DR 115
Added 2024-12-05 08:49:13 +0000 UTCFall Term Starts: Disembarking Difficulties
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coming back to Christmas you say? yeah that count as a flag.
Adamas Shield
2025-01-11 00:13:24 +0000 UTCcan't world hop yet, Jauncifer's at like 93-97% if i remember right and i think that last bit isn't coming till he gets past beacon's original destruction date...unless this behemoth kills one of the main cast at this point, from what i understand that'd fill the bar up to... ...Lee, you ain't gonna kill off the cinnamon roll cookie monster are you?
Joseph Fera
2024-12-23 18:09:09 +0000 UTCHuh, the ACE captain just raised a death flag. Makes me wonder if we are starting the "Fuck this I'm out" level of bad that starts the world jumping.
Steven Stiring
2024-12-06 03:06:08 +0000 UTCRuby's team in DR is Rowan (RRWN), and, let's be honest, even the Canon ones were often a stretch (RNJR, SSSN, FNKI, etc.).
PublicLee Speaking
2024-12-05 23:27:19 +0000 UTC...this is gonna be like the spider behemoth ain't it?
Joseph Fera
2024-12-05 13:52:13 +0000 UTCActually reading a bit further showed that it was referring to the canon team, but that is kinda confusing since the first think I think of when I hear RWBy is Ruby’s team which would have Nora and Ren. Half the alternative naming doesn’t make sense half the time or require more than a cursory read to understand, so breaks immersion. I made a doc with all the alternative names (well still building it) and I do find a replace before I start reading. I stopped reading any of Lee’s stories for a while from how much that was annoying me. This the find and replace.
Zerak
2024-12-05 13:44:55 +0000 UTCAlso RWBY is wrong since different teams.
Zerak
2024-12-05 13:41:02 +0000 UTCEdits meaning, which meant that -> pick one politely informed him -> it politely purposed of her Semblance -> purpose Consider I breathe -> considering moment before impact, dissolving -> dissolved her partners attack -> partner's physically kicking them -> kicked Advance Beowulf -> advanced and why my sword-work -> while my so switched to Ice -> so I
Meudon
2024-12-05 11:43:52 +0000 UTCqueue the quiet freaking out or more likely suspicion at eight "first years" taking out a tide, even a small one
suspiciouscoffee
2024-12-05 10:23:06 +0000 UTCFor sure just thought I'd point it out, I think your writing is great
Alice
2024-12-05 09:20:00 +0000 UTCFixed. (It'll go on the QQ version as trying to update the Patreon one breaks the post a quarter if the time.)
PublicLee Speaking
2024-12-05 09:13:47 +0000 UTCThank you that was a great chapter, 'meaning, which meant that,' repetitive statement might want to cut 1 of them
Alice
2024-12-05 09:11:58 +0000 UTC
