MG 25 DT Pt5 re-upload
Added 2024-11-01 19:03:06 +0000 UTCNew Year, New Problems
(The App was screwing up the attachment when I tried to fix it, so we're trying this again)
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unrelated to this story. i just got finished with reading the first...arc of your worm fic, and i feel bad cause i was laughing almost the whole time, and skidmark really is a dumbass my first 2 thoughts when i read about his power were 3-d movement and instant railgun...though if i were in that situation, i probably would've thrown caution to the wind and layered on as many as i could or 100 which ever came first...and blown my arm off in the process.
Joseph Fera
2024-11-04 03:00:13 +0000 UTChave you been reading his stuff?! ALL his cliffhangers are evil! that's what he's really good at, ending it at a point where you want to throw something when you realize you're all caught up!
Joseph Fera
2024-11-03 04:51:59 +0000 UTCor it'll be something about how he will not talk to him in that manner in his house, could go either way...and honestly, at this point in the story, i think Paul would've been more likely to double down and steep in his pride.
Joseph Fera
2024-11-03 04:48:49 +0000 UTCThat very last teaser made all the difference. It shows that Paul may begin a Redemption Ark so that we don't hate him and wish that you would murder him in his sleep.
Steven Stiring
2024-11-02 01:14:51 +0000 UTCI'm guessing Paul didn't notice but at the end of Lee's verbal smackdown, he said 'Your Family' not 'Our Family'... I don't really blame him considering what they did/let happen to him.
TheTinyGrayDog
2024-11-02 00:53:23 +0000 UTCOh Paul, you meathead. I really Lee might kill him. Resurrect him after but kill all the same
Tyric Gaias
2024-11-02 00:34:58 +0000 UTCOooh, I got CHILLS at the end there. And I totally get needing to have a part in a fic where your MC has to just VENT, I literally just did that.
SoraWolf7
2024-11-01 22:37:57 +0000 UTCThis was a fantastic chapter but they always leave me hanging!
EnforcerBudu
2024-11-01 22:25:24 +0000 UTCHoly shit, I felt my guts twist at that explosion!
Joseph Fera
2024-11-01 21:00:00 +0000 UTCOh thank god, because that right there was a particularly evil looking cliffhanger
Mr Mouse
2024-11-01 20:10:24 +0000 UTCI'll tell you when it's over. I got a... bit ambitious, but, as you can tell, it's flowing VERY easily.
PublicLee Speaking
2024-11-01 19:54:27 +0000 UTCIs there more of this coming or will we have to commission it now?
Seraphi
2024-11-01 19:53:38 +0000 UTCGreat chapter again
Seraphi
2024-11-01 19:52:50 +0000 UTCEdits sorry, I though, -> thought meeting other six-year-olds -> met
Meudon
2024-11-01 19:33:43 +0000 UTCThank you!
Rylando
2024-11-01 19:03:38 +0000 UTC
