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Victor 10.21 - Bargaining

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-Plum

21 – Bargaining

When Victor and Arona were shown into an opulent dining room with an amazing fifty-foot polished table crafted from a single slab of wood at its center, he was a little disturbed to see Rellia’s servants setting out plates and silverware for four. He could smell the aromas of bacon, fresh bread, and other breakfast foods wafting out of the covered silver trays lining the wall near the place settings, and he was about to object to Rellia’s chamberlain, saying he didn’t want to stay for breakfast, when the lady in question swept into the room.

“Victor!” She strode toward him, beautiful as ever—no, Victor realized, more beautiful; she’d eaten another natural treasure or something. She was taller, her pale-blue skin practically glowed, and her hair was like spun red-tinted gold. Before leaving Ruhn, Victor had reduced his size to accommodate the doorframes on Fanwath. So, when Rellia enthusiastically embraced him, she could almost look him directly in the eyes. “I’ve missed you!”

He smiled and squeezed her back. “And I you, Rellia. It’s good to see you looking so well.”

“Oh my! How cultured you sound! What have they done to my gruff, blunt-speaking Victor?” She grinned as she spoke, her bright crimson eyes narrowed in amusement. Victor was happy to see she was in a good mood, glad to know she wasn’t—at least openly—holding some sort of grudge about him and Valla being split. She had to know, right? She knew everything that went on in the Free Marches, and plenty of people were aware of his situation with Valla.

“I’m still in here,” he said with a chuckle, thumping his chest as Rellia pulled away, carefully avoiding the aching burn at the center. “I hate to be rude or act like I don’t want to spend time catching up, but I’m under some pressure. I have to take care of some urgent matters. I’m not sure breakfast—”

“Oh, hush! You came here for a reason, didn’t you? Who’s this with you? Shouldn’t you make introductions?” Rellia waved away his objection and turned to stare openly at Arona.

Before she could say something too blunt—speculation about his current love life, for instance—he cleared his throat and gestured to Arona. “Rellia ap’Yensha, may I introduce Arona Moonshadow? She’s an advisor and close friend.”

“Oh! How delightful!” Rellia took Arona’s hand and asked, “From whence do you hail? One of the worlds I’ve heard so much about? Sojourn, perhaps?”

Arona’s smile was an easy match for Rellia’s as she performed a delicate curtsey, lifting her blue, silken robes gracefully. “My Lady Rellia, I’m very pleased to make your acquaintance. Most recently, I’ve made my home on Ruhn, but yes, I did live in Sojourn for a time. I would hardly call it my origin, though; there were half a dozen before that—worlds that I helped to conquer, many of which I was quite fond of and where I spent years of my life.”

“Oh! Then I am honored to host such a world-wise guest for breakfast.” Rellia turned to Victor. “Come, Victor, don’t be a spoilsport. If you have something to discuss with me, can’t we do so over a meal? Valla is—”

“Here,” Valla said from an arched opening off to the side of the table. Victor had seen the movement, of course, but he’d assumed it was one of the kitchen staff bringing more food. He looked at her, and his heartbeat slowed to a near stop as something in his gut fluttered uneasily. He felt his mouth go dry, and his hands begin to perspire. Some part of his mind laughed, amused that he could be so shaken by her mere presence when a hundred thousand raving enemies only made him eager to fight.

“Valla,” he croaked, and she smiled, stepping into the dining room.

“Hello, Victor.” She was as beautiful as ever—tall, elegant, dressed in a pale blue silken gown that highlighted the faint tint of her skin and the teal in her eyes, hair, and the silvery wings that rose above her shoulders. She looked past him, and her smile broadened as she inclined her head. “Arona. You look different than I remember.”

Arona folded her arm over her stomach and bowed slightly. “I’ve gone through much, but my recovery is nearly complete.”

Valla nodded. “So interesting. I wonder how you came to be with Victor. Last I heard you’d suffered a terrible fate in the Iron Prison.” She shrugged, sighing almost wistfully. “Ah well. No matter.” She walked around the table to the chair that would be on the left of Rellia’s seat at the head of the table. “Shall we enjoy some breakfast? I’d love to catch up.”

“A lovely Idea—” Rellia started to say, but Victor brushed past her, moving around the table to stand before Valla.

He held his arms wide, indicating he wanted to hug. “I’m damn glad to see you, Valla. You look amazing.”

Some of the stilted frostiness melted on her face, and she smiled more naturally, leaning into him and squeezing him around the ribs. It felt good. It felt like coming home, but Victor knew there was a gulf between them that a simple hug wouldn’t banish. Their time apart, their months without communicating, had built that chasm, and though Valla had promised that they’d find each other and their love again, it was clear that it might not be so easy, nor so soon as she might have wanted.

Even knowing all that, Victor savored the familiarity of her embrace—the scent of her, the feel of her arms in the same old spots under his ribs, the way her fingertips lightly caressed the muscles near his spine. “I missed you,” he said through a throat thick with emotion.

“And I you,” she replied, and he could hear the hitch in her voice. That was when she yelped and pulled her head away from his chest—she had a circular wound above her temple, and as he watched, blood began to stream down the side of her face.

“Damn it!” Victor hissed, reaching up to cup his hand over his chest where his void curse had eaten away his shirt. “I’m sorry, Valla! Do you have—”

She’d already summoned a jar of healing ointment and rubbed it on the spot. “Do you have some sort of armor—a ward? Did it try to defend you?”

“What happened?” Rellia charged around the table, peering at the blood on Valla’s face. Her wound was already healed, but the evidence remained.

Victor sighed, shaking his head. “It’s nothing—an unintended effect of a small problem I’m dealing with. I’m sorry about that, Valla. I forgot about it for a moment.”

Rellia wasn’t so easy to deflect. “Why didn’t I get hurt when I hugged you?”

Victor chuckled, still holding his hand over his chest. “Because you didn’t fold into me the same way. You rested your head here.” Victor moved his hand toward his shoulder. “Anyway, I’m sorry, Valla. Excuse me, please, everyone, while I step out to change my shirt.” They objected, asked more questions, and even tried to follow him, but he turned and growled, “Really, it’s nothing! Give me a moment’s peace, please.”

As he slipped out the side passage to the kitchens, he heard Arona clear her throat and say, “Lady Valla, I’ve heard about your adventures among ancient and powerful leviathans. How are your studies progressing?”

Victor stepped around a dim corridor, looked left and right to ensure no servants were approaching, and summoned a new shirt. He sent his damaged one into storage. He’d take it out later to allow the self-repairing magic to work. Frowning, irritated, he shrugged into the clean, undamaged one. Sighing, feeling a little embarrassed, he returned to the dining room, trying to maintain a pleasant expression.

“…have already taught me much, but they insist on me applying their lessons, spending some time synthesizing the new knowledge. So, I’ve come home to relax and allow my mind a chance to unpack everything.” Valla and the others were already seated, and Victor noted they left him an open seat to Rellia’s right.

He walked around the table, passed behind Valla and Rellia, and sat down. Arona, who was to his right, said, “I’m fascinated by great primordial beings. I wonder if you might pass a message on to your mentor—”

Valla shook her head, lifting a hand to interrupt. “I’m sorry, Arona, but the Booraghi are very proud of their isolation; I was warned not to try to use my connection to Oomah, my mentor, to gain favors for any outsiders.”

Arona smiled and inclined her head in a stately nod. “No need to apologize; I understand.”

“Well—” Rellia dismissed the topic. “—I’m pleased to see you’ve returned, Victor, and that the unpleasant scowl has faded from those handsome features.”

He sighed, shaking his head as he chuckled good-naturedly. “Sorry, Rellia, if I snapped at you.” He looked at Valla. “And I’m sorry I hurt you.”

She smiled, sipping from a glass of juice. “It was nothing. Is there nothing we can do to help you with your…small problem?”

“Nah.” Victor picked up his own glass of juice and swallowed it down in three large gulps. “It’s nothing.”

“Thirsty!” Rellia chuckled. She snapped her fingers, and one of her staff scurried over to fill Victor’s glass. “So, Victor, while our food is served, tell me what you must speak to me about before running off again?”

Victor shifted in his seat, glancing at Arona, then at Valla. He didn’t want to do things this way. Did he want an audience while he tried to bargain with Rellia? Regardless of what he wanted, he had to get it done, so he shrugged and spoke bluntly, “I want to buy the volcano from you. I want to add it to my holdings here in the Free Marches.”

“Mount Ember?” Rellia sounded genuinely surprised.

Victor, too, was caught off guard. “Oh, you named it?”

“We named it shortly after you departed for Sojourn. It held the portal to Dark Ember, and we reasoned that the volcano's fires destroyed the portal, so we took ownership of the name. No longer “dark,” the mountain and its caldera are now known as Ember.”

Victor nodded, tilting his head as he pursed his lips, thinking it over. “Seems fitting.”

“So you wish to purchase an entire mountain, hmm? Seems a strange thing to do for a man who’s off fighting to conquer other worlds.”

Victor shrugged, taking a more measured sip from his glass. “I have my reasons.”

“Mother, you should just give it to him if he needs it.” As Valla spoke, Victor smiled at her, and Rellia turned to glare.

“Perhaps I was unwise to ask you to bring your business to the breakfast table, Victor.”

Valla only ignored her, leaning back to make room for a servant who set a plate of steaming food before her. Everyone was served, and Victor took a bite of some sort of sausage hash, savoring the spicy, fatty mix before he said, “Rellia, name a price you feel is fair. I’m not here to try to coax charity from you.”

Rellia chuckled and delicately wiped her mouth with a linen napkin. “I’ve been making deals for a good long while, Victor. You’re the one who wants something. You make an offer.”

Victor shrugged. “Fine. A million Energy beads.”

“A million Energy beads? For the greatest mountain in the Free Marches and, I’m assuming, its foothills? Why, that must be more than two hundred thousand acres. You think I should sell you my territory for five beads an acre?”

Victor sighed. “Well, how much are you selling your territory for these days?” He tapped his fork on his plate while he thought, knowing Rellia wouldn’t answer the question. “You gave away homesteads larger than that for favors some of your noble friends owed you back in the Empire. I’m not asking for such generosity, but perhaps a little consideration of our long-standing partnership would be nice.” When she only stared at him, he grunted, “Fifty million, then.”

Fifty million?” Rellia arched an eyebrow. “Quite a sum to receive all at once. Still, for so many acres…”

“It’s not like we’re talking about prime farmland, Rellia. Those lands are home to rocky crags, boulder-covered hills, and twisted, gnarled thorn-woods. The caldera is useless to you; who would build on the site of such a calamitous event? Would you even dare mine those slopes? What if the spirit in that mountain took offense? I’ll sweeten the deal by promising to keep the volcano quiet—the Free Marches need never fear another eruption.”

“Sounds very fair,” Valla said, clearing her throat and wiping her mouth with her napkin.

“Why?” Rellia asked, ignoring her, staring at Victor with her big, bright, crimson eyes. “Can’t you tell me?”

Victor smiled. He had her. It was just a matter of making her feel like she was getting away with something now. “I’ll tell you, but then the deal will change: the fifty million will be off the table. This knowledge has value beyond anything I can pay you. Are you sure you want to hear it?” He glanced at Arona, wondering if she wanted to add something—anything—to aid his negotiations, but she held her face passive as she took dainty bites of her breakfast.

“You sneaky barbarian,” Rellia chuckled. “You bait me with an exorbitant offer and then tell me the knowledge is worth more?” She cursed, some phrase that the System didn’t interpret, clenching her fist momentarily. While Victor stared at her, she relaxed her hand and drummed her manicured, pointed nails on the arm of her chair. “Fine. Tell me what it is!”

Victor grinned, leaning forward. “I intend to rebuild the citadels guarding the road—the bridge, too. I’ll rebuild the road and clean out the caldera, constructing a mighty keep there.”

“But why? Do you fear another invasion?”

Victor held up a finger, indicating he wasn’t finished. “Beneath the keep, I’m going to clear a chamber down in the heart of the mountain, and in that chamber, I’m going to plant the Core of a tier-nine dungeon.”

“Tier nine?” Rellia gasped. “Surely monsters will break free! How can we hope to contain—”

“It’s a type of dungeon the System labels ‘progressive.’ It will create challenges suitable for anyone who enters, and each time they succeed, it will increase the difficulty. The fact that it’s tier-nine only means that it can create challenges suitable for pretty much any iron ranker. Rellia, once the road is rebuilt and the keep is constructed, we can staff it with caretakers who charge entry fees to would-be dungeon challengers. What would you pay to enter a dungeon tailored to you, especially knowing you may gain a handful of levels with each entry?”

Rellia’s eyes unfocused as she stared into space. Her mouth opened and closed several times before saying, “A fortune.”

“So—” Victor reached over and grasped her wrist, so she looked at him. “—you give me that mountain, and I’ll give you a pair of treasures along with a partnership—fifty-fifty—in the operation of the dungeon.”

“Why must you own the mountain?”

“I think it’s important for me to own the land where I plant the dungeon. I want to be ultimately responsible for it and what happens with it. More than that, I have a certain kinship with that mountain. I should have argued for it when we first divvied up the Free Marches, but the past is merely a lesson, not something I hope to revisit.”

“By the ancestors, Victor! You’ve changed.” Rellia glanced at Valla, perhaps hoping she’d validate her statement, but Valla only smiled softly, staring at her plate as she pushed around some bits of lemon-dressed greens with her fork.

Rellia turned back to Victor. “How often can the dungeon create a pocket realm?”

“Lower-tier ones? Dozens or hundreds a day. As for tier nine, I’m not sure. I’ll have to test it.”

“And something like tier-six?”

Victor knew what she was thinking—how often could she use it, and how many times could she charge the other powerful people on Fanwath to use it? He smiled and shrugged. “Probably a few a day. I’ll have to test it. The dungeon used to be in a more Energy-rich world than this one, but that’s another reason I want to put it in the volcano.”

“Ah! The Energy! If the dungeon feeds off it, it will keep the mountain calm.” She frowned, again staring into space, and Victor could imagine her brain was desperately crunching numbers. Had she made a mistake asking for the knowledge rather than taking his initial offer of fifty million beads? He decided to try to help her understand how much better this new offer was.

“Rellia, when you climb into tier six or seven, you’ll learn that access to a dungeon like this is worth every bit of your wealth. There are iron rankers in Sojourn who would give away everything they own to learn from a certain master or gain a few levels in tier nine. Trust me, it’s better for you to have access to this dungeon than a few million beads. Over time, you’ll earn more, anyhow. Besides, I’m going to give you these.” Victor reached into his storage container and removed one of the treasures he’d chosen for her.

He set before her a swirling orb of inky black shadows—an Energy heart attuned to shadow, which was Rellia’s primary affinity. Next, he piled his old Sojourn armor set at the center of the table: the helm, the gauntlet, the belt, the greaves, and the boots. “I’ve removed my bond with each of these magical items. It’s a powerful armor set that will make you absurdly strong for your level. Moreover, the set will help you resist the primary aspect that the dungeon will use for its environments: fire.”

Rellia stared at the shadowy orb for several long moments. Victor looked at Valla, and she met his gaze with a small smile and a surreptitious nod; she thought Rellia would take the deal. Victor loved seeing her face, loved that they were getting along. He wasn’t sure she didn’t harbor some resentment about his time with Tes. Valla hadn’t brought her up, but she’d certainly been a little cold before Victor hugged her. He decided he ought to try to speak to her a bit alone before he and Arona left.

Rellia interrupted his thoughts. “Very well, Victor. I accept. I’ll have my people draft up the deed and the business agreement. I assume you’ll want me to manage the dungeon access while you’re off-world?”

“Oh, I think we can both find managers from our communities. I’m happy to have you oversee them, though.” Victor smiled and held out his hand. “A handshake will do for now; I’ll let Gorro sign the documents in my stead.”

Rellia’s eyes widened. “You can’t wait?”

Victor shook his head. “I wasn’t lying when I said I’m under a lot of pressure.” He shrugged. “It’s nothing personal—time isn’t on my side.”

Rellia looked at him searchingly. She licked her lips and darted her eyes toward Valla. “Surely you can spare a moment to speak with Valla alone—”

“Mother, please—” Valla started to object, but Victor spoke over her.

“Yeah, of course I can. Valla? Will you walk with me for a few minutes before I leave?”

She nodded, placing her napkin on the table and pushing her chair back. “I would like that, Victor.”

Comments

I hope we get to see Victor make good on his promises to test out the dungeon, or at least delegate the responsibility to someone capable. Now that Rellia has his old armor set, she would be ideal to challenge it at some level. Since the challenge the dungeon provides is progressive, I think he'll need multiple teams to test it at all the applicable levels, unless Du just wants to spill the beans on all the secrets to Victor just because.

Chris

It depends on the take from fees for accessing the dungeon I mean if it's going to make 100,000 beads a year, good deal If it's gonna make 10m, not so good a deal, you know? But might be a good deal just to keep rellia happy with him, it's not like he cares that much about money

Samuel Jennings

Would be funny if he just sharpened a pencil on his chest using the void and left it at that.

IndyBart

Desperately hope this is wrong 🥲

Omar Jimenez

Never. Tes is like that girl you crush on during summer vacation. All they’ve got is a fascination with each other and, “wouldn’t it be great if…” Valla is best girl.

Omar Jimenez

Lol Fine Fine. Love ya too bro!

RonGAR

Plum has set it on this path so it doesn't really matter he already gave away what he gave away but Victor is already helping these people by placing it on Fanwath in the Free Marches and not back in his Duchy somewhere. Why not at least do your future self a favor and bargin (and I use bargin loosely because of course they all know they are very lucky such a Dungeon can be placed nearby Reilla should accept basically anything) for the majority of it's monetary value. That's still a positive-sum scenario for everyone involved. Anyway good chapter still i like this new development at least in that Victor grow stronger with the Dungeon placed.

Shawn

Ron, I love ya, man. Give Victor a little slack. You haven't heard his conversation with Valla yet.

Plum Parrot

Right... because he's a big 'Man's Man!" A chest-beating ape. SMH. Bro. It doesn't matter if they could help or not. They care about him, and he thinks coming to broker a deal to set up a dungeon is more important than explaining the life-and-death circumstances he is currently in. Tell me, Are they going to be more upset if they find out now or after the fact? We (you and me) all know he is not going to die due to the amount of 'plot armor' he has on, but the rest of the ppl who care don't. This could be the last time he sees them; all he is talking about is business and how much of a rush he is to leave again. SMH.

RonGAR

I look at Victor as more interested in building friends and allies. He does that by helping people, giving them gifts, and making lopsided deals. He wants the intangibles. Not consciously as a tactic but a result of who he is.

David H

He doesn't want a bunch of people trying to "help" him when he knows they can't. Telling them about his curse would only prolong the delay.

Plum Parrot

Dude just explain you have a black hole eating its way towards your heart, so that they understand the urgency, instead of being an aloof moron, whose acting like he can't spare 5 more mins.

RonGAR

I'd just like to see Victor not be shortsighted for once. Use some of what Dar has taught him in terms of dealing with people.

Shawn

I agree that wouldn't be very Victor-like but the chapter is titled"Bargining" not "Make two offers and immediately accept a lopside deal". It isn't hard to recognize the value of what you have. They both agreed it will make her a fortune they talk about it. You don't need to nickel and dime to make good deals. 10% 20% but 50% wild.

Shawn

No! Him and Tess, Titan and Dragon!

Dylan Alexander

It’s nothing, just something that might kill me.

Dylan Alexander

I thought about this argument a lot. Thank you. You make good points, but I think underneath everything, Victor just isn't interested in bargaining. Yeah he might be making a mistake for the future of the people he's responsible for, but right now he's dealing with his curse and he's got valla on his mind. To him, he unloaded some junk, and got rellia as a partner. He's fine with that.

Plum Parrot

Is that Victor though?

Tijay Arnie

He said at the beginning, he wasn't looking to nickel and dime

Tijay Arnie

I mean, obviously Plum wouldn't write that kind of silly drama.. but still.

Reno

Victor never confirmed that the curse isn't contagious. Considering its nature, I would have assumed that it would split and infect any other soul it touched... Given that, it's very odd that he didn't pay more attention to his hugs. When he hugged Relia, I thought "you idiot, her will is nowhere near yours."

Reno

That's fair if he only had to care about himself I think I'd understand more but he also has responsibilities now. His Free Marches territory, his Duchy, Cora, Arona is going to follow him around now probably need beads to help her eventually. He can't always go adventuring for resources. Auctions and such are much more efficient. Great reasons to care about beads and get the best deal he can.

Shawn

Oh I get that, It was more the natural treasures, it felt like its a "but wait, there's more" moment. Don't get me wrong, I dont think its a bad chapter, I just don't think Victor comes across as a very savvy negotiator, which fits his personality in all honesty

Disclancer

I fixed this part :) Thank you again.

Plum Parrot

Does he really need help managing it though? Victor is already under utilizing his influence in the Free Marches. Groppo, ( is that right?), his governor, could surely figure out management? I'm sure there are plenty of people who would jump at the chance help the conqueror of the Free Marches manage and defend his Dungeon.

Shawn

I changed the text to make this point more clear: The fifty million was off the table when he told her about the dungeon.

Plum Parrot

They were at least both present and speaking to the same people, but I don't think they spoke to one another, and for some reason, Victor didn't introduce them.

Daniel

🤣 Victor really is terrible at negotiating. I get that all this doesn't really mean much to him beyond using the dungeon to grind the rest of the iron ranks, but still, you're supposed to wait for the person to respond before you start uping your offer 😉

Disclancer

Yes, it's too generous, but Victor doesn't care about beads.

Plum Parrot

So instead of Rellia getting money for the mountain, she and victory will equally split the expenses to rebuild everything, man and manage it, but then also split the profits? Good deal. Might take a minute to recoup costs, but they’ve got time. A little on the nose that when Valla gets closer to Victor, she gets hurt. I do still want them together, but I get the feeling this split is going to be a little more permanent after their talk… looking forward to/dreading Thursday’s post. Wonder what Victor’s next stop will be after Fanwath?

Omar Jimenez

Oh okay. I see so a pair of treasures and a partnership. More reasonable I see. But 50-50 is still insane. Victor has the leverage. He's being too generous.

Shawn

I'll make the wording more clear.

Plum Parrot

Please read again. The 50 million went away with the offer of the knowledge.

Plum Parrot

I mean one Energy heart, his old armor, and her help managing the dungeon for 50% of the profit? He took the 50 million beads off the table.

Plum Parrot

That was offered if she DIDN'T want to know what he was doing up there. He used it as a bait.

Plum Parrot

Victor isn't giving her the beads

Plum Parrot

There probably isn't a single tier nine Dungeon anywhere else on Fanwath. Certainly not close by. Victor has all the leverage and he should use it.

Shawn

Ah my gosh! I knew I was forgetting something! I'll fix this on my main doc, ty

Plum Parrot

Read it again. He offered 50 million. She basically agreed that was more than enough then she asked to know why. Victor says he'll tell her but that knowledge has a price and that price will be a much better deal for him. She agrees again. Victor tells her and then proceeds to give her a much better deal. A completely insane deal in m opinion. I hope Plum reads this. Victor isn't this stupid or bad at negotiating and if he is Arona should say something or Valla should or lightning should strike him anything to stop him making such a lopsided deal.

Shawn

Thanks for the chapter Plum, good shit

Exaiter

I read it as 50 million beads OR the knowledge. And Rellia took the knowledge.

David H

Not just you. What the hell is Victor thinking?

Shawn

And now comes the...."so I've been thinking conversation..." or "so, I've met someone"

Greg Lambert

Still reading the chapter but the only thing I can think is Victor is giving away way too much. Literally doing the opposite of making the deal worse for her. First just 50 million bead? Great. Now, 50 Millions of beads, a 50-50 partnership, energy orbs, armor, that's ridiculous. Especially, the partnership. She'd make more bears than she's ever seen with 10% probably even 5% profit share and nothing else. Why give away so much? Its really frustrating.

Shawn

Didn’t Valla and Arona meet at Lams party at the lake house? Episode 8.25.

David H

Is it just me or did the deal get much sweeter for her once Victor revealed the deets

Samuel Jennings

ty ty

Plum Parrot

territory for five beads and acre?”. Five beads an acre?

Exaiter


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