Multiverse Glimpse 25 Dokushin Tensei Part 1
Added 2024-10-27 05:35:00 +0000 UTC*Slaps Soul*
That's a lot of powers!
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It's on purpose (Only so many colors to use, and gold's already Rudcifer's color, because of his lightning magic), but there's only going to be one more conversation with her until, well, possibly the end of the entire series.
PublicLee Speaking
2024-10-29 18:59:51 +0000 UTCCan I ask that you use a slightly more readable (darker) yellow for yellow text? A decent chunk of the opening to this chapter is completely illegible to me without removing your formatting.
KunouNoHana
2024-10-27 19:03:48 +0000 UTCI'll include it in the last chapter of the Glimpse.
PublicLee Speaking
2024-10-27 17:21:48 +0000 UTCAnd here we go, the one I've been anticipating since reading "see you later, space cowboy" from Cherico.
SoraWolf7
2024-10-27 15:57:43 +0000 UTCA harsh but accurate commentary on the lead protagonist of the series. Well at least in this one he will have a very valid reason not to have any sex scenes for the first 400,000 words.
Steven Stiring
2024-10-27 15:47:32 +0000 UTCThere is so much you can do here, I’m excited
Tyric Gaias
2024-10-27 14:57:07 +0000 UTCSetting seems fine for an isekai adventure, though I expect a lot of problems arising from Paul. RudLee here is going to be pissed at him constantly. And then there is the cheating with the mais thing if I am remembering right. Honestly curious what CYOA was used. Mage something maybe? The build is also brutal af. If it wasn't so damn depowered. Any chance to see it ?
Guilherme Bezerra
2024-10-27 13:23:49 +0000 UTC...Yeah, this is about the only way I can see a Lee SI ending up in the loli anime. > Because the reason the scientific method was so hard to use correctly, and took so long to catch on, was that it required both intelligence and /humility/. Oof. On the one hand: fair summary. On the other hand: I'm wincing on behalf of the first 6,000 years of human civilisation and its intellectuals. Never were so many roasted so accurately by so few words.
Apeljohn
2024-10-27 08:54:03 +0000 UTCI knew it was Jobless Reincarnation! And gah so many abilities, can’t wait to see what masterpiece of world building Leecifer spits out next for this story. Good luck with your writing man!
Lillow Lynx
2024-10-27 07:15:18 +0000 UTCFair enough. My lower-middle class urban upbringing, then.
PublicLee Speaking
2024-10-27 07:14:36 +0000 UTCmeh, i'm a southern boy, me, my cousins, and my best friends jumping into a local pond nude wasn't unusual, so i can kinda see that happening.
Joseph Fera
2024-10-27 07:12:56 +0000 UTCTo be fair, given my western values, even if I thought Sylphy was a guy, I still wouldn't strip 'him' naked because 'we're both kids, what's the problem?'
PublicLee Speaking
2024-10-27 06:37:38 +0000 UTCAh, so it's jobless reincarnation not slime...i can already guess there won't be as many funny harem antics, cause you wouldn't mistake Sylphy for a guy.
Joseph Fera
2024-10-27 06:28:07 +0000 UTC
