MHA 133
Added 2025-01-01 06:51:40 +0000 UTCMeet the Parents 2: Bullshit Boogaloo
Happy New Year!
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28, if you count my on hiatus stories.
PublicLee Speaking
2025-01-02 05:14:44 +0000 UTCTo be fair, I really loved this chapter you just are writing fanfiction in what 15 IP's? More? Sometimes continuity errors happen
Alice
2025-01-02 04:38:59 +0000 UTCOoof, definitely off my game a bit with this chapter. That one was a typo, unlike Alice's cach. I meant to say I hadn't Stamped any of the Sages, given the earlier conversation about not Stamping anyone in the Avatar-verse.
PublicLee Speaking
2025-01-01 23:42:36 +0000 UTCRight, damn, good catch! ... Hmm. Okay, I'm gonna retcon that to her Dad being the one that has the Acid Quirk, as it's never come up or been plot relevant before (I had vague ideas for her family but nothing super specific before I got to work on this chapter, only general characterizations), and if anyone asks, by all means, tell them you caught it and inspired the change.
PublicLee Speaking
2025-01-01 23:40:25 +0000 UTCMina's family may not be true infernal beings, but Sparky made sure they burned all the same.
Steven Stiring
2025-01-01 14:13:33 +0000 UTCEdits as it called itself, seemed fair. -> worked seemed bringing up his furniture, as I stood -> helping as I weren’t use to them -> used more fixed, as shrugged -> as she shrugged
Meudon
2025-01-01 14:09:54 +0000 UTCDenki, no, you fool. Don't tell your bound lover about another girl who seems interested and whose parents were cool with it. You'll never be able to slow the growth of your harem at this rate!
The GrandMage
2025-01-01 11:48:45 +0000 UTCSo I only caught this on my second pass at the chapter and it is a minor thing but, previously in chapter 23 you implied Mina's mom had a acid Quirk: She looked me over, before flopping back to the side. "Still cool," she declared, idly tracing the faint patterns of power on my skin. "Though, can I just say how freaky it was when you used my power? Like, the stuff you made felt like my stuff. Like, not even the acids my mom can make feel that way. Did you have All Might's power when we, um, were here last?" I don't think it really matters but I'm also not sure if her mom having a charm quirk is important or if you want/need to do anything about it just thought I'd point it out, I know I can be a bit obsessed with plot inconsistency
Alice
2025-01-01 09:27:07 +0000 UTCHappy new year! That chapter was really intense, I really appreciate your writing because I can almost feel the emotions bleeding out of the pages in the intense moments
Alice
2025-01-01 07:25:18 +0000 UTCGreat chapter as always, but I'm a bit confused on this line. While I hadn’t killed any of them, [in reference to fire sages]. Doesn't this line from chapter 128 contradict that? Crack! One Sages head exploded, as a staggering Denki killed him, but the others were able to attack anyways, flames bathing Aang, as Sokka felt his breath catch in his throat, only the fires compressed, forming a sphere, and were parted, and-
El Lando
2025-01-01 07:19:51 +0000 UTC
