-06-15 18:13:04 +0000 UTCA lesson in politics.
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But wouldn’t cause more issues and even resentment down the line from the father if he is excluded from all interactions between Jace and his daughter since the mom seem to plan to encourage the idea of marriage with Jace if Hex tech becomes a thing.
Zerak
2022-06-16 13:59:43 +0000 UTCMy read of the situation was that the farther was openly not to happy with Jayce. So the mother had him do something else both limiting their interactions and reducing the possibility of more tension between them.
Galler
2022-06-16 10:27:34 +0000 UTCAmazing chapter, I really like the character interactions. It gives the story more life. Though I don’t get why the mother would want to have the meeting when her husband is not around. If I had to guess I would say it was to show the power dynamic or something (like subtly having Jace assign no importance to the dad), but we already know (and so should Jace) that their clam is matriarchal. It could be due to not fully trusting him with everything (it’s highly likely their marriage is political so he would probably still report to his old clan). I still get the feeling that I am missing something.
Zerak
2022-06-15 23:30:25 +0000 UTCThe character interactions are indeed overly well done.
Zerak
2022-06-15 23:24:38 +0000 UTCI'm glad I'm not the only person who gets caught up in things like Rifling. So many people will write stories set in lower or side-tech worlds that use modern American English lingo, which has loan words from so many cultures and is based off of so much tech made in the last 200 years. I wish I had more examples but this happens all the time in ASOIAF stories, and I wish it'd be called out more in-story.
Caelleh
2022-06-15 18:52:29 +0000 UTCI really like how you write conversations between people. Whole chapters that are just people talking from some writers would enjoy boring but you manage to make it incredibly gripping
Commander Dragon
2022-06-15 18:49:33 +0000 UTC
