hello yall! chapter 6 is now out along with the exclusive patreon chapter for dough divers and above, the chapter 1 revision i planned was a bit too ambitious and lore changing to the point i didn't enjoy it but i did make minor improvements on that chapter. maybe I'll try the methods of writing i tried on these two chapters cause currently the draft version I had was bad in my opinion.
However from the mistakes of that chapter revision I learned how to better write the chapters, I hope that's clear to you all!
Please enjoy felicias return
edit : fixed chapter 6