Born to Ken Chapter 3
Added 2025-02-27 20:31:35 +0000 UTCGlitzy Gains
And, yeah, I wrote more than I planned, so this is part 1 of 2. Never let it be said that I under-deliver, ;)
Comments
Took a glimpse at your sw story and my first thought was ‘it’s gonna be based on/around new original characters and storylines and not the familiar cast I’m hoping for’. That might be why it didn’t do so well, the unfamiliar being the core of the story and not an addition, that puts it closer to original story than fanfiction. Just my thoughts and opinions. Still looks like you’ve already done half the needed research, so I hope you reconsider writing a sw the clone wars story. Thanks
Boopthesilence
2025-03-01 10:59:45 +0000 UTCThat's because I normally finish it, look back, and go 'Oh, yeah, this is two chapters'. Here I got halfway and went, 'Oh, no, this isn't going to be one.' I was busy with IRL stuff today, and will be tomorrow as well, so expect it Sunday or Monday.
PublicLee Speaking
2025-03-01 04:23:50 +0000 UTCSame. Is it entitled of me that I expected part two today? Because that’s usually how it goes when Lee over-delivers on a commission.
Rylando
2025-03-01 01:16:43 +0000 UTCI had a SW story (SW: A Penumbral Path), but interest in it wasn't terribly high. I might get back to it, some day.
PublicLee Speaking
2025-03-01 00:46:06 +0000 UTCSuffering from success.
Seraphi
2025-02-28 16:52:23 +0000 UTCThis chapter just makes me want a lee in Star Wars the clone wars even more. No chance of adding it to a poll?
Boopthesilence
2025-02-28 07:23:17 +0000 UTCHeh, he already is. He's such a victim of his own success he doesn't have as much time for his original work as he probably thought he'd have when he first started his Kofi page.
Steven Stiring
2025-02-28 04:08:15 +0000 UTCLive dangerously Capbie, live dangerously.
Steven Stiring
2025-02-28 04:05:46 +0000 UTCOhhhh man now I can't wait for part 2.
SoraWolf7
2025-02-27 22:24:25 +0000 UTCRock solid release. Thanks!
Adam Daw
2025-02-27 22:15:24 +0000 UTCEdits more vulnerably students -> vulnerable How could you tell,” -> tell? coming form -> from so picked up the slack -> so he cold shoulder by the -> from the all round strength. -> all-around
Meudon
2025-02-27 21:42:22 +0000 UTCAhh, yes, Barbie types are weak against romantic attacks.
The GrandMage
2025-02-27 21:39:39 +0000 UTCIf I had the money, I'd pay for all your stories so you could focus on them to your hearts content.
Tyric Gaias
2025-02-27 21:17:55 +0000 UTCOh no! Paranoid Barbie was right! He is going to corrupt the team...with kindness and love!
William H
2025-02-27 21:10:06 +0000 UTCYay!!!!
Tyric Gaias
2025-02-27 20:49:09 +0000 UTC
