0.0.5
Added 2018-02-17 20:01:31 +0000 UTCAs promised, a fast update with just Kate added.
http://www.mediafire.com/file/chjgt8cocl541wb/Unyielding0.0.5PC.zip
http://www.mediafire.com/file/525509k3azz82pr/Unyielding0.0.5Mac.zip
http://www.mediafire.com/file/hmm35bfcdg137y1/Unyielding0.0.5Linux.zip
Comments
Awesome, I was gonna go through and look for spelling errors tomorrow on my day off but asaucedev has done a better job then I ever could so now I get to sit around and be lazy instead! Laziness ho!
Bonin
2018-02-20 17:41:41 +0000 UTC:( That sucks. You are freaking awesome. All of this will be in the next patch.
MercernaryMage
2018-02-20 10:31:06 +0000 UTCPatreon ate one of my comments...
asaucedev
2018-02-20 08:45:27 +0000 UTCFrom notes after planning w/ Danica: "A farming god's scythe might cut through anything, or he might be able to call down freezing rain or a flock of defiling ravens." Should (arguably) be: "A farming god's scythe might cut through anything, or he might be able to call down freezing rain or an unkindness of defiling ravens." (A group of ravens is called an unkindness) "Gods are born from my the mind of a single person, called a priest." Should be "Gods are born from the mind of a single person, called a priest." (extra word) "As the mana, or "prayers" flows into the altar, the priest receives visions on how to guide and protect his growing cult." Should be "As the mana, or "prayers" flow into the altar, the priest receives visions on how to guide and protect his growing cult." (mismatched plurality) "Grandmothers comb." should be "Grandmother's comb." (Missing apostrophe)
asaucedev
2018-02-20 07:48:58 +0000 UTCDon't let me interrupt you. Thanks for this, really. You rock.
MercernaryMage
2018-02-19 09:21:39 +0000 UTCFrom planning w/ Danica: "I know you, and I can do it," should be "I know you and I can do it,"
asaucedev
2018-02-19 09:20:23 +0000 UTCFrom the note things: "She is a women of extreme principles." Should be "She is a woman of principles." (incorrect plural) "Kate's has 5 outfits mounted to it's walls of people that tried to collect." Should be "Kate's has five outfits mounted to its walls of people that tried to collect." (incorrect form of its) "I've been cut 6 times in it's defense, and I'll be cut a thousand more times to keep it free if she needs it." Should be "I've been cut six times in its defense..." (Incorrect form if its)
asaucedev
2018-02-19 09:14:20 +0000 UTC"Her remaining knowledge of magic and knife play would have see her through." Should be "Her remaining knowledge of magic and knife play would have to see her through." (missing to) OR "Her remaining knowledge of magic and knife play would see her through." (extra word) "Your a weak Shooter." Should be "You're a weak Shooter." (incorrect form of your)
asaucedev
2018-02-19 09:07:27 +0000 UTCFrom intro: "She had little money to begin with and the past 3 days of drinking had taken what their was." Should be "She had little money to begin with and the past three days of drinking has taken what there was." (Incorrect form of there) "The streets of Sena were largely empty from the rain, but the the outburst earned her stares." Should be "The streets of Sena were largely empty from the rain, but the outburst earned her stares." (Extra "the") Why does blood pool in the puddle she is watching? (continuity error?) "She would not become some wind blown strumpet.She promised" Should be "She would not become some wind blown strumpet. She promised" (missing space) "Catelly's orignal gear had turned to smoke when she was changed.She couldn't" should be "Catelly's original gear had turned to smoke when she was changed. She couldn't" (missing space) "If you want to join up with someone here that I know, you are welcome too." Should be "If you want to join with someone here that I know, you are welcome to." (incorrect form of to)
asaucedev
2018-02-19 09:01:08 +0000 UTCYou post them here or message me. Early development is always messy.
MercernaryMage
2018-02-17 23:22:30 +0000 UTCLiking the Kate art! Do you want us to post any spelling errors or bugs in the comments here or would you rather we didn't?
Bonin
2018-02-17 22:37:33 +0000 UTC
