Naruto Waifu-Den #4 First Half
Added 2023-06-24 17:39:27 +0000 UTCWhen I've got it all down and edited, I'll post it on QQ. Until then, Enjoy!
Comments
Love the different view points, extras vs avoiding the chance to get taken advantage of. Will make it all the better when they finally talk it out. So with 'Narutos' response coming from their soul and likely very stream-of-consciousness, plus the talk no jutsu that's mostly instinctive, what are the chances Li gets hit across the face with the growing crush on him?
Prospero
2023-06-26 21:00:43 +0000 UTCExcept, having worked as a High School Teacher, teenage rebellion is not universal, despite what media and society in general like to say, nor is its target universally against parents and other authority figures like that. There's teenage drama, in how she'd feeling insecure and dumping on Sakura, but expecting these characters to act like Modern American/Western teens will lead you astray. And, if you really want to go that way, the fact that she thinks 'Naruto' isn't that bad, compared to her parents hatred of 'him', is a rebellion in of itself.
PublicLee Speaking
2023-06-26 02:56:16 +0000 UTCThing is, though, she is 16. Prime Rebellion Phase Territory. Really, there should still be a lot more doubt than what was shown. Even if you did have a military upbringing, there should be some shred of doubt.
Harley Shockley
2023-06-26 02:12:59 +0000 UTCIt's easy to form an opinion, especially if you're basing it off of someone you trust, like your parents, and a lot harder to realize that you're wrong, especially if it means someone you trust was wrong as well, and thus their judgement is now questionable.
PublicLee Speaking
2023-06-26 02:00:32 +0000 UTCOk I liked it, on the other hand I actually agree with some of the other characters viewpoints. Lee is being way to free with sharing his knowledge and abilities with everyone else. It’s not bad to raise up your group but when you are casually sharing earthshaking abilities with all and sundry you might have screwed up somewhere. Not to mention with how mercenary ninja are, they are going to wrong Lee dry, then dump him to the side with nothing to show for it. I might be reading into things to hard here but that’s the feeling I am getting. General knowledge would be fine to share but just casually sharing secrets in the land of mystical assassins is just stupid. Finally I am intrigued by the different characters growth, and it will interesting to see what happens when Naruko gets more in tune with the fox while becoming more spirit based herself
daniel koval
2023-06-25 13:29:48 +0000 UTCI can see the work of Destiny happening with the tsundere. She still doesn’t like “Naruto”, even though they have spent weeks together.
Harley Shockley
2023-06-25 06:47:05 +0000 UTCThe thing that actually interested me most was the orange text at the end. Was that just Naruko getting spirituality stronger or the fox waking up a little bit more?
Steven Stiring
2023-06-25 03:54:42 +0000 UTCWell not a Tsundere, but yes communication failure. But to be fair to her she is treating him like what she knows about other Ninja. And it’s probably fen worst in other villages. Li is an outlier not the rule. Granted she shouldn’t expect everyone to follow the norm, but that comes with experience, something she doesn’t have.
Zerak
2023-06-25 00:53:52 +0000 UTCWhat's this I see... A Tsundere that's misinterpreting things. Well that can only end in great times. Also, I love seeing other characters perspective of the b******* that most isekia MC get up to. The hell butterfly was especially good touch. Oh also I'm not sure if you change this earlier or not but you call Naruto's team at the beginning team 6 instead of team 7.
MagisterdeVita
2023-06-24 21:08:27 +0000 UTCKakashi Moment
NOPE YOU DON'T KNOW MY NAME
2023-06-24 20:39:24 +0000 UTCWhen talking about Team 10 you forgot an "and" when listing the members.
Meudon
2023-06-24 19:05:09 +0000 UTC
