DR 119
Added 2025-03-25 22:08:00 +0000 UTCSparring Schnees
Comments
Fantastic.
Mark
2025-03-26 20:03:52 +0000 UTCIt was 4.5k words, which is average for me, but fight scenes go by quickly, as does Torchwick's particular style.
PublicLee Speaking
2025-03-26 09:47:22 +0000 UTC...am i fast reader or was this a slightly shorter chapter then normal? not complaining, it was still good, liked the subtle confusion Winter was showing during and after the dual with Weiss...and if Weiss had spared with Winter alongside Ruby...pretty sure Winter would be on the ground with a sniper barrel pointed at her head within 10 seconds of the spar going up a notch
Joseph Fera
2025-03-26 06:05:11 +0000 UTCIf Lee was a dick he could just fuck the family abuse outta winter. But dude has morals so that ain't happening with out a Lotta character development on her part. Now I just wish we'd get some glynda action in cause hot for teacher and once she mentally understands Jaune is in the same league as Oz her need for decorum should lessen allowing her to lighten up. I'm definitely not just saying this cause I want jaune to put the boob window to use with a tit fuck
Bishop7053
2025-03-26 00:31:32 +0000 UTCConsidering that Maiden Power causes her to cry fire, and Cinder only ever had half of it...and Amber has been getting some of Jaunecifer Juice on the regular and is apparently recovering fast, this might be an indication of decreasing power?
Denn Mael
2025-03-26 00:31:15 +0000 UTCEdit What do you mean.” -> mean?
Meudon
2025-03-26 00:17:23 +0000 UTCHer competition is an alcoholic & neglectful mother, a jealously conniving younger brother that thinks if he undercuts her enough he can become heir (as he should), and Jacques.
PublicLee Speaking
2025-03-25 23:09:39 +0000 UTCaww, i was hoping to see this from Actual Ice Queen's perspective, but weiss being squee happy is good civ anyways
suspiciouscoffee
2025-03-25 23:06:46 +0000 UTC...And Winter is the _less_ abusive family member?
Apeljohn
2025-03-25 23:05:22 +0000 UTCI didn't even consider that Cinder would get a power up, although likely minor, from her and Jaune's "picnic", but that spark of lightning is pretty suggestive.
El Lando
2025-03-25 22:37:25 +0000 UTC
