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ACE 2-28

Ms. Fortune

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Edits introductions were not need -> needed her parents bodies -> parents' which had peaked her interest -> piqued novel, to route, to expected -> rote coral that’s wreck -> that'd he could wave away -> waive Or, possible, something -> possibly

Meudon

You really are all about cliffhangers this month, still great chapter. If you two die you'll never hear the end of it is a great line

Alice


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