ACE 2-1
Added 2023-06-16 19:32:24 +0000 UTCThree Years Later.
Comments
Nice intro to book 2, but I think you went over past events too much introducing everyone again (if briefly).
Zerak
2023-06-17 01:33:05 +0000 UTCGota love those ingrained societal niceties.
Zerak
2023-06-17 01:32:03 +0000 UTCLadies and Gentlemen. We’re back in business.
TravelerOfTime
2023-06-16 23:58:59 +0000 UTCThat did it, thanks. It was a fun read with all the techno babble and all and I highly enjoy reading the interaction between the four techies and their strengths and weaknesses. I'm excited to see how VI and Caitlin have come along as well. Are they still rivals or have they broached into the territory of frenemies. Or seeing as how they are basically a Canon couple, has a bit of Sparks of romance come up. Also interested to see what's going on in the under City. I imagine some of the tech of the day found underground is being implemented. Can't wait for more.
MagisterdeVita
2023-06-16 23:23:03 +0000 UTCTry it again? You might've clicked it in the couple minutes I was re-uploading it. If not, please tell me and I'll try and see what I can do.
PublicLee Speaking
2023-06-16 22:32:21 +0000 UTCSoooo, for some reason when I click the attachment it comes up as attachment not found. Not sure what's going on there.
MagisterdeVita
2023-06-16 22:21:23 +0000 UTCYeah, I realized that afterwards. I've updated the attached file with that fixed, along with some other minor clarifications. That said, nothing materially has changed about it.
PublicLee Speaking
2023-06-16 21:37:29 +0000 UTCWoo! My favorite story. (Ekko should probably be referred to as just dark-skinned or Black, rather than "African-American", due to the lack of... ya know Africa or America in the setting.)
Rosenheim
2023-06-16 21:12:43 +0000 UTC
