Draconian Remnant 86
Added 2023-01-08 17:15:07 +0000 UTCPlaying with Fire
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I look forward to reading the fallout of his actions. I can only imagine that reevaluating how the Company pushes people down a particular path is going to take precedence for him and Pyrrha, even though she is compromised
Mickal Ross
2023-01-09 00:02:00 +0000 UTCWhile I couldn't really enjoy the chapter because of how OoC the MC felt this chapter, the lemon itself was well written.
David Hedges
2023-01-08 22:42:26 +0000 UTCThis just feels really OoC for the MC. It seems like exactly the sort of thing he would never do under almost any circumstance and exactly the sort of thing he has been having lots of drama and angst about through the story so far. So having him do this now, especially when hr refused to do it to Yang, just feels like a moralality idiot ball for some sort of plot development you want to force. Maybe you have some sort of thought process where it makes perfect sense in character for the MC to do this, but as the reader this just came out of nowhere and feels really OoC. If it isn't OoC you really need to better communicate why the MC is okay with doing this now and not before.
David Hedges
2023-01-08 22:39:01 +0000 UTC>whups yeah that about sums it up don’t you think Poor Cinder, she’ll never find another man who will emotionally and physically abuse her to that many orgasms again. (watch out, that bitch is *broken*, yo!)
pomegranate horsie
2023-01-08 22:37:15 +0000 UTCOh, don't worry, next chapter he's gonna talk to Pyrrha about this because he's REALLY not okay with what he just did, which also reaffirms his belief that relying on Company anything is a TERRIBLE idea. Pyrrha, meanwhile, will be sympathetic, but a less than positive influence.
PublicLee Speaking
2023-01-08 20:58:03 +0000 UTC*System message* You have gained +1 uncontrollable psychotic minion, have a nice day!
Alice
2023-01-08 20:57:17 +0000 UTCI just don't see how the mc would do this. He has been so traumatized from ppl having fake relationships with him that the thought of him doing it to someone else feels really out of character. This is my fav series so please don't misunderstand. It just feels really out of character for him. I don't know how to complain without sounding like I hate everything D:
Kyeen
2023-01-08 20:00:16 +0000 UTCI feel like I just wandered into a different story. Just… a lot to process with this one.
TravelerOfTime
2023-01-08 18:25:17 +0000 UTCVery nice to see our boy cut loose, even if it's in a bit of a darker way. After all this is being a harem type ability , it's nice to see more than just one woman getting down with our MC. Plus, you ain't going to really count cuz that wasn't really going anywhere fast. So I am looking forward to some of the other members of RWBY jumping Juancifer. My back's early on Weiss finally snapping when Juane does one nice thing too far that you just jumped on them.
MagisterdeVita
2023-01-08 18:04:33 +0000 UTCI’m… not sure how I feel about this chapter.
Tyric Gaias
2023-01-08 18:03:00 +0000 UTC
