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Added 2023-06-14 17:22:35 +0000 UTCA Restful Stay.
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So, according to Howl at the Moon, time passes 100x faster than it does for Steven's world. In the final chapters, Steven's first batch of children are still in elementary school when he tells one of his wives, Victoria aka Gloria, that he found Lee and wants to take her to meet him. https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/howl-at-the-moon.16922/page-42#post-5232160 But this chapter implies many generations have passed for the people on Steven's side when Steven should be the only one who experienced the 900 years through his extra bodies. What's up with that? Did he create a pocket dimension to stuff people in and recruited Wolf Faunus, or did his wives/bitches (that's what Waifu's are called in the CYOA Howl at the Moon used) also get extra bodies and those bodies had kid of their own or what?
cybersonicyoash
2023-10-09 02:37:38 +0000 UTCI am almost certain that the wolf is a Cherico, probably the one from this Lee's basic training.
Jonathan Marchand
2023-09-14 01:09:53 +0000 UTCThis was a very interesting interlude. Can't help but wonder what the initials SL stand for..
Daniel Einspanjer
2023-06-25 00:22:04 +0000 UTCOn a second go through, that does make sense.
Magneato
2023-06-15 17:05:50 +0000 UTCI think what they’re saying is “when three hours of your three days remain, we’ll warn you” Fae do tend to deal in 3’s.
pomegranate horsie
2023-06-15 17:03:39 +0000 UTCDunno if a beta reader looked this one over, but I spotted a typo. Mr. Sparkle first says their stay will last three days, and then shortly afterwards Heather says it’ll be three hours instead. Other than that, excellent work! Cannot wait to see the devastation of the Beacon Buster!
Magneato
2023-06-15 14:49:00 +0000 UTCThis whole house reeks of the Fae. Has their handiwork written all over it. I wonder if Mr. Sparkle or this Ancestress Ishiyama is Lee's Patron?
Silent_Ninja10
2023-06-15 07:21:34 +0000 UTCMan I have no idea wtf is happening.
thevolunteer
2023-06-15 06:24:21 +0000 UTCThey will not, though they will remember more than they should due to their innate... let's call it spell resistance, which their fellow Huntsmen do not possess.
PublicLee Speaking
2023-06-15 01:36:47 +0000 UTCWill the remember the name Lee Elric?
Zerak
2023-06-15 01:00:04 +0000 UTCIt also helps that it's complete and utter bullshit, and Steven Sparkle (Protagonist from Cherico's Story 'Howl at the Moon') is just trying to help change things to help his friend, who, when he finally finds out, is... not going to be happy.
PublicLee Speaking
2023-06-15 00:43:10 +0000 UTC*shrug* Like everyone else I have been shaped by my experiences. I grew up in a Christian household so that's how I see it and that's how I would comment on it.
Steven Stiring
2023-06-15 00:06:07 +0000 UTCNot everyone is copying the Bible dude. That trope almost certainly existed before the Bible (I know at least 1 Greek myth that uses it) and it is a common trope in fiction. In fact, I've seen that trope more often than the Chosen One actually being recognized as such before the very end of a story.
David Hedges
2023-06-14 23:57:12 +0000 UTCLmao. They made a whole ass prophecy for Jauncifer. That’s going to be hilarious to reveal later on considering how utterly clueless he currently is.
TravelerOfTime
2023-06-14 23:17:02 +0000 UTCI like the fact that Junicfer is being described as a savior while the people who have been told over and over again that he is a dragon are dismissing him from filling the role. Very much a "and they knew him not" parallel from the Bible. It's incredibly pretentious to do for a self insert character but self-inserts are usually pretentious in almost every other way so doing this gets a pass. Well at least for me, I can't speak for others when you post this on the form.
Steven Stiring
2023-06-14 22:01:40 +0000 UTCIt is going to be such a treat when these two ships passing in the night finally catch sight of each other. Really hope one of those pamphlets make it back to our boy and the wizard.
Prospero
2023-06-14 19:11:44 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!!
Tyler Tate
2023-06-14 18:25:10 +0000 UTC
