XMWL 07
Added 2024-10-17 22:11:02 +0000 UTCSpeech One
Next up, the MSP Kommission!
Comments
Good chapter. Only complaint is you kept name dropping Eric, but the girls didn't ask who that was. I don't think they would know about him.
Kurlinni
2024-10-20 13:43:28 +0000 UTCSo, i reread the entire fic and it only took me an hour. and a random question came to mind, how long have you been working on DR and MHA?
Joseph Fera
2024-10-19 00:31:36 +0000 UTCThe last time I watched X-men evolution, I was still in single digits in terms of age, so I genuinely cannot remember if Spike was a bad or annoying character.
Vincent Mason
2024-10-18 01:56:39 +0000 UTCLet me guess if this story gets enough money Lee will eventually have to give all nine speeches.
Steven Stiring
2024-10-18 01:39:33 +0000 UTCEdit successfully murder -> successful
Meudon
2024-10-18 01:18:34 +0000 UTCEvolutions fics are great... but your stuff hits different... and not just because you're foreshadowing Rouge and Shadowcat being part of the same harem.
Joseph Fera
2024-10-18 00:46:03 +0000 UTCDammit, now I need to wait until the next time this crops up to learn the rest of the 9 speeches.
Guilherme Bezerra
2024-10-17 23:48:05 +0000 UTCNo, don't go, it's so good... TFTC, As good as the first run was, and as much as I enjoy Evolution, this one knocked it out of the park. The fight, the deconstruction, the character developement, the genuine pain at realising how long it's gonna be before we get more of the 9 speeches which are so fucking good, it all just worked Seriously tho', the set of 9 is one of my favourite nuggets of worldbuilding, both for Lee and the series, and was written so well it flowed; Same as the bloodhound speech in L.D.W.
Mr Mouse
2024-10-17 23:07:26 +0000 UTC
