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Victor 8.8 - Fighting Spirit

I hope you enjoy this chapter! I'm happy to hear feedback, positive or negative - if you hate the side character POVs, let me know. I've heard positive feedback from others, and no vocal complaints, so I've been kind of planning more of them. Now's a good time to speak up, though, if you don't like 'em.

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Darren grinned with glee as his quarterstaff impacted the mudman’s stiff, clay-like flesh. It wasn’t the impact of hardwood against clay—that was nothing special. It was the discharge of crackling red electricity that coursed through the little creature, sparking out of its eyeholes and sending steam into the air, that did the real damage. The mudman collapsed, utterly devoid of the animating force that had driven it up to that point. Edeya’s frosty spear was equally effective, and though they both had to reapply the damage-boosting effects to their weapons every few hits, they were making short work of the swarm of little creatures as they emerged from the brackish, muddy water.

He'd learned the spell, just as Edeya had predicted, using her spell pattern. When he’d completed it in his pathways, the System had awarded him a boost of Energy and a congratulatory message, informing him that he’d unlocked a spell called Shocking Arms at the “basic” level. At first, Darren had thought he’d created a spell that would only affect his “arms,” but Edeya had quickly corrected his interpretation—by arms, the System meant weapons.

With his far more effective staff, they’d cleared another two chambers of frogmen, and now they were exploring a new area and battling their second wave of “mudmen,” as Darren had creatively named the four-foot-tall, bipedal people who seemed to be entirely constructed of animated mud and clay. He whipped his staff around, pounding another mudman on top of the head, allowing the shocking lightning housed in the weapon to do its work.

He’d already gained two more levels, and though he hadn’t allocated any stat points in strength or agility, he felt he was far more competent already, probably because the System had awarded him with “basic” staff mastery. That had been an experience that he’d never forget—it felt like warm liquid coursing over the contours of his brain as sudden understanding and weird, phantom memories filled his consciousness.

Out of nowhere, he realized he understood how to hold the staff properly, how to position his feet, and what muscles to tense when he blocked or swung the weapon. He knew about different guard positions, different attacks, how to follow through, and how to recover from overextension. He could, quite literally, fill a book with all the things he suddenly knew.

He laughed as he zapped another mudman and then recast Shocking Arms, recharging the staff as he whirled to check on Edeya. She was standing over a mound of mud and clay, grinning back at him. “Nice one, Edeya!”

“Dare! I think you killed more than me that time!” she crowed, scanning the wide, low-ceilinged cave for further threats. The only thing of note that Darren could see was a low, muddy passage on the far side leading into darkness. “I think we’re done with that fight; here comes the Energy.” He followed her gaze, saw the golden motes forming around the piles of mud, and braced himself. A few minutes later, as they both shook off their euphoria, he read the System messages:

 

**Congratulations! You have achieved level 5 base human. You have 5 attribute points to allocate.**

 

“Level!” he said, grinning at his partner. She nodded, smiling, her face flushed with the rush of Energy.

 

“Me too, Dare,” she said with a happy trill in her voice. “One more level and I'll get my Class back.”

 

“You’re nine?”

 

“Yep!” She glanced at the dark tunnel and then back at him. “Take a break? Or keep going? Maybe there’s a boss nearby.”

 

“Let me spend my attribute points, then I’m ready.” Darren quickly pulled up his status page and put all five of his points into will—the second time he’d done so. He looked at his page with pride:

 

“My Energy went up a little, just like last time I put my points into will.”

 

Edeya nodded. “Yep, intelligence will make it go up even more. Will gives you some, but it mostly effects how fast you regenerate your Energy.”

 

“How are you allocating your points? If you don’t mind me asking.”

 

“I want to try for a more magic-focused Class. I was already level seven after, well, after that rotten witch took my spirit. When I leveled back in the day, I was trying to survive, so I put most of my points into vitality and agility. This time around, I’m going to put more points into will and intelligence. At eight, I put my points into intelligence, and this time, I’m putting all five into will. I hope it changes things for me at level ten.”

 

“Um,” Darren leaned on his staff, looking at the tall, slender young woman. “Do you mind me asking what your first Class was?”

 

“When I reached level ten the first time, I still lived with my family in the Blue Deep.” She saw Darren’s narrowed eyes and added, “That’s a huge forest in the southern part of the Empire. I spent my free time exploring and scrounging for small game, so no one was surprised when my first Class was Hunter.” She sighed, shrugged, and said, “It’s a basic Class.”

 

Darren nodded and asked, “Do you think you’ll have different choices now?”

 

“Victor seems to think so. He thinks all my life experiences, all the skills and spells I’ve learned, my racial advancement, my fights, and even what I went through when Catalina stole my spirit will lead to the System offering me very different choices.”

 

“Does Victor know?” Darren knew better than to underestimate Victor by then, but still, the giant warrior hadn’t been away from Earth all that long.

 

“He’s learned a lot, but I think his master, that big, stone monster of a man, told him that.”

 

“Ah, yeah. You told me about him. Or I heard you and Lam talking about him . . . can’t remember.” Darren straightened up and pointed his staff, still faintly sparking with red-tinged electricity, toward the distant tunnel. “Shall we?”

 

“All right, Dare. Let’s do this!” Edeya shifted her spear so the tip was forward as she stalked along the muddy path toward the opening. As he usually did, Darren kept pace a few steps behind, and as they walked, he refreshed his Shocking Arms spell. It drained away fifty Energy points, but he regenerated five or so every few seconds. He supposed if he had more spells to cast, his small pool of Energy could become a problem, but as it was, he never had trouble keeping the staff charged up.

 

His light spell would eat up a little bit of Energy, but Edeya was currently shedding light on the scene with a soft, blue orb that floated over her head. It was the same shade as the motes in her wings, but, like his spell, it turned more white than blue if she made it brighter. Darren watched the shadows retreat into the tunnel as she approached. She glanced back once, and he nodded, so she went in. He followed her but only took a few steps into the opening when he found her crouched low, unmoving. She looked back at him and held a finger to her lips.

 

Darren crouched and looked over Edeya’s shoulder, immediately seeing what had alerted her. A flickering orange glow illuminated a large cave ahead. A big shadow slowly swayed on the far wall as though something moved in front of the source of the light. He leaned close to Edeya’s ear and whispered, “Gonna scout?” She usually wanted to be the first to approach a new space, especially if there was evidence of enemies.

 

She kept her eyes on the cave opening but whispered, “We both will. Follow my movements.”

 

Tension gripped Darren’s heart like a vise, but he nodded, excited by her show of confidence. Edeya crept toward the tunnel mouth, hunched low, spear pointing forward, and carefully stepping on the smooth, hard, clay-like surfaces, avoiding the little pools of muddy water. Darren mimicked her movements and, despite his nerves, managed to avoid messing up. In just a few steps, they were both lurking near the opening and peering into the big, firelit cave.

 

That was the source of the light, a fire. It burned in a low depression on the muddy floor, and Darren could see the fuel source nearby—piles of dry, compact bricks of something like moss. It burned with orange, nearly smokeless flames and gave off quite a lot of heat; Darren could feel it from almost twenty yards away. Two large figures tended the fire, and Darren’s hands tightened on his staff as he got a good look at them.

 

One was enormously rotund, sitting on the hard, dry clay in the basin, occasionally tossing bricks of fuel into the flames. It was a mudman, but different; it wore a headdress of beads that glimmered like dull jewels in the firelight, and though it made the same sort of warbling grunts as the other mudmen, Darren thought he could detect syllables and intelligent intonations in the sounds. The other figure moved back and forth, shaking a large, bone-yellow staff above its head as it paced, lifting its high, bony knees with each step; it wasn’t a mudman. The weirdly dancing figure looked like a skeleton coated in mud with too little of the clay-like substance to cover its bones completely.

 

Edeya backed up a couple of steps, and Darren moved with her. Then she motioned for him to lean close, whispering, “I’m sure those are bosses. It could get pretty tough with just the two of us. What do you think?”

 

“I, um, well, I think we’ve beaten up all the minions really easily. We should try this!”

 

“That’s the spirit, Dare!” Edeya grinned fiercely. “Which one do you want to take? I think the big mudman is a healer.”

 

“So,” Darren licked his lips, thinking. “So, I think you should kill the healer. We should take him out fast! I’ll try to keep the big muddy skeleton busy.”

 

Edeya squinted her eyes, clearly playing the fight out in her head, before nodding. “Good plan. I’ll try to sneak close to hit him before he sees us. I’ll go right, you go left. If the skeleton sees you, try to get noisy so the big guy looks your way, too.”

 

“So I’m the bait?” Darren chuckled, shaking his head. “Sounds like a good plan!”

 

“Okay, let’s do this!” Edeya gripped her spear and crept back to the opening. She gave Darren one more look, confirming his readiness, and then she slipped into the cavern, hugging the right wall. Darren stepped in, moving to the left. There wasn’t much to hide him in the room, not even any shadows, thanks to the bright fire, but he still crept low, moving slowly, hoping that if he didn’t make any sudden movement, he might get close before they noticed him.

 

Somehow, Edeya didn’t suffer the same problem; even though nothing was between her and the fire pit, she seemed to find shadows to slink through along the base of the wall. Seeing that, Darren realized her idea was perfect; him going the opposite direction would give her the ideal opportunity to pounce once the bosses noticed him. He’d only covered about ten yards before they did, or more accurately, before the mud skeleton did.

 

It lifted its bone staff and whirled to face him, eyes like candle flames flickering from the dark depressions under its brow. It warbled a weird, coughing curse, and the ground under Darren’s feet instantly lost its firmness; he felt his feet sinking into cold mud as tendrils of ropy slime began to wrap around his ankles. “Oof!” Darren cried as he nearly fell onto his face, which likely would have sealed his fate. He caught himself on his staff, though, and then lifted it to swipe down at the gross, black, muddy tendrils.

 

If his magical electricity behaved like natural electricity, he would surely have electrocuted himself as the red sparks zapped into the tentacles wrapping around his ankles. Fortunately, just as he could grip the staff without discomfort, the electricity washed over him without any ill effect. As the tentacles of slimy mud burst apart, he jammed the butt of his staff into the soft ground and, using it for balance, yanked his feet free, one at a time, clambering onto firmer clay. He regained his footing just in time to receive a wicked, side-swiping blow from the mud skeleton’s ivory staff.

 

The length of hard, polished bone caught him in the shoulder, and as a testament to the monster’s strength, it knocked him off his feet and sent him sprawling. He slid sideways onto the semi-dry clay, thankfully not into the liquid section he’d just escaped. Darren could hear the monster begin to utter another mumbled spell, and he desperately scrambled to his hands and knees, favoring his numb left arm.

 

He glanced to the other side of the cavern where he'd last seen Edeya, but he didn’t catch sight of her. Then he felt the ground loosen under his hands and, in a panic, drove forward with his feet. He exploded forward like back in high school when he’d practiced football drills, trying to please his dad by signing up for a sport he’d had no interest in. Still, the instinct was in him, and maybe he had his old, sadistic coach to thank. He caught the skeleton in its midriff with his right shoulder and, despite their size difference, knocked it sprawling.

 

Darren fell with the boss, getting tangled in its mud-covered bony legs, but he’d kept his grip on his staff. He thrashed the length of lightning-charged wood left and right, batting away the muddy skeleton’s grasping hands, and thrilling at the sight of sparks dancing along those bones. He fought like a madman, driving forward with a grimace on his face as he repeatedly battered the monster with his staff. Even when the enchantment faded and no more electricity aided his blows, the staff delivered noticeable damage, blasting mud away and cracking bones.

 

Darren couldn't believe it when he knelt in a pile of broken bones and dried-up clay. He’d won! He’d killed a boss! Somewhere in his frenzied, half-startled mind, Darren thanked Victor for the enchanted weapon. The sound of high-pitched grunts and repeated thunk sounds of something sharp impacting something wet startled him, and he looked toward the fire where the other boss had been.

 

He laughed and breathed a sigh of relief when he saw Edeya standing upon its enormous torso, repeatedly jamming her spear in and out of the soft, muddy clay. Each blow sent tendrils of frost into the monster’s body, and each time she drew the spear out and jabbed it in again, hunks of frozen clay broke off the boss’s body. “I think it’s dead!” he called after he’d gathered his breath.

 

“Better be! I’ve stabbed it twenty times!” she growled.

 

Darren stood up, wincing and rubbing his sore shoulder. He saw the ivory staff buried in the bones and mud and picked it up before walking over to Edeya, a staff in each hand. “Did that guy even get an attack off?”

 

“He was about to blast you with something when I buried my spear in his back.” She panted, leaning on her spear, still jutting out of the muddy corpse. “Nice job, by the way, Dare!”

 

“You too, Dey,” he’d never used the nickname before the dungeon, but with her calling him “Dare” constantly, he’d decided it was fair game. She smiled and gave him an appraising look.

 

“Seems like you made a real mess of yourself. Are you hurt?”

 

“Just my shoulder. That guy was strong!”

 

“Need a healing potion?”

 

“Nah, I don’t think so. We’re about to get some Energy.” Darren gestured with the staff in his left hand to the glowing motes of bright gold Energy gathering on the mound of mud.

 

“Whew! Thank the Roots! I was afraid this guy wasn’t really dead. That’s why I kept stabbing him.” She sat down on the clay of the monster’s corpse and then slid down to stand before Darren. “Get ready; I think it’s a lot.” She wasn’t wrong. A moment later, a torrent of Energy much larger than the ones Darren had felt before surged into him, and he was lost in the euphoric bliss of it.

 

When he came back to himself, he was sitting on his butt before the corpse and the bonfire, and his shoulder pain was completely gone. Blinking, he squinted at the System message:

 

**Congratulations! You have achieved level 6 base human. You have 5 attribute points to allocate.**

 

“Another level,” he said, looking around, wondering if Edeya got one too. He saw her sitting a few feet away, staring into space.

 

“Me too,” she muttered, clearly very distracted.

 

“New options?” he pressed.

 

“Oh, Roots, Darren! It’s amazing! I have two epic choices and three advanced!”

 

#

 

Victor lost track of the hours as he sat there holding Lam’s hand, gently encouraging her, constantly sending a thin tendril of Energy into her through that connection. Dar never told him to start doing so, but he never told him to stop. If it was cheating, he didn’t care; he’d do anything he could to ensure Lam’s spirit came through. Dar hadn’t spoken in a long time, and Victor noticed he didn’t always hold Lam’s hand. Sometimes, he’d let it drop, and sometimes, he’d pick it up, and Victor wondered what the master could see that told him when it was time to do so.

 

After he began to think it would never end, Dar surprised him when he cleared his throat, making a sound like gravel sliding down a concrete embankment, and rumbled, “She’s nearly through, Victor. This is a good time to learn. Just as you gaze upon your own aura, spread your inner eye’s awareness and watch her break through. Do it now!”

 

Victor felt the urgency in the command, and he immediately turned his gaze inward. Then, he expanded his awareness from his Core, seeing his pathways and his dark, roiling aura. He stretched his awareness further still, and then he saw what Dar meant. Could he have been watching this the whole time? He silently cursed the stoic Spirit Master for not telling him sooner.

 

From his inner eye’s vantage, he could see his Core, his aura around it, and then, beside him, the wall of his mentor’s aura, impossible to focus upon. However, between that deathly barrier and his own aura, he saw a split in the darkness, a breach between this world and that of the Spirit Plane, and when he peered closely at it, he could catch glimpses of Lam’s spirit as it fought to claw through that aperture. “Come on, Lam!” he urged, not yelling but whispering forcefully. “Come on! You’re almost there. Fight for it!”

 

He saw her face, different than when he’d stood with her naked, determined spirit on the Spirit Plane and different from her physical self. She had bright, determined eyes, her brows drawn down in a sharp V, and her teeth were bared in a grimace. There was something primal and visceral about her. She pulled and tugged, squeezing first one shoulder, then another through the rip, and Victor couldn’t help comparing the imagery to that of a birth, though Lam’s spirit was clawing her way out; there was no midwife there to deliver her.

 

Suddenly, it was over; she’d overcome whatever resistance held her back, and she streaked like a ghostly light out of the aperture. As the glow of her spirit faded, Victor assumed she’d made it back into her body, so he turned his attention away from his inner eye and looked upon her still form with his physical eyes. He squeezed her hand and felt an answering twitch. There was a warmth in her flesh that hadn’t been present before. “She made it,” he breathed.

 

“Aye, lad. She did, indeed, no small thanks to you. I believe you profoundly touched her spirit; there will be lasting effects.” Dar’s hand clapped his shoulder and gave it a comradely squeeze. “You’re a loyal, big-hearted friend, and she’s lucky to have you.”

 

“What do you mean?” Victor asked, looking into the giant’s blazing white-hot eyes. “I mean about lasting effects?”

 

“I think you altered her affinities. Her Core. Can’t you see it? Can’t you feel it? I believe a new Spirit Caster was born this day.”

Comments

nice to hear, thanks, Shawn!

Plum Parrot

This is late. I'm catching up after stockpiling chapters. I enjoying the POVs right now because I think they fit nicely into this stage of Victor's story adding value and depth and allowing you to world build at the same time. I don't think I'd enjoy them if it starts to become like Falling With Folded Wings. Where a POV distracts for the character and progression that's most important/interesting every few chapters. Isn't really the best comparison because all the POVs in FWFW matter but hopefully my point makes sense. TheFirstDefier does POVs really well and I think you're doing the same in this story so far.

Shawn

And yeah, some of those things I said are contradictory. I don't *really* know what I want. 🫣 It's more of an "I'll know when I see it". Sorry! The story is good though.

Reno

I think the PoV's work as long as they answer questions we've been having from Victor's perspective. Ultimately, I read this book as Victor's story. So reading about the impact of his actions is a natural extension of that. Setting up side characters feels less rewarding, but it's your story and I can't know what's necessary and what isn't. For example, seeing Victor's new affinity abilities from another perspective doesn't feel like a distraction. It's a natural question we want answered. Seeing how Lam deals with her demons with Victor's intervention is nice. Seeing the potential of the wildark (?) core as an alternative to Victor's struggle is interesting, to a point. Knowing about Edeya'a new path is good, but following her and Darren through a long dungeon would feel a bit like a distraction. Basically, anything that colours Victor's journey without diluting it feels good. As to what is actually good for the story, I will only know long after the fact because I don't know how relevant it'll all become. One of the issues with the side story of Darren/Edeya/Lam is that they're entirely in Victor's shadow. I'm not sure how much investment it'll take to make them shine as bright. Valla and Lesh feel like the only people who can go off to do some adventures and not feel like a downgrade. What I'm saying is that Darren and Edeya's adventures aren't that interesting. But their experience as a contrast to Victor and as a consequence of Victor's actions can add to the story without diluting it. So after reading this chapter I'm thinking of where the narrative with Darren and Edeya is going. "I want to see how his core is different and if it's at least as good as Victor's"; "I want to see if Edeya's path changed much"; "I don't really care about their fighting some bosses"; "I am curious how their friendship evolves"; "I don't care about all of their skills" etc. Hope this answers some questions and isn't just a pointless ramble. 😅

Reno

One of us.

matt

I like the extra POVs so long as they don’t come after giant Victor cliffhangers. Small ones are okay.

Mack

Maybe determination

Isiah Debarros

In my opinion, as long as you don't switch POV's when something super important is going on for Victor then it's great. Also, like getting other POV's for like important moments for those specific characters are great in my opinion.

Isiah Debarros

Who was the first? Edeya?

Chioke Nelson

Victor: “Oh, it happened again?” Dar: “What do you mean, again?!” But seriously, this chapter was great. Can’t wait to see what affinities Lam has gained, but I’m betting on Rage and Hope. Maybe stubbornness? Oh and we still need to find out how much she has regressed. And Edeya’s class options! Really want to hear about those.

Omar Jimenez

I’m def cool with pov every now and then and kind of like how the current pov cast is going but I do like most of my reading experience to be centered on victor. Either way it’s not like I’m going anywhere I love this story too much 😂

Tommy Littlefield

Yes! Lam too!!

David H

Hope you tell us what the class she chooses is

Isiah Debarros

Also loving the two nascent dungeon divers pov

Isiah Debarros

Thats so sick she is the second person that he is influenced in this way

Isiah Debarros


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