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Added 2024-11-10 17:46:21 +0000 UTCHalcyon Days
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OOF that next cliff 😭
James French
2024-11-11 07:12:28 +0000 UTCdamn, really? you cliffhang us there! right before the possible explosion! ...you evil man! but you're one of the best authors i've read when it comes to cliffhanger chapter ends.
Joseph Fera
2024-11-11 04:17:12 +0000 UTCHmmm. Yeah, this isn't going to go well, is it?
The GrandMage
2024-11-11 02:45:27 +0000 UTCYounger siblings are to be protected from everyone and everything, except older siblings. It's our right as older siblings to torment them as a tax for how much we protect them.
Steven Stiring
2024-11-11 01:47:09 +0000 UTCAs much as I don't like this Paul, I would prefer if Lilia was not kicked out, it is still Rudy's sister.
Ramon Diaz
2024-11-10 21:25:50 +0000 UTCOh, so the next part is where you (attempt to?) castrate Paul. Good to know that wasn't sidestepped. I know it's needed early on, but the focus on you telling us about the power development instead of showing us through action or interaction is dragging a bit for me. Other than that I really enjoyed how you react to meeting a true genius child, and the interaction with Roxy learning more of the truth.
Steven Stiring
2024-11-10 21:13:36 +0000 UTCNext chapter promises to have a lot of consequences... Sylphie was adorable as expected. Poor Rudy has no idea of the monster he is creating. Roxy is now in the inner circle lol. And I suppose we got some more of the CYOA choices fleshed out. Both "flavours" of elves are confirmed though I honestly curious what this Dragon is going to end up being considering Orsted exists...
Guilherme Bezerra
2024-11-10 19:45:45 +0000 UTCOooooh, how I've been waiting for that little last tid bit. The OG Rudy did everything in his power to keep his family together because he wanted to hold on to it. You're Rudy though... With how he feels about betrayal and his feelings on Paul.... Well, I think things will be quite, EXPLOSIVE! Hope he doesn't take it too much on Lilia though and his unborn sibling, but from your past works characters trauma with certain type of women, I won't hold my breath.
MagisterdeVita
2024-11-10 19:41:18 +0000 UTCLee, you can't keep getting away with these cliff hangers!
EnforcerBudu
2024-11-10 19:21:27 +0000 UTCooh the shitshow next chapter is gonna be juicy
suspiciouscoffee
2024-11-10 19:02:12 +0000 UTCEdits can’t reasonable promise -> reasonably But we aren’t hear -> here
Meudon
2024-11-10 18:58:10 +0000 UTC
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