MHA 86
Added 2022-07-31 21:28:56 +0000 UTCSink or Swim
Comments
Thank goodness! One chapter covering everybody's attempt at rescue followed by the main characters doing so perfectly fine. Just getting worried that it was going to get bogged down again. Thank you for alleviating that.
MagisterdeVita
2022-08-01 05:11:51 +0000 UTCDon't worry, I'm already 2k words into the next chapter, and each team's getting ~500 words, and that's it. Denki's will be in the next chapter after that, but after that it'll be more characterization and such as they have a fireside dinner on the beach.
PublicLee Speaking
2022-08-01 00:54:19 +0000 UTCLee.... Please, I'm begging you.... Don't do each individual team in detail. An abbreviation of the ones who aren't really the man characters would be most appreciated. This happened with the hero villain training, and then the finals test and now we're about to go through another one. I fell off for a good minute during the finals test. I know you want to show off some people and characters. But please don't go into details and have scenes and everything. I want slice of Life with the main characters and action sequences and stuff. But little parts like this really slow down the story if you flush them out to completion.
MagisterdeVita
2022-07-31 23:25:37 +0000 UTCIt's a story arch and it's fleshing out the side characters which I like.
Alice
2022-07-31 22:28:50 +0000 UTCYou really like putting Dencifer with Bakugo
Alice
2022-07-31 22:27:58 +0000 UTCThis whole training camp has gone for FARRRR too long
Moonkiller24
2022-07-31 21:39:58 +0000 UTC
