DR 107
Added 2024-07-03 15:06:27 +0000 UTCSeeing With New Eyes
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...for some reason i want to see the entire teams reaction if Jaune were to do the reveal as, 1. they get led to the sweet home with Jaune already being in there. 2. they see Jaune in his full dragon form. 3. Jaune says, "I told you I was a Dragon."
Joseph Fera
2024-07-03 20:54:03 +0000 UTCOk that was an amazing chapter, you just completely salvaged Blake character arc! We got to see her thoughts and see how alien Jaune can be from someone else’s eyes. I really look forward to seeing more of this and seeing his team and his friends interact. Looking forward to seeing them act as his council and work to understand him while retaining some of their ties to humanity while Jaune has little to none at this point. Very very well done!
daniel koval
2024-07-03 20:29:59 +0000 UTCFrankly that all gets summed into the main point of empowerment. For better or worse this is a scenario where once the team cross the Person of Mass Destruction limit their personal characteristics won't matter anymore.
Guilherme Bezerra
2024-07-03 20:17:29 +0000 UTCShe's kind of confused but she's got spirit of some kind
Gamestructo Utopiaman
2024-07-03 20:06:14 +0000 UTCWelp, this Blake is definitely shaping up as a possible harem member. (And a much better person than the canon Blake.) Pyrrha must be feeling quietly smug.
Apeljohn
2024-07-03 20:05:54 +0000 UTCMight not be an issue. I figure there's another timer running in the background for when they get empowered enough that minor shapeshifting just comes with the package. Due to the dragon-adjacent nature of kitties, Blake got unlucky as to which landed first.
Apeljohn
2024-07-03 20:04:11 +0000 UTCI really love this story, you are using this IP to much greater payoff than the show.
Alice
2024-07-03 17:59:12 +0000 UTCThe day Jaune is forced to turn into a full dragon publically is going to have sooooo much "I told you so" payoff at this point that it's hilarious. Great work, Lee. As always.
Devin
2024-07-03 17:39:25 +0000 UTCAt some point, Juancifer is going to reveal to her, and she's just going to go, "My mom is going to KILL me."
The GrandMage
2024-07-03 17:25:20 +0000 UTCAs much as I dislike Blake's original character I am enjoying a lot how the narrative is developing her as a whole and where things seem to be headed. Mind you she is going to be gobsmacked when the reveal happens and its going to be extra funny because of that. I suppose the timer is finally going terminal when the empowerment becomes notable. It is one thing for the not!faunus to get slitted eyes but how exactly is is Weiss going to justify it ?
Guilherme Bezerra
2024-07-03 17:03:22 +0000 UTCWhat great characterization of a very complex relationship.
Mark
2024-07-03 16:58:35 +0000 UTCExcellent, one step closer to the reveal.
Ramon Diaz
2024-07-03 15:31:25 +0000 UTC
