Victor 8.50 - Changes
Added 2024-08-06 16:21:12 +0000 UTCEnjoy today's chapter! I think some of you will get a kick out of it :)
-Plum
When Victor returned to the house, the sun was well up, and he could hear voices coming from the dining room. Peering in through the arched opening in the hallway that separated the room from the kitchen, he saw Valla sitting beside Lam, and across the table from them was Efanie. He looked further into the room, to the smaller table near the far windows, and, sure enough, there sat Cora, by herself, absently picking at a plate full of food. Part of Victor wanted to retreat, to face these people later and well after he’d had a chance to speak with Valla alone, but he forced himself to step into the room. “Hey, good to see you’re getting acquainted.”
Valla looked at him, arching a silver-teal eyebrow. “I’m sure you were going to introduce us, but I couldn’t sleep, and we ran into each other.”
Victor nodded and moved to sit down. He was still his natural size, so he selected one of the larger, Dar-sized chairs, which put him beside Efanie. He saw the food on everyone’s plates—bacon, eggs, grilled veggies, and thick hunks of buttery toast—and his stomach instantly began to grumble. Efanie chuckled and pushed her plate toward him; it was largely untouched. “I’m not all that hungry—too much going on, and my nerves are shot.” Hearing those words was like a splash of cold water to Victor, reminding him that he wasn’t the center of the universe, regardless of how it seemed most of the time.
“Yeah, I guess last night’s events kind of turned your world upside down, huh?”
Efanie nodded and gestured with her thumb toward Cora over by the windows. “Mine and Cora’s both. Still,” she nodded to Valla and Lam, “we’ve been treated very kindly here, and I think we’re both hopeful.”
Victor nodded, trying to show understanding, but, if he were totally honest with himself, glad Cora wasn’t at the same table. How would she feel sitting in the presence of the man who’d killed her father? It was enough to make him want to get up and leave. It wasn’t enough to stifle his appetite, however, so he covered his discomfort by stuffing a large hunk of buttered, honey-dipped bread into his mouth.
Valla nudged him under the table with her boot. “I was just telling Efanie how cruel life could be.” She lowered her voice and continued, “I spoke with Cora briefly, Victor. She told me that she understood that our friends’ lives were on the line and that her father made his living by fighting another man’s battles. A very mature outlook for a girl who’s just recently seen her twelfth birthday, don’t you think?”
Victor swallowed—too soon—and had to fight to clear his throat before speaking. Efanie took the opportunity to voice her opinion on the matter. “She doesn’t hate you, Sir Victor. She’s cross but more at life and circumstances—at her father—than at you. I think I was able to make her understand that you fought for a righteous cause.”
“Well—” Victor began to say, but it seemed Efanie wasn’t finished.
“I hope you know that I don’t expect you and your lady to be the girl’s new parents. Neither does she. If you’ll just give us a small allowance, enough to furnish a home and pay for a tutor, I think we’d be more than happy to move out from underfoot.”
She took a breath and might have continued, but Victor was through being steamrolled. He locked eyes with Efanie and shook his head. “I’ll be doing more than that. I’ve taken responsibility for her, and that means something to me.” He nodded to Valla. “I’d like us all to take a trip back to our homeworld. I have a sizable estate there, and I think it would be a good place for her to grow up.”
“Fanwath?” Valla’s eyes almost sparkled as she said the word, and Victor was reminded of all the times he’d stared into those orbs, lost in their colorful depths.
“Yeah.” Victor smiled, then turned back to Efanie. “It’s a lower-tier world than this, but the nation Valla and I helped to found is growing rapidly, and many opportunities abound. I have influential friends there who can see to Cora’s safety and education, so if you have something binding you to Sojourn—”
“N-no! No, Victor, I would be most pleased to visit your home. What was it?” She glanced at Valla. “Fanwath?”
Valla nodded. “That’s right. Victor is lord to quite an estate there, though we haven’t seen his manor yet. It was just breaking ground when we came to Sojourn. You see, we’d just conquered an invasion in what was considered untamed lands.”
“Ah.” Efanie nodded, then turned to Victor. “Are you certain it’s a good place for a young woman to come of age?”
“Yeah. As I said, it’s growing quickly, and I have people there I trust and think of as family. I think it would be good for Cora to be away from this city and the . . .” Victor trailed off, wanting to say, ‘memory of her father,’ but was too worried the girl could hear what they were talking about. With that in mind, he asked, “Would you talk to her about it?”
Lam cleared her throat and leaned forward, breaking her silence in a hushed voice, “I think you need to sit down with her, Victor. She must know that she wasn’t given over to a monster.”
Valla nodded and reached across the table to grasp Victor’s wrist. “I agree. As harsh as it may seem, this is her new reality. The longer you avoid confronting the facts, the longer she’ll build up whatever monstrous version of you is living in her head.” Victor looked at her, a little surprised by how pleasant and supportive she was being despite their last conversation. He supposed it had something to do with the seriousness of the situation—Cora was a young girl going through a hell of a lot more than a couple’s disagreement.
He glanced around the table, from Valla to Lam to Efanie, and quietly asked, “Now?”
Lam nodded, Valla squeezed his wrist again, and Efanie leaned close and whispered, “She understands your situation. Just be kind.”
With a sigh and grunt, Victor pushed himself away from his plate of food and stood. As he approached Cora, he cast Alter Self, straining to get the most out of the spell. When he sat across from her, she glanced up but then quickly back down at her food—hardly touched. To his horror, Victor found himself channeling every dopey adult he’d ever spoken to as a child. “You’ve got to eat to keep up your strength.”
She picked up a piece of potato and tucked it into her mouth. “As you say, milord.”
“Ah, forget I said that—pretty stupid.” Suddenly, Victor was stricken with the urge simply to be honest. “Look, I don’t know what I’m doing here. I think this whole situation sucks. I know I said that before, kind of, outside Volpuré’s estate, but it’s true. I understand you’re in a bad place right now. You’re probably mad, sad, and everything in between, right? You’ve got every right to be. I’m sorry about your dad, but you understand I was fighting for my life, for my friends’ lives, right?”
“I understand, milord.” She still hadn’t looked up, and all Victor could see of her face was her pale forehead beneath unruly, thick, curly brown hair.
Victor decided to try a different approach. “Do you like Sojourn? Do you have friends here?”
“I—” For the first time, she glanced up, and her chocolate eyes touched his for just a second before she looked back down. “I’ve spent most of my time at the Volpuré estate with my father. I don’t have friends.”
“Um, I know this is probably not a fun topic, but can you tell me a little about that? Why did your dad keep you so close? I know they told me he was your only family, but do you, um, know about your mom at all?” Her head shook from side to side, bouncing her thick curls, but she didn’t speak. “All right. Well, I have an idea I’d like to run by you: I have a lot of property on another world where some very good friends live. I’d like to take you there—get you away from this place. There are children who live on my lands and people who can look after you and give you the kind of attention you deserve. I think you’ll like it there.” She didn’t speak or look up, so Victor asked more bluntly, “What do you say?”
When she looked up this time, she stared into his eyes and didn’t look away. “Do I have a choice?”
“Um,” Victor frowned, unsure of how to proceed. Finally, he settled on what he’d want to hear if he were in her shoes. “I want you to come with me and see the place. I want you to meet some of the people who live there. After that, you can decide if you want to stay or come back to Sojourn.”
She glanced at the other, larger table. “Will Efanie come?”
Victor nodded. “Yeah. She’s eager to go; I don’t think she loves Sojourn.” Cora stared at him for a moment longer, and Victor saw much in the depths of those dark eyes, but she didn’t speak, only nodded, then turned back to her food, scooping up a large bite of scrambled eggs. Victor felt like he’d been dismissed, so he went with it. He stood and pushed his chair in. “When I said we’re going, I meant, like, today. Efanie will help you get ready.” With that, he walked back over to the large table.
“Well?” Lam asked.
“She’s open to the idea.” Victor looked from Efanie to Valla. “I want to leave today. I know it’s short notice, but Dar’s only given me a week, so I want to make the most of it.” They both inhaled and looked ready to ask him questions, but he turned to Lam. “I can probably afford it if you and the others want to come.”
“I think—” Lam stopped and frowned, shaking her head. “I think I’ll wait. I don’t want to return until I’ve regained more of my former strength. Edeya is with Trin, watching over Darren, but I’ll ask her what she thinks. I doubt Darren will wake in time to join you.”
Victor nodded, once again reminded that other people had important things going on and considerations of their own. “What level are you now?”
She grinned and thumped the table with her palm. “All of us are closing in on tier two. Say one thing about that deathtrap of a dungeon—it provided quite a growth opportunity.”
“Well, let me know if you change your mind. Tell Edeya we’ll be leaving in a couple of hours if she’s interested.”
Efanie pushed her chair back. “So soon?”
“Yeah. I was serious about wanting to get this going. I’ve got a lot I want to do and only a week to squeeze it all in.”
“Understood. I—” She glanced over at Cora. “I should take Cora into town for a little shopping. I have a few loose ends I’d like to tie up around here. Despite Bohn’s awful nature, there are many in the Volpuré household I’d like to part with on good terms. I think a few gifts and letters sent via courier should do the trick. Would it be all right if the two of us meet you at the World Hall?”
“Yeah.” Victor rubbed his chin while he thought. “I think I’m being unreasonable. Two hours isn’t enough time—meet us at the ticket counter at noon. Is that fair?”
“More than fair!” She stood and started toward Cora, but Valla cleared her throat.
“Wait, Efanie!” When the woman paused and turned back, Valla looked at Victor. “If she’s going to buy things for Cora to travel with, shouldn’t you give her some funds?”
“Oh, I—” Efanie started, but Victor laughed, shaking his head in chagrin.
“Yeah, sorry. I’ll need to get used to this.” He hadn’t sorted the massive crates of beads in Loyle’s ring into more convenient containers, so he lifted out a sack from his previous stash. It held nearly ten thousand beads in value—most were double or triple-attuned. He handed it to Efanie. “That should do for now. I guess you can consider anything left over as a retainer; we can negotiate a contract for you when we get to Fanwath, all right?”
“That’s fair. Thank you, Sir—”
“Just Victor, Efanie.”
She smiled, then nodded and waved to the table, including Lam and Valla in the gesture. “See you soon.” As she strode toward Cora’s table, her voice became strident, “Up you get, young lady. We’ve much to do and little time in which to do it!”
Lam glanced at Victor and then Valla and pushed her chair back. “Why don’t you sit back down and finish Efanie’s breakfast, Victor? I’m going to go check in on Edeya and tell her what you said about returning to Fanwath.”
“Um, yeah. Not a bad idea.” Victor sat down again, well aware that Lam was trying to give him a chance to speak with Valla. It made him wonder if Valla had been venting, but he supposed he couldn’t blame her if she had been. As she left, Lam walked behind Valla. Catching Victor’s eye, she nodded and winked.
“About as subtle as a thunderak in a jewelry store,” Valla chuckled.
Victor shrugged. “She’s trying to help me out. Don’t you agree I could use it?”
Valla sighed. “Oh, Victor! I know I wasn’t exactly rational earlier, but you must admit that you don’t make it easy for me. I’ve spent some hours thinking and a bit of time chatting with Lam, and, honestly, I don’t know what to say other than that. I think I need more time to think about things. Don’t you?”
“I . . .” Victor frowned as he let his impulsive objection die on his tongue. Did he need more time to think? Was he sure about everything? Or, failing that, was he at least as sure as he used to be? He supposed the answer was no—there had been some changes in his feelings that bore further thought. “I guess some time to think would be nice.”
“Exactly! Some time away from Sojourn is exactly what we need. Some time away from all the high stakes, the life-or-death battles, the schemes, and future plots. Let’s make a promise—no talking about any of our . . . problems until the night before our scheduled return. I want to enjoy a small vacation with you and forget about all of our worries for a few days. Let’s give our minds and hearts time to breathe and think. Can you agree with that?”
Victor held his hand, palm up, across the table, and Valla eagerly took it in her slender, cool fingers. “Yeah, I can agree, Valla. Honestly, it sounds great.”
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When Darren opened his eyes, he was swept away with almost nauseating disorientation. He saw wooden rafters overhead, but they seemed curved like he was looking at them through a fish-eye lens. He blinked his eyes and tried to focus, but then his world was blotted out by wood grains, splinters, and a nail head the size of a dinner plate. “Ungh,” he grunted, feeling even more queasy. He closed his eyes and, as the world faded to peaceful black, began to recall strange, vivid dreams of flying through clouds, basking in the cold air of the heights and the warmth of the sun. How long had he slept?
With the question came a surge of other memories—waves of monsters, Lam and Edeya and Trin, all fighting for their lives, an axe blade cleaving his clavicle and slicing deep into his chest, and worried whispers and the taste of something incomprehensibly sweet and good as it was stuffed into his mouth. He opened his eyes again, hoping to see one of his friends, but this time, instead of just the wooden ceiling, he saw a bird’s head. No, he corrected himself, an avian woman’s head. Black feathers adorned her crown, and a dark yellow beak sat beneath giant, yellow, and brown-banded irises that narrowed in contemplation as he continued to blink.
“Try to relax and let nature do its work. Your eyes are much stronger than they used to be, Darren. My name is Brimi, and I’m here because your friends were worried about you.”
“Worried?” Darren asked, but his voice was strange in his ears, and it sounded garbled, more like, “Ooried?”
“That’s right, love, you’ve been out for a few days. Try to lie still and take in everything I’ve got to say. It seems you ate a racial advancement cake, and it woke something up—a bloodline.”
“Oodline?” he asked, his voice rising toward a squawk as he tried to form the word with his strange-feeling mouth.
“An avian bloodline. That’s why I’m here. I can help you to figure out how to manage the things that have changed about you.”
“Aieeen?” Darren tried to say ‘avian,’ but, again, it sounded more like a squawk. His heart had begun to hammer, and despite Brimi’s protestations, he struggled to his feet, pleased that his arms, hands, and legs were responding normally. He looked around, frowning at the strange perspective. Was he taller than before? The avian woman held out her arms, trying to steady or restrain him; he couldn’t tell. She was much shorter than he, and as he looked around, his vision kept zooming in on every little detail.
He almost fell several times as he stumbled to his bathroom and finally managed to fight his way through the door to peer at himself in the mirror. “What the hell?” he cried, though, again, it came out like, “Aaah-kah-ell!” Darren had, indeed, changed. He was easily a foot taller than before, looming over the sink, stark naked, save for a pair of tight underwear. His body didn’t look all that different, but there were a few disturbing changes: his head was covered in lustrous brown, mottled feathers, his eyes were enormous, angular things like you might see on an eagle, the irises golden and beautiful, and his nose and mouth had been replaced by a long, hooked beak.
Darren, too stressed and, frankly, panicked to speak, turned to look at his back and saw faint lumps along his spine just beneath his shoulder blades. “No wings?” he tried to ask, too distracted to worry about what the words came out sounding like.
“You’ve just barely awoken your bloodline, but, as is usual when something like this occurs, the first changes are to your sensory organs—your eyes, mouth, nose, and ears. As you advance your bloodline . . .” She kept speaking, but Darren couldn’t hear her over the pounding of his heart, the roaring of his thoughts. He mentally called up his status sheet and scanned what he saw:
Status
Name: Darren Whitehorse
Race: Human - Base 5 - Thunderbird Bloodline
Class: Chaos Sorcerer - Advanced
Level: 18
Core: Wildarc Class - Base 2
Energy Affinity: Lightning 8, Chaos 7.4, Unattuned 6.1
Energy: 1445/1445
Strength: 6
Vitality: 72
Dexterity: 45
Agility: 5
Intelligence: 57
Will: 68
Points Available: 0
Titles & Feats: -
Skills:
System Language Integration - Not Upgradeable
Wildarc Cultivation Drill - Basic
Staff Mastery - Improved
Sense Chaos - Basic
Spells:
Arclight Wisp - Basic
Shocking Arms - Improved
Fractured Reality - Basic
Chaos Storm - Improved
“Ut thah uuuuck!” he screeched, clapping his hands to his head.
“Hush, Darren! Really!” Brimi scolded. “You should be thrilled. You realize that if you keep advancing your bloodline, you’ll be able to fly, yes? A predator avian, too! What handsome eyes you have! And those feathers! Goodness, but you’re going to be something, given time. Now, regarding your attempts at speaking—Darren, you must try to form the words further back in your throat. We intelligent avian species have a very advanced syrinx in our throats. It takes a little practice, but you’ll soon learn to enunciate properly . . .”
She continued to babble on, but Darren couldn’t focus on her. He was staring at the backs of his hands where fine, downy feathers seemed to have replaced the hair that used to grow there. He looked at the tips of his fingers and saw that his nails were dark black, pointed, and hard as iron. Frowning, he looked at his status sheet and, with enormous concentration, tried to form the word in the back of his throat, “Thunderbird.”
Comments
Wooooo THUNDERBIRD!!!! came out of the left field!
Kade
2024-08-27 01:37:57 +0000 UTCThat bit about all birds having gizzards I literally found out hours before I read the chapter. These last few days have seen a disproportionate amount of info about digestive systems, gizzards, beaks, and other unpalatable articles. Send help.
Reno
2024-08-08 07:35:04 +0000 UTCEvery single day since this chapter came out some new article or Reddit post comes out with more info about beaks and bird digestion, which makes me think of Darren. I have cookies turned off most of the time, so this isn't some self fulfilling prophecy. It's like the world conspires to not let me think of anything else. Or maybe Plum has scheduled some tactical releases on social media to drive up engagement. 🫢 TIL. Platypuses do have some weird keratin pads (?) at the back of their mouths (or something) that helps them chew so thoroughly because their stomachs don't produce acid. I don't know what to do with this information because I've never seen a platypus or expect to interact with one, but you can guess which character this immediately made me think of. 🥲 At this point I've thought of Darren for a total of more minutes than he himself had time to think about his situation.
Reno
2024-08-08 07:31:07 +0000 UTCI'm sure the Jotuns and the Greek Titans exist somewhere out there along with the Quinametzin, and whatever other kind of Titan I don’t know about. But I think it was mentioned (by Tes?) that Elder beings were around for the rise of the System, and actively tried to fight against its arrival on their planets. So even if they’re still around, I doubt they’ll just hop around System planets.
Omar Jimenez
2024-08-08 03:32:26 +0000 UTCI wonder if its possible for people to awaken some sort of Arthurian bloodline? Like a Merlin or King Arthur related bloodline for example. Or did these individuals unknowingly have strong ancestral ties to other specific potent races. Idk lol, love to theorize! A bit unrelated but I wonder why no other Titans have appeared in the story so far? I know there's been a race of Titans which have been nerfed due to the loss of the ancestral stone but I wonder where all the other titans are at. Perhaps they've only passed through Sojourn to go to places that can help scratch their itch for battle.
Matthew Lemon
2024-08-08 01:50:02 +0000 UTCGood shout!
Matthew Lemon
2024-08-08 01:33:22 +0000 UTCIf I were him I would genuinely just start crying and I probably wouldn't stop
Matthew Lemon
2024-08-08 01:23:05 +0000 UTCThank you for reading and for your support! :)
Plum Parrot
2024-08-07 19:00:23 +0000 UTC*cry* I just caught up with all the chapters :( I realized yesterday there's a three book sidestory though, so I guess I'll give that a try :)
mrthorwahl
2024-08-07 18:36:53 +0000 UTCSo I don't mind him being fucked over by the system because nobody says the that bloodline evolutions have to be good. But there are a lot of implications here. This is a reason I'd never thought about, why somebody might really want to avoid awakening a bloodline. We saw a bit with Victor's, but this goes so far beyond that because it crippled him in a way that's very important to a lot of humans.
Reno
2024-08-07 15:46:21 +0000 UTCI guess he now has a gizzard to chew his food. 🫣 Even the platypus has a gizzard afaik. Damn I can't stop thinking about how much the system fucked him. 🫢 (Edit: nope. That platypus part might be a myth, like the common one that the platypus lacks a stomach. Lots of misinfo on platypus anatomy apparently. 🫠 Platypuses seem to have stomachs, but no acid production)
Reno
2024-08-07 15:41:56 +0000 UTCI will say though.. having a beak is more of a body horror than sprouting a wiggly tentacle arm. Tentacle arms are functionally similar. But beaks stop you from enjoying the same food. Can't chew, can't taste as well etc. Bird anatomy is kinda fucked in the pleasure department.
Reno
2024-08-07 11:19:13 +0000 UTCIm not so sure about the whole bf/gf drama. I just want Victor to smash things and rage doing it 😁
Exaiter
2024-08-07 06:59:34 +0000 UTCHahaha. "Mixed" is probably the best way to describe one's feelings in such a situation. Sad he doesn't have a dragon to help him adjust. So he'll probably get used to no longer being human by the time he gets the chance to learn something like "alter self", but for birds.
Reno
2024-08-07 01:40:27 +0000 UTCIt’s previously been mentioned in the series that Earth had a lot of different magical factions that had to evacuate after some kind of Energy Apocalypse happened (I think the Faeries were to blame?). So probably most, if not all, of the mythological beings you’d care to name were probably real and left bloodlines behind. This is so cool to me because Thunderbird is prevalent in many different Native American tribes’ mythology and there’s a lot of overlap in its abilities and purpose, but there is some variation. Like in some stories Thunderbird is just a really powerful bird, and in some he’s also able to walk around like a man. So, this could all be the same Thunderbird race, or a few different ones, or different descendants of one Thunderbird with different agendas. Victor’s Quinametzin bloodline is pretty solidly a myth of the Mexica people. And we’ve already seen multiple types of undead. And Dragons. Personally, I really hope we get some Egyptian or Persian bloodline next.
Omar Jimenez
2024-08-06 21:06:10 +0000 UTCSweet !!
Mack
2024-08-06 20:27:23 +0000 UTCYeah, not enjoying the body‐horror creep out here... Darren has become a bit of a repetitive punching bag for the author for no reason that I can discern (I won't recap all the ups and downs, we have all read it). Are we in for his 3rd or 4th "will he react terribly or prove himself worthy" character arc now?
Mark
2024-08-06 20:13:23 +0000 UTCNow this brings up one question what other weird ass bloodlines do humans have and how many of them are related to animals or mythology?
evan maples
2024-08-06 19:44:07 +0000 UTCMan...its got to suck to just wake up with a beak one day.
Shawn
2024-08-06 18:19:29 +0000 UTCThat’s fucking cool. Like I know it’s got to be disorienting as fuck, but damn if isn’t awesome to have Thunderbird as a bloodline. I do wonder if he had a choice in the matter like Valla, or if it just happened, like Victor? And it’s funny to me that he’s already has a lady admirer. Anyway, great chapter! Looking forward to the next step for Victor and Valla’s relationship, whatever that may be. And I hope to see what Cora and Deyni are like together.
Omar Jimenez
2024-08-06 17:45:17 +0000 UTCWith all of Victor's new money he needs to get some upgrades to his armor.
Higher002
2024-08-06 17:34:15 +0000 UTCDidn't have Daren waking up as a bird in my predictions
Sébastien Kingsbury
2024-08-06 17:01:40 +0000 UTCDarren “bird boi” whitehorse
evan maples
2024-08-06 16:55:43 +0000 UTCI mean Thunderbirds are also birds of myth and legends so it's entirely possible that it is one
Isiah Debarros
2024-08-06 16:41:09 +0000 UTCNice! TFTC!
1FantasyFanatic
2024-08-06 16:40:44 +0000 UTCI wonder how he's going to play to his strengths in the future like will he take more physical classes it could work well for him if he tries to be a hybrid type
Isiah Debarros
2024-08-06 16:40:20 +0000 UTCI wonder if the system had a agreement with some of not all of the elder races of earth so there bloodline would live
Brayden
2024-08-06 16:37:42 +0000 UTCHoly crap so is that another elder bloodline maybe something similar in strength/rarity as a phoniex bloodline
Brayden
2024-08-06 16:36:41 +0000 UTCOh that's sick
Isiah Debarros
2024-08-06 16:29:59 +0000 UTCWooo chapter!
Mason
2024-08-06 16:24:55 +0000 UTC