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LAUGHTER Pt 6

4,5,6: Dazed and Confused

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Damn, you sure this isn’t in a Doctor Who universe? This situation that Lee is in sure looks like something from Doctor Who.

Harley Shockley

APs are only for things found in-universe, as they're a way to get normally bloodline-locked powers that the Talents wouldn't normally give you, like the Sharingan, or being a Demigod.

PublicLee Speaking

Can this Lee gain the Added Potential of the Doctor? His intellect and perception would rapidly rise until he could figure a way to end that eldritch being for good.

Harley Shockley

While there is no adventuring going on this fic the stress is very well shown, with Lee truly feeling the loss of autonomy all the time. Can he even use the gained points in a constructive manner?

Guilherme Bezerra

It's Eldritch Horror. That's expected. But it's me, so it'll get better.

PublicLee Speaking

This is straight depressing

aj0413

Heh, the more you subvert Eric as the main character the more episodes you skip, and the more you will be emotionally and sexually blue balled. Can't wait to see your reaction when you get the memories of a summer full of sex and companionship but the season finally just ended in your perspective.

Steven Stiring

With how tired he’s getting, it seems like the world’s scene shifts and resisting the ambiance cues are taking a toll on him. If there’s any defense to help against that, he should buy/build towards that ASAP.

Flbiv

This is both the most low stakes and most high stakes story you have, I honestly don’t know how you have introduced this level of tension into a sitcom about the 70’s. Also since this is right after the Vietnam war I hope to see a genre shift into Cold War shenanigans. It would be really interesting to see you do a deep dive into that period of history especially if the MC somehow gets tied up with the CIA or some other alphabet group.

daniel koval

"I have to get the fuck out of here before your father finds out I fixed something in his house" is such a mood. I love it. I can't wait until episode 9, where him not being with Donna will have another major impact. I'd say he might learn what's working, but I think he needs to deal with his issues first before he can work it out.

The GrandMage

Edits reasoning. and -> And // , and and even kinda -> and she possible Mr. Forman -> possibly so hadn’t said -> so I

Meudon

This is kinda of stressful. I want MOAR!!!!!

Tyric Gaias


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