MHA 101
Added 2023-04-23 06:19:50 +0000 UTCForest Riot.
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This needs to be a story! I will throw money at you too continue this!
daniel koval
2023-05-19 03:38:52 +0000 UTCAnd Momo gains a level in badass.
Steven Stiring
2023-04-25 19:35:28 +0000 UTCThanks for the catch, I completely missed it (K-names, man.)! Fixed now!
PublicLee Speaking
2023-04-23 15:15:19 +0000 UTCThought Denkifer was arriving on scene here, just a typo of Yaomomo warning Kirishima. Damn K names. Should I just count the paragraphs and give you a number instead of copy/pasting it if I find typos? I'm not really going to bother with small stuff like using the wrong to/too/two, but stuff that interupts the flow like yelling Kaminari instead of Kirishima. Or should I just leave things alone? I don't wanna be a dick. [Closing, she threw more blades at him, one striking deep enough to catch in his shoulder, but he ignored it, slamming a rock hard fist right into her face, dropping her, turning to the others, hearing Yaoyorozu yell, “Kaminari!” but he already saw what she was doing, covering Ice-Sight with the same blue foam she’d used on Ida during the Sports Festival, so he grabbed blade-arms by the leg, the Villain still slinging them out in every direction, and threw her into the other foam-covered woman, whose binding were connecting her to a nearby tree, then rushed the guy, body-checking him.] I see we'll be getting a Denkifer persepctive every third chapter or so for a bit, but I do hope it won't be long before you stop making me think "Alright, how the hell are these guys gonna find out shits hit the fan?" I can relax when they already know shits bad, but otherwise I'm just tense. I thought you'd add some oc villains to the mix, I did not think you'd toss THREE of them at one group. That tells me is theres gonna be a lot more villains in this summer camp than in canon, like twice maybe even thrice as many. I feel like Manga might have said "Hidden" and then didn't run away and then got blown up so now his corpse is just hidden in the woods until his Quirk wears off. Hope the howl is just Shishida. Finally, you're god damn right you're on a first name basis after tonight. Great stuff as always.
Gray Apples
2023-04-23 13:50:12 +0000 UTC
